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Pick a country. Write about a mythical animal from there.

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Monday Prompt
Pick a country. Write about a mythical animal from there.
Monday Prompt
Write a scene/poem/short story including one of a combo of the following words: athletic, calm, beguile, madly, repulsive
Monday Prompt
Write about something white or blue.
Weekly Update
12/29
I’m a day late, but here’s my update for the week anyway. I’ve been working a lot (and getting a lot done!) on draft 1 of #vtmystery2. I’m about halfway in and kind of behind on where I wanted to be plot-wise by now, but things are kind of starting to come together. I gave part 1 of it to M and my other beta, and they both gave me some good feedback. M still hates the love interest but that’s okay.
-Bella
Monday Prompt
Pick a country in the opposite hemisphere as you- if you’re in the North, pick one from the South. If you’re in the East, pick one in the West. Write about a mythical animal from there.
Getting #Rejected
HOW TO DEAL WITH REJECTION
The reason you’re reading this post is that your manuscript’s been rejected. Not by any agents or publishers or nameless, faceless people in the industry that you can just accept blank apathy from and move on. Their loss. There are plenty of posts on that type of rejection. I’ll write one at some point.
But not today.
No, today’s post is about when your manuscript has been rejected by your friends/confidantes/betas/family/whatever. How to deal with this soul-crushing news? Here’s a step-by-step guide.
Most examples used are from #vtmystery. I had ruthless betas. That’ll get a post at some point, too.
STEP ONE
Take it with a smile. I don’t care if you have thick skin or not, you can suck it up and fake it for a little while if you don’t. And trust me, after a little while of having your manuscript torn to shreds, it’ll hurt a little. I have pretty thick skin, and I really don’t care what most people think. But after a while of my two betas trashing my main character, I was kind of done with the whole thing. BUT. I kept a smile on my face and participated in the banter and said ‘thanks for all the comments, I really appreciate them all, they’re super helpful.’ You want to keep getting that honest feedback. If it’s not what you want to hear, good. It means you’ve found an honest beta. So, take their tear-inducing comments, swallow them, and say how much it means to you that they’re taking the time to critique your story. Act like they didn’t just say they hated literally everything and also your main character is a moron. You need them as a beta.
STEP TWO
Cry about it. If you’re face to face when they destroy your book, wait till you’re away from them. Act natural until then. If you’re getting your comments online, log off. Then go and be upset for a while. It’s fine, I promise. You worked really hard on something and your best friend or girlfriend or dog or whoever thought that it was garbage. Keep in mind, this also applies to smaller things like not liking your love interest or thinking the family intrigue is boring or being confused by the plot. My manuscript happened to have all of the above, but these steps apply no matter how big or small the criticisms are. Still. Go cool off. Tell someone who isn’t involved. My best friend/original beta M told me she didn’t like my love interest. I told Louise. My other betas said they didn’t like most of it- I told M. Go ahead and complain. Take some time away from the book. I took two weeks but honestly take more if you can. I would’ve taken a month but I have a short project attention span. I didn’t want to lose momentum.
STEP THREE
Go back and reread the good comments you received. There have to be some. If there aren’t any, it’s not that you suck- it’s that you probably didn’t find a good beta. M and my betas hate my love interest, but they all loved one of the side characters. Remember that you succeeded somewhere.
STEP FOUR
Now look at the bad comments. Compare the scenes to the comments- lots will make more sense to you now. That sentence really was terrible. That scene really made no addition to the plot. A lot of comments are valid and helpful- most of them, actually.
STEP FIVE
Accept that you failed in some places. A lot of the criticism is probably right and you could’ve done better. Some things you’ll disagree with, but that’ll come down to three choices: accepting it, deciding against it for strong personal opinions, or deciding against it due to conflicting feedback. Don’t be afraid to ignore comments, but if it’s something multiple betas say, maybe think more about it.
STEP SIX
Do draft two. Or whatever number you’re on now. You’ve got everything you need, and now you can make the manuscript better. It might be a little from spite, but also because that’s what you wanted betas for in the first place.
So. Moral of the story: getting beta’d is going to hurt your feelings. It will. But you need it to make a better story. So take it, cry a little, and move on. You have a story to improve.
Let us know your methods in the tags!
-Bella
Weekly Update
For the first time in several weeks, I actually have an update!
I’ve been working on #vtmystery2 for a while now, on and off, and I’ve finally gotten some good momentum on it. I’ve got a couple pieces all put together in the middle, and I’m coming up on seven (consecutive!) chapters at the beginning.
Any other fresh starts on new projects?
-Bella
Hades: *sitting outside a cafe, enjoying coffee and a newspaper* Cerberus: *sitting at his feet people-watching*
*A thud against the other side of the window they’re sitting beside makes them both look up*
Persephone, inside the cafe with both palms flat against the window and her face too close to the glass: CAN I PET YOUR DOG?
Hey all! Here’s a belated Monday prompt. This one gave me some bursts of inspiration so I hope it does the same for you. Write on! ~Louise
Sorry for the break in posting! It’s been Finals Season, so we’ve both been super busy. It should resume as usual tomorrow, though.
-Bella
Weekly Update
12/7
So yet again, I haven’t written anything in a novel. I did find a new poetry method, though: three minute prompts! I did ten in a row the other night and I’m hoping to get a couple more done this week.
-Bella
Post Book Fog
Congratulations to everyone who finished NaNoWriMo, first of all. Also congratulations to everyone who got a new idea or some new scenes but didn’t quite finish.
This post is definitely relevant for the NaNos that finished, but it’s also relevant if you’ve recently (or are about to) finish a story that isn’t for NaNo. It’s also kind of relevant because I’m currently finding it kind of difficult to figure out what I’m writing. It’s a shorter post, but can still be of use. I haven’t seen many posts about this yet, so here are my two cents.
Last night (as of when I wrote this post almost three months ago [oh my god]) at 3 AM, I finished a book. Woo! Go me. The problem, of course, is that on the one hand, I want to immediately send it off to a publisher (do not). I also never want to see the book again. I want to use this momentum and write more on my other projects. I want to start something new; screw my old projects. I don’t want to start anything new because then I’ll get stuck in it and I have other things to be working on.
And all of these conflicting desires result in… post book fog. Not knowing what to do or when to do it.
So: here’s my list of things you can do once you finish.
Take a couple days off from any big projects. It’s not lazy, it’s beneficial. You need to recharge and also give yourself time to switch back/over to other genres or voices or situations.
Set a timer for when you can read the book again.
Dabble in a different writing form. Back in September, when I’d just finished #luciferwasntallbad, I picked poetry. Also, take the time now to consume more stories. I caught up on the Originals.
Reward yourself. You earned it!
Then you can go back to writing. Hopefully I’ll be taking some of this advice, because I am not getting anything done anyway.
Anyone else want to add on post book fog coping mechanisms?
-Bella
Congratulations to all NaNoWriMos!!!
Weekly Update
11/30
Not much to say this week. Sorry guys!
To everyone madly trying to finish NaNo: good luck! You can do it!!
-Bella
Monday Prompt
Turn on the radio. Write a scene based on the first song you hear.
Characterization
So, one thing I like to say I’m decent at is characterization. There may be a small cult forming around one of the characters in #vtmystery, despite the lack of support for the main love interest. Characters are the best part of a book. Plot, not so much. Setting? Don’t care. Characters? The reason I write, and why most people read.
How, then, do you get characters?
Some methods of quick characterization:
A deadly sin and a heavenly virtue- I used this method for #luciferwasntallbad, just because it seemed like a good tie in to the themes of the book. I also thought it would be fun. Part of the reason that this works is that you instantly have an intrinsic value that motivates someone, and an intrinsic value that hinders them. When put in a situation, you have to consider which of these is more powerful, and what the cost is on the other.
DnD alignment chart- The value of this method is that it puts your characters in relation to each other. Not only do you get an explanation of each square, you know who’s the most law-abiding, or who’s the most good, and who’s in the middle.
Tag yourself meme- I haven’t used this yet, but when I was thinking of methods, this one came to mind with the DnD alignment chart because for a while both of them were memes. But this one should be useful for kind of obvious reasons: it gives you habits/character traits/idiosyncrasies that, for me, instantly start making a person in my head.
MBTI- This is always fun. It gives you literally their whole personality. If you Google the types, you’ll find lists of traits that each is supposed to have- just pick one, grab a couple bullet points, and get going. Your character won’t have every trait listed on the list, and feel free to grab one or two from another type, because people aren’t every single trait on their MBTI, either. You can go deeper into MBTI and look at the levels of traits, and how they interact within someone, or you can just grab and go. Either one works.
Astrology- I used to use this one a lot. For our purposes, it’s the same as MBTI. Just pick when your character was born- or not, but I’d rather keep my star signs in line with their birthdays- and Google the traits of the sign, the habits, the way the sign might interact with authority or children or whatever. You can find tons of information on star signs on the internet. Go wild.
Moodboards: This one is less straightforward. Search moodboards on Tumblr here and you’ll get a million results, most of which are great. If you search that tag for something more specific, like male witch or yellow mermaid or Halloween, you’ll get results. Take one you like, or one that fits the aesthetic or the idea, and take some inspiration from them.
A note: all characters based on the above methods will start out as stereotypes. That’s fine. Once you start writing them, they’ll grow, and you’ll realize little habits that don’t quite follow the character’s own rules, or you’ll realize that they aren’t really Neutral Good, they’re Lawful. That’s good. You don’t want them to stay stereotypes, and you don’t necessarily even want anyone to be able to pick out which alignment or star sign they are. These are just starting points, as ways to create diverse personalities instead of having four assholes, two goody-two-shoes, a Mary Sue, and a Villain™.
Once you have your starting point, then, it’s easy to go more in depth. You can interview your characters. All of those Tumblr Ask lists of questions 100 items long? Use those on your characters. Put them in a scenario and see what they do.
So go forth! Characterize!
-Bella
Anyone other methods you guys like?
Weekly Update
11/23
Okay guys, I have literally accomplished nothing this week. I wrote a couple poems, but none of them were very good. I was planning on writing more of #vtmystery2 but nope.
Sorry I couldn’t have a better update for you all. But hopefully everyone’s NaNos are going well!
-Bella
Deep Water Prompt #503
There was a strange mist that hung around our neighborhood. I had a feeling it was watching us.
Monday is for prompts! Try this one on for size.