The Primordials

This will be my blog about another story I'm working on.

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The Primordials:

"A villain is just a victim, whose story has yet to be told."

18+ Only.

The Primordials. A dark fantasy romance interactive novel set in Eden, a world where life is but a fleeting illusion before the eternal embrace of the void. You are the Void Primordial, the first and eldest of all creation, ruler of the empty, and the one who existed long before light pierced the darkness. For eons, you were alone. Then your siblings were born—your joy, your light, your family. Together, you shaped the tapestry of existence.

But then He was born. The first to challenge you. The first to rise against your rule. The first to strip away everything you held dear. Your siblings. Your throne. Your freedom. He took it all.

Now, all you know is cold, empty silence. A suffocating tomb. A prison carved into eternity, where time slips through your fingers like sand. You cannot breathe. You cannot move. Seconds, hours, centuries—they blur together until all that remains is the raw echo of your anguish. Why you? Why? The question festers, repeating endlessly in your fractured mind.

Until one day, something changes.

CRACK.

A sound—jarring, unfamiliar. Then another. Thump… thump… THUMP. The rhythmic pounding stirs the stillness of your confinement. It's the first noise you've heard in eons, but you don’t care where it’s coming from. All that matters is that it means one thing: freedom.

You can almost taste it. Feel it. The air beyond your prison is rich with possibility—revenge, power, and the promise of seeing Him again.

But the world outside is no longer the one you once ruled. In your absence, Eden has changed. A modern civilization sprawls above your tomb, a race of mortals—humans—oblivious to the darkness they’ve disturbed. Their curiosity has unearthed something that should have remained buried.

Now, you are free. Free to reclaim what was stolen. Free to wield the void once more. Free to exact vengeance on the one who betrayed you. But as you step into this new world, you must decide: will you rule it as the Void Primordial, reshape it into your vision of order, or perhaps find something more—something beyond the darkness?

This is your story. Your return. Your reckoning.

" Revenge sounds so mean, that's why I prefer to call it; 'Returning the Favour'. "

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FEATURES

• Play as Male OR Female

• Be straight, gay or bisexual.

• Choose your human appearance from eye colour to body build, height, skin tone, to even your hair details.

• Choose from 7 godly weapons, each corresponding to a different and unique Primordial form. Each bringing their own flavour text and special scenes.

• Choose from 3 different paths you will take as you traverse this beautiful yet foreign world.

• Romance 1 of 7 unique and memorable characters. A God who believes everyone has good in them. A broken Prince who creates walls of ice around a heart that's to kind for this world. Perhaps a beautiful succubus, who carries more pain within herself than one should ever have to? Or maybe a curious nerdy yet brave mortal, who believes where there is mystery there is adventures to be had? No? Then, perhaps a one-sided lover yearning for affection that has yet to be reciprocated. If that's not what you want? How about a friend who has been with you since before the beginning of reality itself? Or are you looking for something a little more... otherworldly? Like an earthling turned Goddess, for example?

• Have ridiculously overpowered fights with gods, monsters, beings that should not exist, to even mortals that should not wield the power they do.

• But remember, time is not on your side. For your enemies won't wait for you, now that they know you are awake once more.

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Can the MC call Astera hypocrite and deceiver

While beating the shit out of her

And I imagine going like this

Mc: let me ask you something Astera if you're the goddess of justice and light why didn't you rebel against your brother when he defiled my sister wasn't she your friend wasn't she innocent but you let it happen didn't you claim you will protect innocent tell me Astera what's the meaning of justice because last time I checked justice came to those who committed crimes not this fucked up Virgin you have because in the name of everything holy was it justification with my imprisonment

Astera: was about to reply but she got caught off by tht MC

Mc: because you are fucking a hypocrite and the deceiver the reason why you are hypocrite because you never lifted a fucking finger when my sister got raped by your fucking brother and you and your brother in prison me for just keeping everyone at bay instead of being happy for that you could not stand it because how dare I the void dare to keep anyone in check instead of you and do you remember the first time you decided to interact with me when you asked for help and I was willing to help you so tell me what happened to my good deed I was in prison and my sister was raped by your brother so tell how many people got hurt by your actions was that justifiable was everything that happened in this millennials justifiable because from I see it you replaced me with a Tyrant

And how will she react to this

Hi Anon this is pretty good 😍.

And yes the MC will be able to leave a few words and mop the floor with Astera.

She'd also most likely be scared by the MC to the point of fainting from fear.

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Astera what was her reaction her brother when he force the MC sister to marry him

Hi Anon thanks for the ask 😊

Astera, the Primordial of Light, stood as a silent witness to her brother’s cruelty—first when Christos, the Primordial of Space, defiled Althaia, and again when he forced her into a hollow union. The emotions that churned within her were as vast and consuming as the cosmos they governed: pity, shame, and a regret so deep it bordered on despair.

But above all, there was disgust—not for Althaia, but for Christos himself, for his tyrannical oppression, his insatiable greed that stretched as boundless as the void between stars. He took what was not his, not out of love or necessity, but because he could, because the absence of Death and the sealing of Void had left no one strong enough to oppose him.

And yet, Astera’s guilt ran deeper than mere anger. She knew, with crushing certainty, that she had helped pave the way for this suffering. Her inaction, her silence—they were as damning as if she had committed the act herself. She had stood by, paralyzed by fear of her brother’s wrath and shame for her own cowardice, while Althaia endured torment after torment.

Light was meant to illuminate, to reveal truth—but Astera had allowed evil to thrive. Now, all that remained was the bitter knowledge that she, too, was culpable. Not by blade or force, but by the most damning crime of the divine: complicity. So yeah...

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So I would like to know if there a way to separate the power of a primordial? Just because I think that maybe we can do a cosmic disaster if we kill Christos and because I feel like it will be better vengeance make him powerless.

Hi Anon to answer that...

The Nature of Primordials: The Untouchable Foundations of Existence

It is not entirely impossible to strip a Primordial of its power—but such an act would require rewriting the very fabric of reality itself. The Seven Primordials (Void, Time, Life, Death, Space, Darkness, and Light) are not mere deities; they are the fundamental pillars of existence, born from the infinite nothingness that predated creation. Reality shaped them as its architects, tasked with forging and maintaining the cosmic order.

Unlike lesser gods or mortals, Primordials are the laws they embody. Void is not merely a being of emptiness—they are the absence that defines existence. Time is not just a force—he is the flow of causality itself. To extract their essence would not simply weaken them—it would unravel the universe. Hypothetically, if one possessed the power to rewrite reality on a primordial scale, they could theoretically reduce a Primordial to mortality. But such an act would demand more than mere divine strength—it would require transcending the very framework of creation, something even most gods cannot fathom.

This is why the Void Primordial, despite being sealed, remains an indomitable force. Their power is not just its own—it is woven into the foundation of all things. To destroy or truly diminish a Primordial would be to tear apart existence itself, leaving only chaos in its wake. That's why Christos didn't kill or steal their powers, only sealed the MC.

So unfortunately it's not possible revenge route. But we can definitely seal and torture Christos.

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Hey dear author! I have to say you have some really bloody amazing story ideas you’ve developed! All your MC’s seem so OP and badass! You really are a creative genius for your ideas!

For the Primordials story, I love the whole idea of the MC finally being free after a shit ton of eons and going full nuclear destruction on everyone and everything in their path for revenge.

I have to ask, but you don’t have to answer at all if it’s spoilers or you don’t want to, but just how much destruction can MC do?

I get that we can’t go full scorched earth immediately or otherwise there’s no plot nor character development, but I feel like MC should have absolutely 0 attachments to anything currently existing so it’d make sense to me at least that MC would be fine destroying it all since their bastard siblings created it.

I feel like if Althaia stands in MC’s way, then former beloved sister or not, she goes on MC’s shit list too. She can’t think MC isn’t going to not destroy everyone and everything, with Christos and Astera dead on top of all the ash. The goes for all the other characters.

Do the others understand that MC will be coming for their heads on a pike if they get in the way?

Sorry for the ramble! This is fucking cool and you should know it! Thank you in advance for taking the time to read this! You’re awesome!

Hi @leophoenix12

Oh, Gosh! Stop it you're making me blush. ☺️ Thanks for the compliments and praise. They really make my day. I'm glad you like my ideas. And I hope they live up to their expectations.

Questions now.

How much destruction can the MC cause?

The short answer is... a lot. The MC will be able to destroy an entire city(optional), a universe(Super crazy fight scene) and a few planets(final battle). And killing a few gods in their domains(optional) which will be some breakneck battles.

Do the others know they most likely will die if they stand in the MC's way?

Well that will depend since the MC is ignorant to what actually happened to their siblings after their sealing so that will factor in later. But yes you can put them on your shit list siblings and your nephews and nieces. But then again fighting multiple Primes plus gods would still be challenging for the MC, but don't worry yall have the choice at the end of the day to butt-heads or not on your revenge route. And yes many do realise that you might be on a war path, so they might just hide. 💁‍♂️

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"Hi. I was wondering about the creation process of the Old and New Gods and why they only appeared after the MC was sealed.

Interestingly, Astera and Ravyn developed an obsession with the Void Primordial, each in their own way. Could the concept of Light and Darkness, in relation to the Void, be one of the factors that influenced their attitudes?"

Hi @chocottone answers below.

(Unfinished Family Tree(to many children), but you get the idea anyway.)

The Origins of the Gods: A Divine Lineage

After the Void Primordial was sealed away and Death was cast into the Shade (Underworld), the cosmic balance shifted—leaving Althaia vulnerable. Seizing this opportunity, Christos, the last remaining Primordial, defiled her, an act born not of love but more of dominance in the absence of her protectors. 

From this violation came the Second Generation of Gods, the divine offspring of Christos and Althaia. And unlike mortals, gods are beings of pure energy, transcending mortal biology. Thus, while their lineage may seem incestuous by human standards, divine reproduction operates beyond such constraints. Gods do not rely on DNA or conventional reproduction—their children can be willed into existence, forged from cosmic essence, or even born from abstract concepts. 

The Third Generation of Gods then emerged from the unions (or creations) of the Second Generation, continuing the celestial bloodline. This pattern mirrors many real-world mythologies, where gods often intermarry or self-generate successors, reinforcing their otherworldly nature. 

In the end, divinity is not bound by mortal taboos. The gods exist beyond flesh, beyond blood—shaped by power, fate, and the echoes of their Primordial origins.  And that is how the gods came to be after the MC went bye-bye.

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As for the obsession for the Void from our Twins, yes, I used their concepts as factors for their desire and hate towards the MC since it was both poetic and cosmic. Especially as they repel and attract one another whether they want to or not.

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Those songs are fire🔥 i cant wait for my Primordial Goddess to wake up and get revenge and perhaps romance a certain succubus or maybe a summond hero turned goddess😘

Now onto my question will the MCs gender have any affect of how people view them? specifically the mortals and lesser gods since they have never met the MC?

Hi Anon thanks for the compliment, not a huge fan of AI, but if it's your own art(since it was my lyrics) it can be very helpful and extremely nice to use. Especially as it brought them lyrics to life. Anyway glad you enjoyed em.

Moving on, glad you have your eye on our two lost souls they definitely need some love. And revenge is always great especially when you can smack your enemies to death, lol.

As for the gender thing, yes. If you are female or male it will have quite the impact more so towards mortals than the gods. That's why I had to cut the Non-Binary(sorry everyone who prefered this gender 🙇‍♂️), so the gender would be more impactful, because it will be easier for me to track 2 variables than 3. Since I want personality, PC choices AND gender to have an impact story wise, so it's more vibrant and easier to combine(?)/become one with your character. Because I see IF games as an escape from reality, so writing my stories takes longer, because one I want the characters and PC to feel alive but also take you away from reality. And two I want a fleshed yet impactful story.(Also motivation and work, and having time play apart in my writing😅)

On that note, chapter 1 of The Primordial is done, it'd just needs coding and etc. But I'm chugging along hopefully this and my other IFs get those demo's before I'm dead 😂. (But the moment I get enough time and save enough money(exchange rate ain't kind to my country's currency 🥲) and hire a coder I promise to throw them demo's out.)

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Do ROs have a romantic experience? And what about the sexual experience?

Hi anon, to answer your questions;

Arum, does have romantic experience and sexual experience as he has had a few lovers, but none ever felt right, or were just casual interest; Rating: 9/10 on romance/ And been with 6 sexual partners.

Samuel, has no romantic or sexual experience as he is shunned by most mortels that know his name and heritage. But he is also cold to those who have offered to be with him; Rating: 0/10 on romance experience/ And still a virgin in all 3 sectors.

Cliodhna, well... not much to say... she's a succubus 🙈🙉🙊. She has quite a lot of romantic experience due to her late-husband who won her heart, and a lot of sexual experience due to her nature and species. But after her husband's death she has been single(and stayed away from the sex too, but understandable), tho has flirted and bewitched many even after his death; Rating: 10/10 on romance/ And sexual partners 🤔 more than a hundred 💯 😳. (And incase that scares you, just know a succubus can make themselves a virgin again as they are the manipulators and masters of lust).

April, has had one boyfriend while younger as mearly an experiment to see what all the fuss was about when it came to love and sex. It didn't last long; Rating: 3/10 on romance/ And she has had 1 sexual partner and only done the deed once. She didn't find it very thrilling as many described it.(I wonder who's fault that was... he must've been a 2 minute guy😅)

Ren, well she's a special case, she had a crush on a boy back on earth, he came with her to Eden becoming a hero too but ended up crushing her feelings by trying to have a threeway even when she told him she liked him and wasn't into poly or harem crap.(dude must've thought he was the protagonist). Anyway eversince that and with her time spent wondering our world of Eden, Ren fell in love with a common girl, unfortunately she only swung straight, and poor Ren got burnt in the most embarrassing way.(poor girl can't catch a break, that author should burn on a stake.); Rating: 1/10 romance/ And still a virgin, tho not lip wise that shit got sold off twice.

Ravyn, has zero romance or sexual experience poor girl is so attached to our PC, she got eyes for no one else. And i mean zero she comes off maybe creepy/stalker vibe especially around PC; Rating 0/10 on romance/ Complete virgin(oldest till date, unless we count your PC too), tho she has been collecting sexual knowledge by watching mortels over the eons.

Invar, is also on the inexperienced scale, tho only sexually. Invar has dated a few gods and mortels but none ever worked out, due to him being omniscient(and no his omniscient power doesn't work on the Primordials only gods and lower, but he can glimpse a Primordial's future) and seeing the whole relationship from beginning to end, he did try but it just never felt real.; Rating: 6/10 on romance/ And has no physical sexual experience only what he has seen, felt and read.

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Here is a song I wrote(during one of my inspiration spats), and used AI to play it or give it a Voice if you will. There are two versions an electro rock, and just rock ver.

Enjoy

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I have a question to ask you. Is there a stats for stubborn vs submissive?

Hi Anon, unfortunately no. There is a shy/bold option which is similar. I didn't use those as there are 14 traits already, and any more would make it hard for flavour text, and impact from the personalities. And lastly the Void Primordial wouldn't have have a submissive personality considering their standing as the eldest and most powerful being to have existed.

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Are there any personality stats and traits in this game?

Hi Anon. 👋

You can find how I'm going do the stat screen here

And there will be 7 personality categories that will add flavour text to your story.

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What is the nature of the prison or tomb where the main character has been kept?

Hi Anon thanks for the ask.

The prison/tomb the MC was kept in was called the Ever-Ice also known as Primordial Frost this was in a sense the first concept and actualization of cold given form. There were many Primordial elements born when the MC came into existence but only 6 other elements or concepts actually came to life aka becoming the Original Gods. But enough background, the nature of the Ever-Ice is that since it is the first concept of cold, ice and freezing. Anything that touched it would be frozen. And it has the the ability to freeze anything, that is why the MC had to be lead to a certain location for Christos to be able to use the Ever-Ice. So essentially it's the perfect cryo-chamber if you will.

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Hi. Compared to the Primordials, where would you rank Eoghan? And what was Reality like when MC ruled, since when Christos froze him in the Primordial Ever-Ice, Eden didn't exist, so how did he get sealed on the planet?

Hi Anon thanks for the ask!

Onto your question.... hmmm Definitely on par with Primordials, so considering this I'd say he's probably in the tight spot for Rank 2 just after the MC. But DEFINITELY the MC's punching bag once they get juiced up to max again.

How was reality like.... can't exactly spoil to much since there's gonna be small segment pertaining to describing that to a RO. So all I'll say is it puts Valhalla and Heaven to shame with it's beauty and design.

AS for Christos sealing MC in the Ever-Ice he kept the MC in a small pocket dimension of his making. And carried it around in an earing. Till he got annoyed carrying the MC around everywhere. So once a nice spot came to be where he could burry his problems. He did.

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Added some new art that I feel brings a better visual representation to the characters ✨️

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Here is a Snippet. Enjoy:

Spoiler read at own discretion

In the annals of myth and legend, whispered only in the most sacred of prophecies, there existed a being of unfathomable power—the Void Primordial. A force beyond mortal comprehension, they had been imprisoned since the dawn of time, entombed within a cosmic prison of impenetrable darkness and eternal ice.

For aeons, their name had been little more than a hushed warning, a cautionary tale passed through generations. But the Weeping Lady of the Night had foreseen their return—had prophesied the day when the prison’s chains would shatter, when the Void Primordial would rise once more, and the fabric of reality itself would tremble beneath their might.

That day had come.

April snapped from her thoughts, her breath hitching in the frigid air as she gazed at the final crystal seal in her trembling hands. The weight of the moment pressed down upon her, heavier than the glaciers that surrounded her. Months of study, of perilous journeys across treacherous lands, had led to this moment. Every fragment of forgotten scripture, every puzzle solved, had brought her here—to the precipice of something both magnificent and terrible. Her heart pounded. Not from doubt, but from reverence. With a steadying breath, she tightened her grip and shattered the crystal.

The sound was deafening.

A thunderous crack split the silence, a roar so immense it seemed to shake the bones of the earth itself. The cavernous prison trembled, its ancient walls fracturing as if reality could no longer contain the force within. Cracks spread like veins of lightning across the ice, an intricate web of destruction unfolding in an instant. Then, with an earth-shattering boom, the prison collapsed. A maelstrom of ice and shadow erupted into the sky, spiraling outward in a violent storm. The very air quivered with anticipation, thick with an energy so dense it felt as though time itself had stilled. And from the depths of the shattered tomb, the Primordial emerged.

They did not simply step forward—they unfolded.

(His/Her) form was a paradox, both corporeal and ethereal, shifting between states of existence as though the laws of the universe held no dominion over (him/her). Darkness clung to (his/her) colossal frame, writhing and twisting like a sentient void, devouring the light that dared to touch (him/her). (His/her) eyes, twin stars of cold, unnatural radiance, burned with an intelligence that was as ancient as creation itself.

With every movement, the world shuddered.

The onlookers—whether brave or foolish—could do nothing but stare. Awe and terror wove together in their expressions, their minds unable to fully comprehend the being before them. It was power given form. It was the end of one age, and the dawn of something unfathomable.

Then, the Primordial raised (his/her) hand.

A pulse of energy rippled outward, warping the air itself. And then, without warning, (he/she) unleashed (his/her) power.

A blinding beam of raw, unfiltered energy erupted from (his/her) core, a column of light so intense it threatened to unravel the sky itself. It tore through the heavens, a celestial lance of chaotic brilliance. Colors beyond mortal perception swirled within the beam—fiery reds that burned like the heart of a dying star, iridescent blues that whispered of cosmic abysses, and purples so deep they seemed to stretch beyond infinity. The very cosmos seemed to shudder in response. The beam ascended, transcending the mortal realm, piercing the boundaries of existence itself. The heavens realigned, stars shifting in solemn recognition, as if the universe itself bore witness to the return of something older than time.

And then, as suddenly as it had come, the light began to fade.

The colors dimmed, the sky returned to its natural state, and the oppressive weight of the moment settled over the world. Yet the truth remained unshaken—the Void Primordial had awoken. And with (his/her) awakening, nothing would ever be the same again.

For those who had witnessed (his/her) return, the image would be seared into their souls—a moment of terrible majesty, a glimpse of something beyond mortal comprehension. A reminder that the ancient forces of the cosmos were not bound by time nor by fate. As the last remnants of the beam dissolved into the heavens, the Primordial stood tall, (his/her) presence a silent proclamation of dominion. The world had been irrevocably changed.

And (his/her) reckoning had only just begun.

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Wait, do you have a forum?

Hi Anon. Thanks for the ask ☺️

Unfortunately no not yet. As this still in the early stages and me and my brother are busy with My Beginning & My End. (Which has officially begun it's coding for the demo.) And will be launched in late January. I'm only scrapping by on this story for now. (And this and my other WIP with what little free time I get.) But I hope to get a demo out by maybe June/July next year. [Fingers crossed🤞]

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Literally wow. Bloody hell, it's been a while since I've read a plot that makes my blood boil and revenge taste damn sweet 🤣

By the Gods, no doubt this is going to be a really, really wild ride.

Also, is there an option to let MC just go super ruthless that they'd bring the world to the brink of destruction (but not really destroy everything) just to get the defeated Primordials and gods beg on their knees 👀 (for research purposes)

Hi Anon thanks for the ask & praise?...

Glad it got your blood and desire for revenge going, means I'm on the right path then 😅😋

So to answer your question. Yes, that would be The Living Calamity Path. As that is the full blown anger management, slightly psycho route. Since there are two split endings for each of the 3 unique paths. The win and the loss for your MC endings.

Here is a bit more info on the paths.