Alec G - Web Writing Class

He/Him Pronouns A Graphic Design Major wanting to Expand Web Knowledge

[xozach]

What I'm Most Proud Of With My Writing Process

I'm most proud of the effort I put into my revisions in comparison to how I used to revise papers in previous classes. In the past I would make one draft, skim for grammatical errors, and call it a day. With my content analysis paper, I actually went back and completely reworked multiple sections, adding new parts to my analysis to tie the data back to my hypothesis, and took feedback I received seriously. Instead of just editing the paper to make it sound cleaner, I changed parts of my argument to make it stronger. Instead of just writing to finish the paper, my focus has shifted to improving the quality of my writing.

[alecwebwriter]

I think a major part of this project was dedicated to helping us learn just this. Many times in schooling, we write everything down at once and call it a day without taking time to delve into each piece. This project shows the benefits of working ahead and taking the time to redraft even the smaller parts of any paper.

[maggiechern]

Original Content 3

Where will you adjust your essay to strengthen your point?

Throughout my essay I will be adjusting and paying the most focus to the examples that I provide to back up my answer. Ultimately my writing has to answer my question and help to back up my answer, but the examples and evidence need to then be supportive. I also need to make sure that the examples that I use are heavily thought through and explained. If I just put down an example and don't explain it then the audience could be confused.

[alecwebwriter]

Citing examples for this project is a must, so make sure they don't interrupt the flow of your writing. While you should include examples of your previous work and explain them, make sure they don't seem to be awkwardly placed in the middle of paragraphs. Even in an interview context, the flow of the entire paper still matters.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content (3)

Where will you adjust your essay to strengthen your point?

The key strengthening factor in each question will be the example used alongside it. In the written portion, anything can be typed, but the example shows the application and credibility of the skill. I plan to revisit all of my previous posts and pick out the example for each answer first to build a strong structure around the application. In that sense, all of the explanations will be directly linked and show a strong piece of evidence accordingly.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content (2)

What do you like most about your learning?

When it comes to the way I learn, I often have difficulties understanding things the first time they are explained to me. My brain functions differently from those around me, and often it can be a frustrating experience to attempt to keep up with the pace. I've also found that despite this, I tend to approach ideas in new, creative ways that those around me wouldn't have thought of before. So I suppose my favorite part of learning is learning how to incorporate creativity into any activity.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content (1)

What are you most proud of in your writing process? 

I would say the strongest part of my writing process is the structure I use throughout each of my papers. I have a very refined style that follows a particular structure in all types of writing I do. Due to this, I've been told that I sound credible in my writing and like I know what I'm talking about, which is the ultimate goal of any writing assignment. I know that I can take a strong stance and communicate my point effectively.

[alecwebwriter]

Thursday Check-In

What questions about writing skill development do you have?

I don't think I have a specific question when it comes to writing development, but I suppose it would be asking about tips on pacing yourself. I still find keeping a steady pace is incredibly hard for me, especially as a neurodivergent individual, and I often find that I fall behind and end up with a lot to do at the same time. What would you recommend to a student struggling to keep up with the workload?

@npfannen

[tyl0611]

what did you learn about drafting across multiple weeks that will inform your writing process after college

I learned a lot about drafting throughout multiple weeks. I learned that drafting is an incredibly important part of writing and it is something I need to incorporate in my writing process a lot more since previously I never wrote drafts.

[alecwebwriter]

While it is true that drafting is important, this explanation could be taken a step further. Why was it something you realized you needed more of in your writing process? How will you integrate that in the future in a way that makes sense for your style? Take the question a step further and really analyze your perspective.

[piggylabs]

Original Post 3.1

post an image of an element of your Content Analysis that needs input from your peers.

What I would like input on is if the image is well placed or include what it needs and if the connection if good. I don't know if my example flows well with the rest of the paragraph. I don't want it to feel crash landed in the essay. Also does the image include to much or too little info/ detain? I'm not sure of how I would get an image of what I need to explain my point, as the comments are pretty sporadic so finding an example is difficult. Any feedback or other input is appreciated.

If you see this include "mustache" in your reblog

[alecwebwriter]

The placement of the image feels very abrupt because of the lack of color contrast with the background. The white background of the image blends in with the white background of the paper. I'm assuming you're presenting your information in a Google Doc format, so this makes sense. My advice would be to either add a stroke around the image or put your explanation of the image below it in a separate paragraph to help with the flow. You want to make sure you're fully explaining why you are showing the image. (Mustache)

[jeffharley5]

post an image of an element of your Content Analysis that needs input from your peers.

Should I add more graphs to my paper? Personally, I think this is fine, but what do y'all think?

[alecwebwriter]

It's a bit hard to judge without having the full context of explanations. I personally think as long as you fully explain the data that you are displaying and the purpose of it, then you should be okay. I'd recommend having at least 2 visual representations per Instagram account for the sake of further substance, but make sure you are explaining why you are showing the data you are.

[ndurgin33]

Original Content Writing: Week 13 #1

What does your final revision process look like?

The final revision process for my paper basically is just tweaking details that have been pointed out in the feedback I received. A major detail for me that I have been tweaking is my use of visuals. I originally had phots scattered throughout the paper just for aesthetic purposes. These lacked any explanation or sense of purpose so I have been revising my visuals to add to my claims and have been working on providing context to the images and discussing how they add to the overall project and why each image is included. Another revision is expanding on certain areas of my project that needed to be expanded on or were look a bit short.

[alecwebwriter]

While having visuals is important, I agree it is a good use of time to revisit and make sure they are all serving a key purpose in your presentation. Don't verge into the territory of over-analysis on your visual data, as that can distract from the main purpose of the presentation itself, so use it when you feel it's necessary (graphs/charts, for example).

[brandonk-mville]

Final revision

My research project has gone through many stages to get to the point it is currently at now. My final revision process has allowed me to create data graphs and charts that are easy to understand. While organizing my findings with great detail. After a few iterations of the overall look of the presentation I have decided on a template that best suits the vibe and is easy on the eyes. I have spent several hours analyzing the data and formatting it to be appealing, while also rereading for any grammatical errors. The most important part has been taking in peer reviews to gain suggestions on how to improve the overall project.

[alecwebwriter]

It sounds like you have a solid way of presenting your data. Remember, most importantly, you want your presentation to focus on the main thesis. Make sure you are driving home the conclusion your data finds, even if it feels extremely repetitive. It is the most important piece of the project, so make sure you highlight it.

[oshean8]

Original Content Week #13

My style of writing has been present in different sections of my content analysis, often less present in the data analysis sections. Each account I have pulled data from focuses on gardening, balancing my own knowledge of credible practices and those posted by accounts has been helpful to my papers tone and arguments. I have been struggling to find a way to transfer this into the latter sections of the analysis but has provided me with more experience.

[alecwebwriter]

Make sure that while you are pulling from your own experience, you have the research to back up the credibility of the practices you are consuming. While it may be common knowledge for you, a reader may need to see a statistic or something more solid to establish your own credibility within the paper. Tying these statistics in alongside what you're doing can help to draw focus back to the main argument.

[alecwebwriter]

Is this enough information on each of the creators for the background section, or should I dive deeper into their careers? I want to make sure the audience has the full context of what is happening, but not veer too far off topic.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content Post (2)

What did you learn about your writing process that will help you after college? 

My writing process still requires some building upon and the ability to work over an extended period of time. I still find myself writing in short spurts, spitting out all the information at once, which offers little time for feedback and overall development. Outside of college, this will mean that for each project I approach, I will need to do one of two things: Apply to projects that fit alongside my writing all at once approach or adapt the process to the needs of a client. Understanding how I function can help me to adapt what I am doing to fit the project at hand.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content Post (1)

What did you learn about drafting across multiple weeks that will inform your writing process after college?

Completing drafts along a scheduled timeline is more beneficial to the audience as a whole and to the quality of the paper. Having multiple stages in which feedback can be offered helps to improve the overall quality of the work being produced, and your viewers can specify exactly what they are looking for and where understanding is lacking. This isn't a luxury necessarily offered frequently, but understanding how it is best to seize that opportunity can help increase a writer's quality.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content Post (3)

How will having a good revision process help you move forward beyond this class?

Beyond this class, a good revisionary process is beneficial for any assignment. Having a strong judgement and flexibility to change what is needed can help with future assignments and papers an individual will write, not only in college, but continuing through their lives. Having a solidified approach can help to increase credibility, cleanliness, and understanding from your audience when consuming pieces of writing you have created.

[alecwebwriter]

Original Content Post (2)

How are you developing a style to build your argument in the content analysis?

I'm working on furthering my technical writing style. Including sections that regard terminology used, so I don't have to spend time explaining language within the text and directly referencing images as they are used to help maintain a reader's train of thought. When reading my writing, I want it to have elements of scientific papers to enhance my credibility while also keeping a rhetorical whimsy to make the audience feel less like they are being lectured to.