Intended Critique To Help Others Create Better OCs

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's fantroll Ixchel Psyche! Her fantroll is awesome and I love her design so why not draw some fanart? 

Coloured hair, three horns, and appears to have a mutant shade of blood. I do like the arm warmers though, and I’m guessing the colours are relevant to other characters?

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Viktor's dancestor; Karlof was gonna draw him with ghosty eyes but they made him look way too creepy o lord he's too kawaii for that

While he is a cutie I’m like 98% sure having a tail is a bad idea. Unless it’s artificial, then I think it’s pretty sweet!

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A fantroll. Кассея Вертиго.

Bright purple hair. Nope.

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it's about time i uploaded one of these. yeah.. so color scheme: gender: human/troll: blood color: other: price: 50 extras: scalemate: 10 (matching?) dancestor: 50 trickster: 40 human/trollAU: 50 Name/Trollhandle/quirk: 20 bio: 80 full sheet: 150

So this isn’t exactly trolls but they’re trying to sell colour palettes for 50 points apiece.  

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(Alright, so I keep seeing albino fantrolls everywhere and I'm in love with the way they look, so I made my own. Am I cool yet guys?? Does this make you love me?) .:Information:. Blood colour: Pale/Pastel green Looks: Short, white hair; Green tinted freckles; Mouth usually covered; Pale green eyelashes; Hoodie {Symbol isn't included in this pic}; Skirt or ripped jeans; Light horns; Dark grey eyes Age: 6.92 Solar sweeps (15 in earth years) Wriggling day: (Earth time) February 22 Strife specibus: Daggerkind Lusus: (As of right now, their lusus is not decided.) Personality: Intelligent; Stable; Creative; Kind Likes: Reading; Cosplaying; Art; Cartoons Interests: Interests include dashing space heroes, wind chimes, drawing, and stained glass art. Relationships: Matesprit- N/A Moirail- N/A Auspistice- N/A Kismesis- N/A Typing quirk: They type like thi5 S is replaced by 5 Classpect: Mage of Hope Info about classpect- A Mage of Hope suffers from a naive optimism that makes them believe and trust in a lot of things, only for a lot of those things to turn out to be false and unreliable. There will be plenty of times they will trust someone or feel safe and happy around them, but it will turn out to be a deception all along. But there will also be times when what they put faith in will not fail them, and this is how they gain knowledge of what can be truly trusted and believed in. They have an innate sense of what is authentic and real, and what is not. They can spot a true authentic anything from a mile away, because they have that experience, that trial and error, to know and understand which is which. The bases I used are by Base: magdaleen-96.deviantart.com/ar… & Base: subtly-liminal.deviantart.com/… Mspaintadventures belongs to Andrew Hussie Awhina belongs to me (I will be coming out with a reference sheet later on ) !DO NOT USE MY ART WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!

Mutaaant. Gorgeous spriting though, it’s a shame it’s on a bad troll.

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‘Friend’s God Tier Talksprite’

a bad use of the ink pen, i dash a lot with art, but a fantroll gif. This was fun to make, so in future, if anyone actually comes on here and people want me to do theirs i can do requests? If they want them? little shitty gifs of their God Tiers? idk 

Not a fantroll but still. I don’t think I need to say what’s wrong with this character.

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this adoptable is 20 points she is a rainbow drinker she has jade blood 

While I admit her outfit is cute it’s far too excessive, and probably too colourful. The wing could be explained if she has a bat lusus. The jade blood rainbow drinker thing has become very overdone in fantrolls.

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Looking for a fantroll review

I’m impressed by your art, however the design is very similar to Sollux’s with the dual and red-blue theme as well as the blood colour. However you shouldn’t give up on her, my advice would be to change the eyes and blood colour, then work from there. (Sorry, I had difficulty formatting this post.)

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so this is my oc fantroll resprited by XlillytiX RESPRITED BY XLILLYTIX DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR!!!!!??????!!!! I DON"T TAKE CREDIT FOR OTHER'S HARD WORK OK??? and i have decided to make her a seadweller with black blood

It’s hard to tell if this is a joke OC or not, but I’ll list what’s wrong with it anyway - black blood, mutant eyes, hair colour completely unrelated to character, outfit too flashy for a troll, seadweller.

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This is an adoptable character. The problems with this troll are as follows: canon symbol, similar to the design of a canon troll (Nepeta) in that she has a hat that’s almost exactly like hers. As well as that her outfit is too brightly coloured, especially as she’s quite low on the spectrum (judging by the colour of her symbol).

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will you ever bring on more people to help?

I’d consider it, but as this is a primary blog I’d have to give them my login details and that’s a lot of power for someone to have. I would bring other people in to help if I knew I could trust them - so if you’d ever want to be a mod on this blog consider messaging me so I can get to know you :)

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Sorry I was gone for so long, with only one mod it can be hard to keep up with the posting, and school’s been keeping me busy. I’ll be queuing up some more posts soon though :) Thank you~

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Sorry this blog hadn't been active, I haven't been able to use a computer in ages. I should be able to continue posting soon though, thank you for your patience.

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world: land of mushrooms and nightmares logal  strife: throwing knives [because what a carnival with out a knife thrower] she got her four face scars from Kelzul Arcaah in a battle to the death [Witch of Rage v. Thief of Doom] here are her quadrants: matespirt- gamzee moirail- dalton kismesis- nexiss/or equius

auspistice- -

((oh my god why would they even. i found this on colors3d and she already HAS FANART

even I CAN MAKE A BETTER FANTROLL THAN THAT))

Loving this character that’s almost exactly like Mr. Makara. Her name doesn’t follow the six letter rule. I am not sure if she would live past being a grub with that birthmark. Relationships with canon characters.

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apparently this is an OC and not infact troll slenderman

 (|_342|_`/ |_31618|_3, man

  Incredible. Just Slenderman with horns and yaoi hands.

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bluh i just want a critique on this

i was gonna make her a bronzeblood at first but i just figured making mutants is fun if they can hide their blood correctly 

Very good design, I like the symbol and the basic outfit! Covering herself in dust as a grub is a really good idea for disguising her blood, her lusus sounds terrifying awesome, and her horns look great! My only criticism would be that Karkat also hides bright red blood with grey and it might be seen as a ripoff, but it's not like he's the only troll on the planet hiding a mutation. I really like her :)

(Could you message me with what she wears below the waist? I want to draw her!)