Here's the second story I posted over two years ago, based on a fantasy where my dominant neighbor hypnotizes me.
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Preview:
"Oh come on, really? You want to hypnotize me? What are you gonna have me do, cluck like a chicken?" I let out another girlish laugh while playfully tapping his shoulder with my hand.
He was so cute, part of me wished he would just ask me out already instead of playing these weird games, but I decide to humor him a bit.
"Oh all right, I'll give this hypnotism thing a try. Just as long as it's free." I wink, stepping back and inviting my cute neighbor inside, his expression brightening with excitement.
He quickly hurries in, locking the door behind him before following me down the hall, to my living room. It wouldn't hurt to play along I suppose, and besides, I'd heard that being hypnotized could be a very relaxing experience, something I definitely needed right now.
"Sorry, I would have cleaned up a bit, if I knew I'd be having company over." I tell him, gesturing my hands around the living room.
"Oh nonsense, Cara. It's perfect and adorable, just like you." He smiles, and I can't stop from letting out another ditzy giggle at his words.
The room was already very tidy, save for a few vacation photos I had strewn about my coffee table. They were just a couple pictures of myself and my friends, laughing and having fun on the beach. But one picture displayed me lounging on a boat, wearing nothing but a skimpy leopard print bikini, while sipping a drink in my hands.
Tommy's eyes open wide, the front of his jeans beginning to bulge slightly while he stares intently at my swimsuit photo.
I place a hand on my hip and smirk, noticing how enamored he was by it.
"See something you like?" I ask him, with a flirty tone to my voice.
He quickly looks down at the floor, his face blushing red as he mutters an awkward "Sorry.." but I just laugh, placing my hand on his arm.
"Oh I'm only teasing. You're a guy, I'm glad you think I look good. But I don't think Sports Illustrated will be calling me anytime soon."
I let out another laugh, and make my way towards the couch, Tommy turning his attention back to me with a smile.
"They should. Beautiful doesn't do you justice, Cara. You're exquisite. Better than any model in a magazine." He tells me as I take a seat, my smile widening at his sweet words.
"Alright charmer, so how does this hypno thing work exactly?" I ask, as I move my body so that I'm in a laying position. My legs and feet extend out before me, while I rest my head against a soft pillow and relax my hands on my stomach, interlocking my fingers.
"Do you use like, a swinging watch, or a spinning spiral or something? Should I pull up Trust In Me on my phone?” I laugh again, my voice still very flirty and playful.
Tommy pulls out his own phone, setting it down on the table as it begins to play relaxing beach sounds.
"You're not too far off, Cara. I'm sure you'd look perfect, losing yourself in a swirling spiral." He chuckles, closing the blinds before he picks up a chair, setting it down and taking a seat right next to my head.
"But I'm personally a fan of the swinging medallion induction." He says, reaching into his pocket and pulling out a sparkling clear crystal, attached to the end of a gold chain.
"I know how easily entranced pretty girls like you are by expensive jewelry..Just let your eyes naturally focus on the crystal, and allow it to hypnotize you.."
His voice becomes quiet like a whisper, while also being deep and commanding, as he dangles the crystal before my face.
"I better not wake up as a lion tamer." I let out another soft laugh, as I focus my eyes intently on the pretty crystal.
He begins to twist the chain in his fingers, the crystal slowly spinning around, catching the light from the room as it sparkles before my face. I let out a sigh, relaxing myself deeper into the cushions as I gaze into the spinning crystal, my smirk slowly fading away while I become more and more relaxed.
"You are being drawn into the crystal, Cara. You cannot look away. You know only the crystal and my voice. The crystal is all you see. Feel your mental barriers collapsing, as you take a deep breath in...and exhale for me now." I do as he says, taking multiple deep breaths in and out as I let myself relax even further.
"Good girl. Eyes drawn into the crystal. Focused on my voice. Let yourself fall, and slip under a deep trance now."
He snaps his fingers, and my eyes roll into my head for a moment, fluttering before they refocus on the crystal, which he's begun to gently swing back and forth...
"You are hypnotized, Cara. You are falling into a trance." His voice was even deeper now, even more hypnotic.
"I am hypnotized...I am falling into a trance.."
I whisper out, my playful voice now much more monotone.
"I can't believe I just said that, he's actually hypnotizing me!" I think to myself, as the crystal begins to swing faster, becoming much harder to form any thoughts on my own.
"Good girl. You're doing so well Cara. You're so easy to hypnotize. You want to be hypnotized.."
He grins rather lecherously, my eyelids drooping halfway.
"I'm easy to hypnotize...I want to be hypnotized..." My eyes glaze over, following the crystal back and forth, my mouth dropping open in awe.
"Good girl, Cara. You're so attractive, but you are even prettier when you're hypnotized."
The crystal swings even faster, while my eyes remain glued to it, I can't stop them from following side to side.
"I'm pretty...when I'm...hypnotized..."
I was totally under his spell now, there was no turning back for me, his deep voice chuckling inside my mind. The crystal slowly stops swinging, becoming stationary once more, and he gently pulls it upwards by its gold chain.
It spins around in circles, forcing my eyes to cross and leaving me with a rather silly expression on my face.
"And you want to be pretty, Cara. I know you enjoy looking beautiful. And to look your best, means you need to be hypnotized. Give yourself to the crystal. Give yourself to my control. You want to be hypnotized."
His voice was so powerful, so hypnotic, I didn't stand a chance.
"I want to be pretty...I want...to be...hyp...hypno...hypnnnn..."
My heavy eyes start to close, but he snaps his fingers again, and my crossed eyes roll around in my head before quickly fluttering back open.
"Hypnotized." He tells me with a stern tone, his voice still very deep and commanding.
"Hypnotized..." My monotone voice whispers, as the crystal spins around in place even faster.
"You want to be hypnotized. You are in my power." I hear his voice commanding me, and I slowly nod my head up and down, my irises crossing while my eyelids droop and flutter.
"I want to be hypnotized...I am in your power.."
Tommy chuckles and calls me a 'good girl' once more, the front of his pants now sporting an enormous bulge as he watches me fall under a trance.
"Now Cara, a beautiful girl like yourself shouldn't have to worry about dull office work. You shouldn't work at all. You should let a big, strong man take care of you. You need ME to take care of you."
I nod my head up and down to his words, still with a silly and drowsy expression on my face as my eyelids droop even further.
"I should let a man take care of me...I need you to take care of me.." I repeat back, my own voice sounding a thousand miles away, while his still echoes deep within my head.
"You want to be mine. You want to be my slave."
I can't fight it, I'm far too gone to even fully understand what's happening.
"I want..to be yours...I want...to be...your slave.." I let out another blissful sigh, while my eyes close and reopen, seeing multiple spinning crystals in my blurry vision.
"Good girl. Now Cara, when I snap my fingers this time, your eyes will close, and you will be fully hypnotized. Your weak mind will be under my control, and you will obey my commands without question."
Yes, that sounds so wonderful. I think I'd love that. I don't really understand his words, but my subconscious soaks them in, giving him a firm hold over my mind.
"..Eyes...t-trance...com...commands..hypn..hypnnnnuuuuuhhhhh...."
Snap! My fluttering eyes close shut, and I fall into a deep, mindless sleep.
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A soft, quiet snoring comes from me, as Tommy admires his work. He stands back up, retrieving his phone and pausing the relaxing sounds.
"Even easier than I expected." He chuckles, dropping the crystal back in his pocket before placing his hand before my sleeping face.
"Cara, every time I snap my fingers, you will fall ten times deeper into hypnosis. Do you understand?"
I nod my head up and down, before I hear him snap his fingers, and a wave of euphoric bliss washes over me.
Snap! "Deeper into hypnotic trance."
Snap! "Deeper into mindless obedience."
Snap! "Deeper under my control."
Snap! Snap! Snap!
"Ohhhhh..." I sigh out, my eyes rolling around under their lids. My arm falls limply over the side of my couch, a small trickle of drool trailing down my chin; I was completely at his mercy now..
Tommy chuckles rather evilly, as he snaps his fingers a few more times, ensuring I was nice and deep for him.
"Can you still hear me, Cara?" I hear him ask, and I let out another soft, blissful sigh.
"Yes..." More evil laughter as he touches my hair.
"Good. I have hypnotized you, Cara. You are my slave, and I am your hypnotic master. You must obey my every command. Do you understand?"
I hear his deep, sexy voice in my head, and I nod again, letting out a monotone "Yes Master...I am your slave...I must obey..."
Another wave of euphoria hits me, it felt so good to submit, so good to let him take control, like I was in the passenger seat of my own mind.
"Very good. Now stand up for me." I feel him take my arm in his hand, helping me stand back on my feet, while my head slumps forward towards my chest.
He places his hands on my temples, adjusting my head so that it was up while he looks upon my sleeping face.
"I have always admired your beauty, Cara. From the moment we met, I knew that you would be the perfect girl to serve my every desire." He lets go of my head, and it remains stationary, my mouth drooping more as my eyes continue to flutter.
He looks down at my coffee table, picking up my swimsuit photo and holding it close to his face with a smirk, adjusting the bulge in his pants.
"You really are quite a lovely woman.."
He gently rubs himself as he looks me over in the picture, before turning his attention back towards me snoozing away before him without a thought in my empty head.
"When I snap my fingers, your eyes will open, but you will remain deep asleep, and deeply hypnotized. Do you understand?" He commands me, stepping closer so that I could feel his breath on my face.
"Yes Master...I understand.." I drone out, before a loud snapping echoes throughout my mind.
My eyelids slowly open, revealing my blue irises, now completely glazed over and staring forward into nothing. Tommy chuckles as he waves his hand across my face, getting no reaction from my blank expression.
"You are deep in my power, slave. You are under my control." He tells me, looking into my eyes as they continue to gaze forward.
"I am deep in your power, Master...I am under your control.."
I feel him run his hand across my cheek, before pressing his lips against mine in a soft kiss. We kiss for a few moments until our lips slowly part, and he holds the photograph up to my blank face.
"Slave, when I snap my fingers, you will go and change into this swimsuit for me, and when you return, you will model it for my enjoyment." His voice is still very commanding, and I meekly nod my head to his words.
"Yes Master...I will obey..."
Snap! My arms slowly rise up and extend outwards, and I turn my body around as I march across my living room, down the hallway.
"I must obey...I am hypnotized...I must obey..."
I drone out as I disappear into my bedroom, Tommy smirking wider as he takes a seat on the couch, tucking the photo of me in his pocket...
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(Trance Thy Neighbor)
Trance Thy Neighbor By Cara B. Witching _________ It was late in the afternoon when I finally arrived home after a long and stressful
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Hhhhhhhhhholy fuck this is hot. Came no less than three times to it















