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feeling hurt, jealous, or heartbroken when seeing a father-daughter in public, but also feeling vicariously happy for them that they have such an amazing bond (something i never had) is such a confusing feeling …
The Sinner and The Scarred is a dark science fiction thriller that weaves together themes of revenge, found family, and mind control, set in a dystopian world. The story follows Amara, a 15-year-old assassin who was mind-controlled by a powerful villain named Hugh. After being rescued by Frank, her deceased best friend’s father, they form a surrogate father-daughter bond and embark on a dangerous quest for vengeance.
As Frank and Amara navigate a world full of advanced technology, brutal survival, and psychological manipulation, they must rely on each other to fight the shadows of their past and present. It’s a gripping tale filled with gritty action, emotional depth, and dark humor—perfect for readers who enjoy high-stakes thrillers with complex characters.
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—which was a dark science fiction thriller that weaves together themes of revenge, found family, and mind control, set in a dystopian world.
If only there was a story that follows a 15-year-old assassin who was mind-controlled by a powerful villain.
And if only this kid could be rescued by their deceased best friend’s father.
If only they form a surrogate father-kid bond and embark on a dangerous quest for vengeance.
If only there was a story where these two would navigate a world full of advanced technology, brutal survival, and psychological manipulation, where they must rely on each other to fight the shadows of their past and present.
If only there was a gripping tale filled with gritty action, emotional depth, and dark humor—perfect for readers who enjoy high-stakes thrillers with complex characters.
After the accident that stole her parents, she wandered through the foster system like a ghost, passed from house to house, leaving barely a trace. She was quiet, withdrawn—a broken doll collecting dust on a shelf no one bothered to clean.
She never asked for help. She never expected it. By 15, she had learned to survive alone. Alone was safe. Alone meant she didn’t have to open her heart to anyone who would just leave her behind.
Until she met Saul.
A gruff ex-military mechanic with a permanent scowl etched on his face, Saul was the last person Maya expected to want her around. When she was placed in his care, she braced herself for more silence, more distance. But Saul was different. He didn’t try to force conversations or invade her space. He didn’t expect her to be anything other than what she was—a quiet, tired kid. Instead, he just existed, fixing cars, making coffee, and leaving an extra plate of food on the counter for her, without a word.
Slowly, she found herself watching him. The way he moved with a purpose, his hands steady despite the years of wear, his voice low but steady, calm. He didn’t demand anything from her, but in his presence, the world didn’t feel quite so heavy.
Part 2: The Broken Man
Saul didn’t need anyone. At least, that’s what he told himself.
After losing his own daughter in a car crash that should’ve taken him too, he’d shut himself off from the world. His garage became his sanctuary—a place where metal and oil replaced the heartache and loss he couldn’t fix.
But Maya—this quiet, shadow of a girl—she was different. He saw the same hurt in her eyes, the same weight of loss, the kind that never fully goes away. He didn’t have the words to comfort her, but he knew how to show up. He knew how to be present.
As the days passed, he found himself making two sandwiches instead of one. Setting out a second mug of coffee. Leaving the garage door open a little later, just in case she wanted to come in and sit with him, even if in silence.
And then one evening, she did.
“Can you teach me?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.
He looked up from the engine he was working on, surprised to see her standing there, holding a wrench awkwardly in her small hands.
Saul didn’t ask why. He didn’t need to. Instead, he nodded, and for the first time in years, he let someone into his world again.
Part 3: The Red Sheep
Months passed, and the garage became their shared space. They worked in unspoken rhythm—fixing engines and mending the invisible fractures inside themselves. Maya grew stronger, more confident. She smiled sometimes, even laughed on rare occasions. And though Saul was still quiet, something shifted between them—something that felt like family, something whole.
One evening, after a particularly long day, Maya sat on the hood of a car they’d just finished working on. The sun was setting, casting the garage in a soft red glow.
“Why do you help me?” she asked suddenly, looking over at Saul.
He paused, wiping his hands on a rag, and met her gaze.
“Because someone once helped me,” he said simply.
Maya blinked, confused. “Who?”
“My daughter,” he said quietly, his voice breaking for the first time since she’d known him. “She... She always saw people like us. The ones who were alone.”
Maya’s throat tightened, but she didn’t look away. Instead, she slid off the hood and stepped closer to Saul. For a long moment, they just stood there, side by side, bathed in the red light of the setting sun.
“You’re not alone, you know,” she whispered.
Neither of them had ever said it before, but in that moment, they didn’t have to. The bond between them was no longer just two broken souls trying to survive. It was something deeper. They were family now, not by blood, but by choice.
The red sheep, the ones cast out and forgotten, had found each other.
I also have a published book out there waiting to be read.
The Sinner and The Scarred
The Sinner and The Scarred is a dark science fiction thriller that weaves together themes of revenge, found family, and mind control, set in a dystopian world. The story follows Amara, a 15-year-old assassin who was mind-controlled by a powerful villain named Hugh. After being rescued by Frank, her deceased best friend’s father, they form a surrogate father-daughter bond and embark on a dangerous quest for vengeance.
As Frank and Amara navigate a world full of advanced technology, brutal survival, and psychological manipulation, they must rely on each other to fight the shadows of their past and present. It’s a gripping tale filled with gritty action, emotional depth, and dark humor—perfect for readers who enjoy high-stakes thrillers with complex characters.
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Plotting like a Pro: The Only Guide You Need to Outline Your Next Novel
So, you've got this brilliant idea for a novel swirling around in your big monster brain, but you're not quite sure how to wrangle it into shape. *read this next line dramatically* Fear not, soldier, for I am here to guide you through the tumultuous journey of outlining your masterpiece. *you can stop now* But do get ready to dive into the wild world of outlining – where chaos meets creativity, and brainy think-think meets handy write-write.
What Exactly is an Outline?
An outline is basically like the blueprint for your novel – it's your roadmap to success, your guiding light through the abyss (too much?) It breaks down the events of your story in sequential order, ensuring that you stay on track and don't accidentally veer off into the land of plot holes and confusion. Think of it as your comic relief best friend (minus the comic relief), always there to keep you in check as you navigate the treacherous waters of writing.
What Does an Outline Look Like?
Now, technically speaking, there are rules for outlining. But hey, as long as whatever you decide to do works for you, you need no rules. Some fancy folks swear by fancy formats like the skeletal outline or the flashlight outline (let me know if you need details on said fancy formats), but honestly, as long as it works for you, you do you, boo-bear (that’s definitely not my thing). Whether you prefer bullet points, numbers, or hieroglyphics (AKA code), the format doesn't matter as long as it's easy for you to understand. After all, the point is to simplify the process, not complicate it further.
Benefits of Outlining:
Oh boy, where do I even begin with this one? Let me count the ways outlining will change your writing game (maybe even your life. Okay, that was too much.): (TIP: read the headings dramatically for a better experience)
It’s Your Beakon Through the Murky Waters: Ever feel like you're navigating through a dense fog with no compass in sight? Fear not, my friend, because outlining is exactly that for when you enter the said forest to write your book; your guiding light. It's like having a trusty co-pilot by your side, whispering sweet plot pointers in your ear as you navigate the treacherous waters of storytelling. No more aimless wandering – with outlining, you'll always know which way to steer your literary ship.
Plot Holes? Not on My Watch: Say goodbye to those pesky plot holes that seem to pop up out of nowhere like weeds in a garden. Outlining is like a preemptive strike against narrative inconsistencies, ensuring that your story is as tight as corsets from start to finish. With each plot point neatly mapped out, you can rest easy knowing that your readers won't be left scratching their heads wondering what the heck just happened.
It Helps You Defy the Abyss: Picture this: your story is like a runaway train hurtling down the tracks at breakneck speed. Without proper guidance, it's all too easy for it to veer off course and crash and burn in a fiery wreck (That would be an awesome scene but not what we’re looking for.) Outlining is like the conductor that keeps that train chugging along on the right track. No detours, no distractions – just a straight shot to narrative greatness.
Crafting a Killer Climax: Ah, the climax – the moment we've all been waiting for. With outlining in your team, crafting a jaw-dropping climax is as easy as pie. No more floundering around trying to figure out how to tie up loose ends – your outline has already done the heavy lifting for you. So go ahead, crank up the tension, unleash those plot twists, and watch as your readers' jaws hit the floor.
Also, Adios, Writer's Block: Writer's block – the nemesis of every living writer. But not anymore, because outlining is like a magical antidote that banishes writer's block to the furthest corners of the earth. With each plot point neatly laid out before you, there's no room for procrastination or self-doubt. So grab that pen, flex those creative muscles, and get ready to slay the blank page like never before.
Less Revision, More Celebration: Let's face it – nobody likes revising their work. It's like trying to untangle a knot of Christmas lights – frustrating, time-consuming, and guaranteed to give you a headache. But with outlining, you can kiss those revision woes goodbye. By nailing down your story's structure from the get-go, you'll save yourself countless hours of agony down the line. So go ahead, pat yourself on the back – you've earned it, champ.
Stuck While Outlining?
Feeling like you're trapped in a maze with no way out? (Lucky for you, you're not Newt. Get it?) Don't sweat it, my friend. Because Mama’s about to drop some bombs!
Work Backwards Like a Boss: Ever heard the phrase "it's easier to navigate a maze when you see the finish line"? Well, tiny, it's time to put that theory to work. When you find yourself stuck in the tangled web of outlining, start with the climax – the grand finale, the pièce de résistance. Then, work backward, asking yourself how the f*ck you got there in the first place. It's like retracing your steps through a labyrinth, armed with the knowledge of where you're headed. Suddenly, those tangled plot threads start to unravel, and you're on your way to outlining glory.
Outlining Ain't Easy, But Neither is Writing: Let's be real for a minute – outlining is hard. Like, really hard. But here's the thing: so is writing. You're basically creating something out of nothing, conjuring entire worlds and characters out of thin air (or neurons). But when you tackle outlining head-on, you're tackling that frustration right at the source. Instead of letting it simmer beneath the surface throughout the entire writing process, you're ripping it off like a band-aid and getting it out of the way upfront. Sure, it might be tough, but trust me – it's a heck of a lot easier than dealing with it later down the line.
Don't Skip Outlining, You'll Regret It: Now, I get it – outlining can be a pain in the @$$. It's tempting to skip this step altogether and dive headfirst into the writing process. But trust me when I say this: if you’re new and want to make your life easier in the long run, outlining is non-negotiable. Think of it like laying the foundation for a house – sure, it takes time and effort, but without it, your literary masterpiece is destined to crumble (with all the people still inside). So don't shoot yourself in the foot by skipping outlining just because it's difficult. (You shoot your foot now, something is gonna come bite you in your backside later.)
Does Outlining Ruin the Creative Process?
Ah, the age-old question. Does outlining zap all the creativity out of writing? Short answer: absolutely not. In fact, outlining is like flexing your creative muscles on steroids (or any other choice of d*ug). It's your chance to invent an entire world, complete with characters, conflicts, and plot twists in like a jiffy! Think of it as storytelling in shorthand – compact, efficient, and oh-so-satisfying. Outlining isn't the enemy of creativity – it's the ultimate wingman. It's like playing god in your own little literary universe, and let me tell you, it's a heck of a rush.
Forget what you've heard about outlining being dry and boring – it's anything but. (This is your GOD era) Trust me, there's nothing more satisfying than seeing your world completely mapped out in full.
Embrace it, harness it, and watch as your dream narrative becomes a reality.
With an Outline, You Know What's Coming Next...But Does That Lessen the Excitement?
With an outline in hand, you're always in the know about what's coming next. But that doesn't take away from the thrill of writing the novel. Honestly, it's quite the opposite for me. I find myself even more excited to dive into my story because I have a roadmap of where it's headed. Knowing the next scene waiting to unfold keeps me on the edge of my seat, eager to see how it all plays out (I like to know that I am heading towards that one gut-wrenching bit that will make my audiences wish I was dead. It's really fun; sometimes waiting for deaths and stuff.) Plus, there's no room for boredom when you're constantly propelled forward by the anticipation of what's to come. Unless, of course, you've outlined a snooze-fest of a story – but let's be real, who wants to write that?
What if I Need to Deviate from My Outline?
Ah, the age-old dilemma of sticking to the script versus going off-book. Here's the deal – your book, your choice. The outline you wrote is not carved in stone. It's more like a rough sketch, a guideline to keep you on track.
So what if you hit a snag and need to deviate from your outline? It happens to the best of us. Sometimes while writing you realize that you have something more interesting than what you’ve written in your outline. Do it. We’re all not perfect.
Now, a common gripe among writers is when their characters seem to have a mind of their own and they veer off script. But let's get one thing straight – your characters are as fictional as a unicorn riding a rainbow. They don't have any authority; you do.
So when you say your character "decided" to go rogue, what you really mean is that your outline didn't quite sync up with their psyche.
The solution? Plan your characters alongside your outline, ensuring they're in harmony with the plot. Build characters that fit snugly into your story's framework, and vice versa.
How Long Should My Outline Be?
F*ck, I don't know, ah, your outline should be as long as it needs to be. *nailed it*
Some writers prefer short, concise outlines that just cover the basics, while others go full-on novel mode with lengthy tomes that leave no stone unturned. There's no right or wrong answer here, folks – it's all about what works best for you.
Some Famous Authors Don't Outline, Why Should I?
Well, here's the deal – you're the captain of your own writing ship, and nobody's forcing you to walk on the wooden plank.
Sure, there are legendary authors out there who craft masterpieces without ever touching an outline. But unless you're a seasoned pro, it might be wise to outline before beginning to stay away from C.H.A.O.S. (not me foreshadowing my next book) (Follow me on Instagram for updates!)
Remember the writers you are comparing yourself to have likely got years of experience under their belts, while you might still be finding your Nemo.
Let's say that outlining just isn't you. Maybe you thrive on spontaneity and the thrill of discovery. Or perhaps you're still figuring out your writing groove. That's cool – we're all on our own journey.
But do not forget: for every famous author who shuns outlines, there are plenty more who swear by them like a sailor (get it? Coz a sailer swears a lot). So instead of trying to walk in someone else's boots, lace up your own and run on that race track like no one has ever baby.
It's your story – so tell it your way.
Do I Have to Outline?
Nyet. (And Da)
See, in the wild world of writing, there are two main camps: the planners and the pantsters. Think of them as the yin and yang of the literary universe.
Now, there's no denying that there are some writers out there who can weave an epic novel out of thin air with the grace of a ninja. But let's keep it real – those folks are like The Avengers of our world. Sure, they exist, but they're definitely the exception, not the rule.
For us mere mortals, outlining is like a trusty lifeboat in the stormy seas of storytelling. It's the secret sauce that turns a plate of pasta into a plate of pasta; if you catch my drift.
If you're finding yourself drowning in a sea of plot twists and character arcs, maybe it's time to give outlining a whirl. If you're one of the lucky few who can thrive without a roadmap, more power to ya (you nasty little b*tch. Yes, I am jealous of you!)
Just remember – if you ever find yourself shipwrecked on the shores of writer's block, the outline lifeboat is always there to rescue you. There's no shame in admitting you need a little help along the way.
How to Outline:
Step #0: Brain Dump:
You're struck by a lightning bolt of inspiration, and suddenly, your brain is buzzing with a million ideas. What do you do? Simple – grab a pen and paper, or your laptop (or your phone, you lazy @$$) and unleash the chaos onto the page. Let it all out – every random thought, half-baked concept, and outlandish idea. It's like a creative free-for-all, with no rules and no judgment. It doesn’t have to make sense, that’s the whole point. This messy brain dump is your starting point, your raw material to mold into something magical.
Step #1: Making Sense of the Madness:
Now that you've got a heaping pile of ideas to work with, it's time to roll up your sleeves and get down to business. Think of this step as your personal pitch meeting with yourself. You've got a mess of concepts, characters, and themes swirling around in your head – now it's time to wrangle them into submission. Start by sketching out the basics – the premise, the characters, the vibe, the themes, the subplots – all of it. Keep it loose, keep it flexible, and above all, keep it open to change. Play around with different ideas and see what sticks. Once you've got some ideas that make sense and that you're happy with, it's time to move on to the next step and bring your story to life. Buckle up, Buttercup.
Step #2: The Rough Sketch:
This is where the real magic happens– where you take that messy somewhat sensible pile of ideas and start sculpting them into the masterpiece they are going to be.
First things first, dig deep into the heart of your story. What are the main conflicts your characters are going to face? What obstacles will they encounter along the way? This is your chance to map out the twists and turns that will keep your readers on the edge of their seats.
Now, break it down into four key areas: Who, What, How, and Why.
Who are your characters? What drives them, what haunts them, what makes them tick? What's the basic premise of your story – the very thing that'll hook your audience in 30 seconds flat? How will your characters go on both internal and external journeys, and what will they learn along the way? And most importantly, why are you passionate about this story's theme? What do you want to shout from the rooftops, and what big ideas do you want to explore through your character's journey?
At its core, the rough sketch is all about finding the story in the mess. It's about distilling your ideas down to their purest essence and uncovering the beating heart of your narrative. So don't be afraid to explore and experiment. Dream big, think outside the box, and create something truly extraordinary.
Step #3: The Outline:
Now, after what seems like decades of work, it's time to take that rough sketch of yours and start turning it into something truly spectacular.
I usually use the Three-Act Structure. This bad boy is like the backbone of storytelling – it's what keeps the narrative strong and sturdy. If you have any other story structures you swear by, use one of those.
Basically, you’re grabbing a story structure that you believe suits your rough sketch and breaking down your sketch into the key story beats of your structure.
For the Three-Act Structure, it is usually like this: Act One: the setup, where you introduce your characters and set the stage for the adventure to come. Act Two: the confrontation, where the action heats up and your characters face their biggest challenges head-on. And Act Three: the resolution, where everything comes together in a satisfying conclusion.
You can choose to go as in-depth here as you want. (Maybe write like a 20,000-word outline, I don't care.)
Now, if you’re not a big fan of writing a 20,000-word outline, the bullet-point outline is here to save your day. It's like the shorthand version of outlining – short, sweet, and to the point. This outline gives you a sense of your character arcs, internal conflicts, and transformative journeys, all without bogging you down with unnecessary details.
The beauty of it all? You get to choose your own adventure. If you're happy with your bullet-point outline and ready to dive into drafting, go for it. But if you're itching to go deeper, to explore every nook and cranny of your story, then by all means, keep doing more. The important thing is that you feel confident in your outline, knowing that it's the solid foundation upon which your masterpiece will be built.
Tips and Extras: (some juicy details)
Brainstorming the Centerpieces:
If your story is a jigsaw puzzle, the key scenes are the biggest, boldest pieces. These are the moments that make your heart race, that keep your readers glued to the page, and that make your story truly unforgettable. So start with laying out those major scenes or events. Think big – we're talking key turning points, epic locations, and jaw-dropping plot twists. Don't worry about the order or details just yet – this is about getting those main parts out of your head and onto the page.
What if you don't have all the pieces yet? Well, kitty-kitty, this is a quick, flexible way to brainstorm the centerpieces of your story. Don't stress about getting everything perfect on the first try – just let the ideas flow and see where they take you.
Getting Specific:
Now that we've mapped out the key scenes, it's time to add some meat to these bones. Think of this step as adding color to a black-and-white photo – it's the step where your story starts to come alive. For each scene, jot down a sentence or a short paragraph that captures the essence of what's happening. No need to stress about getting every little detail perfect – just focus on what's being communicated in the scene, the location, and the characters involved.
As you add these high-level details, think about how each scene fits into the bigger picture of your story. How does it move the plot forward? What themes or motifs are being explored? And most importantly, how does it connect with the scenes that come before and after it? This is when you start weaving together the threads of your narrative, creating a tapestry that's rich with meaning and emotion.
Remember, there are no rules for how much detail to add – do what works best for you. Some scenes may only need a few words to capture their essence, while others may require a bit more fleshing out. Trust your instincts and let your creativity guide you. After all, this is your story – own it, embrace it, and let it shine.
Connecting the Dots:
Now that we've fleshed out those key scenes with high-level details, it's time to step back and take a bird's-eye view of your narrative landscape. This is where you can make connections between themes and concepts that you might otherwise miss if you dove straight into writing.
Grab your outline and give it a thorough re-read. Look for scenes that feel out of place, transitions that need a little extra love, or characters who make a sudden appearance without a proper introduction. These are the hiccups that can disrupt the flow of your story and leave your readers scratching their heads. Highlight these areas and make a note of any plot points or scenes that need to be moved around to get the sequence just right.
Think of this step like conducting an orchestra – every element needs to be in perfect harmony for the performance to truly shine. So don't be afraid to make some tweaks, to shift things around, to fine-tune your narrative until it sings. Listen to the rhythm of your story – it knows where it wants to go, you just have to follow its lead.
Unlocking New Ideas:
While it's true that imagery and videos won't make it into your novel, they can be incredibly powerful tools for sparking creativity and bringing your story to life. Think of it like adding fuel to the fire of your imagination – it's a surefire way to kick-start new ideas and breathe fresh life into your narrative.
Get experimental! Dive into Google Images, Pinterest, or anywhere you find a photo that might fit. Start saving images or movie clips that resonate with your scenes. Whether it's a striking landscape, a compelling character portrait, or a mood-setting photograph, let your imagination run wild and see where it takes you.
If you're the type of writer who loves to create mood boards, now's the perfect time to put those skills to good use. Take a look at your existing mood boards and see if any images could help evoke the feeling you're trying to capture in your scenes. Whether it's the warm glow of a sunset or the eerie silence of a deserted street, let these images serve as inspiration as you continue to shape your story.
The Importance of Feedback:
With any creative endeavor, whether it's writing a novel or painting a masterpiece, feedback is key. It's like having a fresh pair of eyes on your work – offering insights and perspectives that you might have missed on your own. So if you’re still not sure about the first version of your outline, it's time to seek out that invaluable feedback.
When asking for feedback, be specific about what you're looking for. Are you seeking input on the sequence of events? Plot points that need fine-tuning? Character development that feels a bit flat? Whatever it may be, make sure to communicate your needs clearly so that your reviewers can provide targeted feedback.
The important part is that you need to stay open to suggestions and improvements. It can be tough to hear criticism of your work but try not to take it personally. Remember, the goal here is to make your story the best it can be, and sometimes that means making tough decisions and embracing constructive criticism.
The Moment of Truth:
Now it's time to dive headfirst into the exhilarating world of drafting. This is where your story begins to unfold before your very eyes. Your outline and your drafts are perfect companions. They're like the dynamic duo of storytelling, working together in perfect harmony to guide you through the creative process.
As you begin sketching out the details in your draft, remember to trust the process and let your creativity flow. Embrace the freedom of expression that comes with drafting – after all, this is your chance to bring your story to life in all its vivid detail. So don't hold back – let your imagination run wild and see where it takes you.
Comrades, now armed with the knowledge of outlining, you're ready for war. So go forth, brave souls, and let your imagination run wild as you craft worlds, weave characters, and spin tales that will captivate hearts and minds.
Remember, outlining is not just a tool – it's your secret weapon, your trusty guide through the wilderness of creativity. And if/when you find yourself lost in the midst of your writing, grappling with plot twists and character arcs, just remember these wise words originally said by yours truly: you've got this.
Happy outlining, and may your pens never run dry!
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Hey there, sunshine(s) and moonlight(s)! Do you want to rock your readers' worlds with mind-boggling plot twists? Well, lucky for you, I recently met a mind reader in my basement and they told me you want to know this. Buckle up, because we're about to begin a journey into the abyss. Kidding! We are going to the Kingdom of Twistano-Turnano; narratives that'll leave jaws on the floor and minds on some walls. Strap in, grab your favorite snacks and let's get this party started. (I believe that one was too much, right? Coz’ who’s got time for any parties? Or am I the only one missing out?)
What Makes a Good Plot Twist?
Let's kick things off with the basics. A plot twist isn't just about throwing in a random curveball– oh no, it's about shaking up the very fabric of your story. A meaningful plot twist should be a seismic shift in the audience's perception, whether it's through an unexpected event, a shocking revelation, or a philosophical awakening. We're talking external, internal, and philosophical shifts that make the audiences question everything they thought they knew. It's about changing your audience's reality.
The Three Types of Shifts: External, Internal, and Philosophical
The external shift– think unexpected deaths, hidden treasures, and jaw-dropping identity reveals. These twists are all about rearranging plot elements in ways that leave readers gasping for air.
The internal shift– this one's all about messing with your audience's emotions. One minute they're feeling all warm and fuzzy, and the next, BAM! You hit 'em with an event that leaves them shaken to the core. Just make sure to keep things clear, or you'll have a bunch of confused readers scratching their heads.
The philosophical shift– the granddaddy of all plot twists. This one's all about making your audience question their beliefs and perceptions. You take 'em from thinking they've got it all figured out to realize that maybe, just maybe, they've been wrong all along.
To really knock your readers' socks off, you gotta apply all three shifts. That's right, no half-measures here. Using just one or missing one entirely is just going to confuse the shit out of your audiences. Trust me, you don't wanna do that.
What makes a plot twist good?
Shock Value: First things first, a good plot twist needs to pack a punch. We're talking about leaving your readers reeling, jaws on the floor, and minds blown. If it doesn't make 'em gasp, it ain't worth it. The key is to not settle for the first twist that comes to mind. Dig deep, get creative, and find a way to really knock your readers' socks off.
Believability: Sure, we love a good surprise, but it's gotta make sense, ya know? You can't just say that the human we have been following around is a dog disguised as a pizza! Nope, we ain't gone believe that boy. Keep it real. Actually, the real(er) the better. Foreshadowing is your best friend. Drop hints, plant seeds, and lay the groundwork for your twist early on. That way, when it finally hits, it'll feel like a natural progression of the story. (Maybe show me a barking human to make me go along with the pizza dog twist.)
Impact on Characters AND Plot: A truly great plot twist doesn't just shake things up for the sake of it. It needs to have real consequences, affecting not only the characters but the entire storyline. Don't just focus on the shock factor – think about how your twist will affect your characters and your plot. Will it send them spiraling into chaos? Will it force them to confront their deepest fears? Make it count.
Variety in Tropes: Cliched tropes are good but if you can manage to twist it up, that's even better. Try to give us something we've never seen before. Surprise us, delight us, and keep us guessing 'til the very end. But don't be afraid to break the mold. Sure, some tropes are tried and true, but the best twists are the ones that defy expectations. Surprise your readers, challenge their assumptions, and leave 'em begging for more.
Timing: Timing is literally everything. You need to build up to the right moment for that twist like a mastermind supervillain. Keep your readers on their toes. Drop breadcrumbs along the way, build up the tension, ratchet up the suspense, and then hit 'em with that (do-do do-do) twist right when they least expect it. You gotta know exactly when to drop that grenade. Trust me, it'll be worth the wait.
Plot Twist Techniques:
Breadcrumbs: The classic "how did I not see this coming" twist. Make 'em scratch their heads and wonder, "How did I miss that?" Lay the groundwork for your twist by dropping subtle hints and clues throughout your story. It's all about planting those breadcrumbs and watching your readers play Sherlock Holmes.
Misdirection: The good ol' red herring. Lead your readers down one path, only to yank the rug out from under them at the last minute. Get 'em emotionally invested in a particular outcome, then flip the script and watch 'em squirm. Mix this with the breadcrumbs and you have a beautiful pie.
The False Win: Picture this – your characters are riding high, victory is in sight, and then BAM! You hit 'em with the ultimate plot twist: it's not over yet. Give 'em a false sense of comfort, then snatch it away like a cruel twist of fate.
The Unprovoked: Ever seen a plot twist that leaves you scratching your head and wondering, "Where did that come from?" That's the unprovoked twist. It happens out of nowhere, catching everyone off guard and leaving 'em reeling. It's unexpected, it's unpredictable, and it's oh-so deliciously twisty.
Types of Twists: The classics
Identity Reveal: Remember the "I am your father" moment? Yes. There's nothing quite like the shock of discovering that a character's true identity isn't what it seems. Whether it's a long-lost twin or a secret agent in disguise, identity reveals never fail to leave readers gasping for air. Mix it up to make it newer and you have an even tastier sandwich.
Motive Reveal: Ever wondered why that one seemingly innocent character was acting so shady? Well, it's time for a motive reveal – the moment when all becomes clear and the true intentions behind a character's actions are laid bare. It's like peeling back layers of an onion, only way more dramatic. (Plot twist: This entire post has been written so you will buy my book, The Sinner and The Scarred from Amazon! It is available in both Paperback and Ebook formats but if you have Kindle Unlimited you can read it for FREE!)
Background Reveal: Behind every great character is a great backstory. Well, these backstories can also be great plot twists. (What? The hero's love interest is the villain's child. WHAT? The hero's love interest is the villain! WHAT? THE HERO IS DATING BOTH THE VILLAIN AND THEIR CHILD!!) From dark secrets to hidden traumas, background reveals add depth and complexity to your story.
Character Deaths: Sometimes, the only way to shake things up is by "killing your darlings." Actually, whether it's a beloved hero sacrificing themselves for the greater good or a villain meeting their untimely demise, character deaths are guaranteed to leave readers in shock and awe. Especially when done right. (Set the mood for a fun wedding. Then kill someone at the wedding. Kill the bride. Or the groom. Kill 'em both. Have them kill each other!)
Destruction of Setting or Important Elements: Say goodbye to the status quo, because we're about to shake things up with a little destruction. Whether it's a beloved setting crumbling to the ground or a crucial element of the story being obliterated, destruction twists add a sense of urgency and chaos to your narrative. (Burn your hero's house down. Extra points if their family was still inside. Minus points if their dog was in there, though.)
Timeline Shift: A timeline shift can turn your story on its head, sending characters hurtling through time and space or revealing shocking truths about the past, present, and future. (It will be a weird way to find out you’re adopted, you know?)
Surprising Events in General: Sometimes, you just gotta throw caution to the wind and hit your readers with something completely unexpected. From random acts of kindness to bizarre coincidences, surprising events add an element of unpredictability to your story that'll keep readers guessing until the very end.
Special Ability Reveal: The moment when a character discovers they've got powers beyond their wildest dreams, things start getting out of hand. Whether it's flying, telekinesis, or the ability to talk to animals, special ability reveals add a touch of magic and wonder to your story.
Do remember when it comes to plot twists, the sky's the limit. But placement is key. Whether it's smack dab in the middle of your story or right at the climax, the timing of your twist can make or break its impact.
Now, let's touch on what NOT to do. Forced twists? No, thank you. Unbelievable plot developments? Hard pass. And let's not even get started on the dreaded plot armor– nothing kills the vibe faster than a last-minute rescue by bad writing. (Leave a comment if you’d like to learn more about what NOT to do!)
In conclusion, mastering the art of plot twists is no easy feat. It takes careful planning (AKA outlining of the story), strategic execution, and a whole lot of creativity. So go forth, soldiers, and twist those plots until they're unrecognizable. But remember, with great power comes great responsibility – don't abuse those twists, and always respect your readers' intelligence.
Now, go forth and twist to your heart's content. Happy writing! 🌀✨
Unleash the Power of Storytelling: Crafting the Ultimate Character Profile 101
Welcome, fellow storytellers and aspiring novelists! So, what's up? You have made a decision to grace the world of literature with your masterpiece, and now you're faced with that super challenging task of creating characters.
Fear not, my friend! I've got you covered with the ultimate guide to help you try to somehow navigate through the crazy labyrinth of character development. Buckle up, grab your much-needed favorite coffee(s) or energy drink(s), and let's dive into the truly intricate world of character creation!!
Basic Stats: Because It's Not Just Name, Rank, and Serial Number
Let's kick off with the basics, shall we? Name, role, sex, gender, age (because apparently, age is super crucial), race, ethnicity, culture – basically, the whole shebang. Don't forget to throw in some physical appearance details like height, body type, and whether they've got a face that could launch a thousand ships! Oh, and where are they from? No, not just their current residence, but the place they call home sweet home. Are they living large, scraping by, or just coasting through life? You, the creator, must have all deets!
Relationships: It's Not Just Complicated Facebook
Now, let's spill the tea on relationships. Family dynamics? Check ✓. Friends? Double check ✓. What's the deal with their family? Are they besties or mortal enemies? And don't skimp out on the juicy details – you (don't we all?) want to know about the love life, dating disasters, and whether they've ever had their heart broken. What's their love language? Because, you know, sometimes words of affirmation are all the jazz! Mainly focus on the MC's Relationship Drama because this is what drives your story forward. Dive deeply into the MC's relationships with others. Describe them in a few words, spill the tea on complicated conflicts, reveal their secrets, and dish out the juicy details on how they met. How will their relationships evolve as the story unfolds? And why? It's like a soap opera, but with even more character development.
Sexy Stuff: Attraction, Baby!
Let's talk sexy stuff – because it's more important than you think. Orientation, specific attractions (we're talking eyes, abs, feet…? 🤨🫥 and everything in between), and the nitty-gritty of their romantic escapades. Get those butterflies fluttering for sure!
Skills: Move Over, Jack of All Trades
Skills time! What are they good at? Did they master the art of ninja kicks through schooling or on the mean streets? Occupation, hobbies – spill it all out. You want to know what makes them a pro, or at least a decently good amateur.
Personality and Character: More Than Just Introvert vs. Extrovert
Time to psychoanalyze your character. Introvert, extrovert, ambivert – you need to know where they fall on the social spectrum. What are their strengths, weaknesses, fatal flaws, and personality types? Any internal conflicts brewing? Goals, dreams, fears, insecurities – lay it all out. And what's their go-to attire? Are they rocking the latest fashion or stuck in a time warp? And why?
Keys to Good Characters: Makes 'em Active, Not Couch Potatoes
Remember, we're crafting active characters who actually participate in the making of the story, rather than passive observers who just let the story happen to them. They should be the ones driving the story, not just tag along for the ride. Remember to give them fatal flaws, internal conflicts, and clear goals – the holy trinity of compelling characters!
Don't Stop Here: Keep the Creative Juices Flowing. Have fun with it. There is a lot more. Write useless facts about your characters, because the more you know them the better. Get into their heads and just rip 'em apart!
And there you have it – a roadmap to crafting characters that like kind of jump off the page,… sort of. Bonus tips: Write in the first person, spill the all-important details in detail, and be very intentional with your (aka your character's) choices.
Don't be very afraid to tweak this template to fit your kind of story, and organize it efficiently based on all your narrative needs.
Go forth, my fellow wordsmiths, and create characters that will live rent-free in your readers' heads. Happy writing!
Level Up Your Writing: The Tea on Why Editing and Revision Are Game Changers
Hey, fam! 🚀✨
So, you’ve survived the wild ride of writing your first draft, and now you’re wondering, “What’s next?” Cue the superhero music because it’s time to talk about the superhero duo of the writing world: Editing and Revision! Buckle up, wordsmiths, because we’re about to spill the tea on why these steps are crucial and how to rock them like a boss.
The Importance of Editing: Because No One Likes a Hot Mess 🙅♀️
Clarity is Queen:
Editing is like turning on the headlights in the dark tunnel of your first draft. It’s where you make sure your ideas make sense and aren’t as confusing as your ex’s mixed signals.
Style Upgrade:
Time to toss out those fashion faux pas from your first draft. Editing lets you polish your language and style until your writing is as sharp as your wit.
Buh-Bye Redundancy:
Ever read something and thought, “Why are you still talking?” Editing is where you kick out the unnecessary fluff and keep only the juiciest bits. Your readers will thank you.
The Role of Revision: Because Even Beyoncé Practices Before a Concert 🎤
Structure Matters:
Revision is like rearranging furniture to make your room look Instagram-worthy. Make sure your ideas flow seamlessly, and your readers aren’t stumbling over misplaced chairs (or paragraphs).
Character Glow-Up:
If your characters were a glow-up challenge on TikTok, revision is where they become viral sensations. Make ’em dynamic, relatable, and ready to steal the show.
Consistency is Key:
Imagine your story is a Netflix series — revision ensures there are no plot holes or confusing character arcs. Consistency is the binge-watchable secret sauce.
Effective Strategies for Rocking Editing and Revision:
Chill Before You Edit:
Take a breather after finishing your first draft. Distance yourself from your work so you can edit with fresh eyes. It’s like waiting for the tea to cool down before you spill it.
Tech Tools Are Your BFFs:
Grammar and spell-check tools are like your squad that always has your back. They catch the basic stuff, but remember, you’re the VIP editor. Don’t let them steal your spotlight.
Get the Squad Involved:
Share your work with your writing crew or even your bestie. External feedback is like having a whole focus group to tell you what’s hot and what’s not.
Read Out Loud:
Read your work out loud. Seriously. It’s like giving your writing a mic drop moment. You’ll catch awkward phrasing and pacing issues that sneak past silent reading.
Conclusion:
There you have it, writing fam! Editing and revision are your secret weapons to turn your writing from a hot mess into a masterpiece. Embrace the process, have fun with it, and watch your words shine.
Happy editing, and may your revisions be as flawless as your selfie game! 📚💫
New Year, New Words: How to Crush Your Writing Goals in 2024
Hey, fam! 🎉✨ As we're about to dive into another lap around the sun, it's time to set some lit writing goals. Whether you're dreaming of a bestselling novel or just want to tackle more projects, let's spill the tea on how to make those dreams a reality. Buckle up, because we're about to slay 2024! (Literally.)
Setting Goals: Because Adulting is Hard, Right?
Get Specific AF:
Let's not be vague like that confusing relationship status. Break down your goals into bite-sized bits. "Write a book" is so 2023. Try "Finish Chapter 1 by January 15th." Much better, right?
Chop it Like it's Hot:
Big projects can be overwhelming. Cut them into pieces, like you're dishing out slices of pizza. It's way more manageable and won't leave you in a writing coma.
Deadlines for Drama:
Set some deadlines! Nothing gets the creative juices flowing like a little pressure. Plus, it's an excuse to use the word "deadline" and feel important.
Staying Disciplined and Focused: Adulting Level - Pro
Create a Writing Schedule:
Find your writing groove and create a schedule. Are you a 2 AM poet or a 6 PM essayist? Stick to your time and rock that writing vibe.
Distraction Detox:
Ditch the distractions! Turn off Netflix (just for a bit, I promise), find a cozy spot, and let the words flow. The less drama, the more words.
Get an Accountability BFF:
Share your goals with a writing buddy. It's like having a workout buddy but for your brain. Accountability is key, and hey, it's more fun when you're not in it alone.
Overcoming Writer's Block:
Change Your Scene, Dude:
Staring at the same wall? Change it up! Take your laptop to a coffee shop or your backyard. Fresh air and a change of scenery can do wonders.
Freewrite Your Feelings:
Ever heard of freewriting? Set a timer and just go wild. No rules, no judgments. It's like therapy, but with more words.
Celebrating Wins:
Treat time:
Small wins deserve big celebrations. Finish a chapter? Treat yourself to some chocolate or a dance party in your living room. You're basically a writing superstar.
Flexibility is Key:
Life's a rollercoaster, and so is writing. Be flexible with your goals. It's okay to adjust if life throws you a curveball. You got this!
Lastly, cheers to a year of word wizardry and conquering those writing dreams! Let's make 2024 the year we slay our writing goals like the literary legends we are.
Surviving the Writing Struggle: How to Keep it Cool While Slaying Stress
Hey, fellow word warriors and aspiring scribes! 🚀✨ Let's talk about the not-so-glamorous side of being a wordsmith - the stress, the self-doubt, and the eternal question, "Will I ever finish this damn story?" Spoiler alert: You will, but first, let's spill the tea on handling the chaos without losing your sanity.
Spotting Stress in Your Writing Journey: OMG, Drama!
So, you're staring at your blank doc, contemplating life's great mysteries like, "How will everything be done?" and "Will I survive this rollercoaster?"
Calm down, Shakespeare; stress is part of the game. Recognize it, embrace it, then show it who's the boss.
Strategies for Keeping it Sane: Adulting Level - Pro
Chop it Like it's Hot:
Seriously, don't look at your project like it's a massive iceberg about to sink your Titanic of creativity. Break it down into bite-sized pieces. You'll feel like a genius crossing off those mini milestones, promise.
Realistic Goals, Duh:
Setting goals that aren't straight out of a fantasy novel is crucial. No one's writing a 100,000-word masterpiece overnight. Be real with yourself, and maybe you won't end up hating your own deadlines.
Time Management (or Just Wing It):
Procrastination is an art form, but so is managing your time. Create a schedule that doesn't make you want to run for the hills. Balance is key, my friends. Write a bit, Netflix a bit, repeat.
Edit Like a Ninja:
Writing is messy, like trying to eat a burrito in a car. Embrace the chaos and save the perfectionism for editing. It's where the magic (and sanity) happens.
Crushing Self-Doubt Like a Boss: Because You're a Rockstar 🌟
Check Yo' Self:
Negative thoughts? Nah, fam. Challenge those bad vibes. Replace them with positive vibes only. You got this. Remember, doubting yourself is so last season.
Squad Up:
Join a writing community or bug your friends for feedback. Share your struggles and victories. It's like a support group for word nerds, and it's fab.
Party Like it's 1999:
Celebrate your wins, no matter how small. Finished a chapter? Treat yourself to a victory dance. You're basically the Hemingway of the 21st century.
Conclusion:
So there you have it, my fellow scribes! The writing journey is a wild ride of stress, self-doubt, and creativity. But remember, you're not alone. Break it down, set real goals, manage your time, and kick self-doubt to the curb. Keep it cool, keep it sassy, and most importantly, keep on writing. Your story deserves to be told, and you've got this! 💪📚 #WritingLife #WordNerdVibes
Master the Art of Writing the Perfect First Draft:
A-Did-Not-Know-You-Needed Guide for New Writers
Turn that blank ‘Untitled Document’ into an elusive first draft!
New writers, gather 'round, for I am about to bestow upon you the wisdom of the ages, the secret sauce of writing! The secret to crafting a perfect first draft. Ahh well! In reality, there's no such thing as a ‘perfect’ first draft, and that's precisely what makes this process so much fun (also, note the sarcasm throughout).
Step 1: Procrastinate Like a Pro
First things first, you must master the art of procrastination. Don't start writing that first draft right away. Instead, make elaborate to-do lists, clean your entire house, rearrange your bookshelves by color, and ponder the meaning of life. The more time you waste, the better your first draft will be. Trust me; it's science.
Step 2: Obsess Over the Perfect Opening Line
The opening line is the most crucial part of your first draft. Spend weeks, months, or even years agonizing over it. It's got to be pure magic, something that will leave readers in awe. After all, it's the only thing that matters in your entire manuscript. Ignore the fact that you can always change it later; perfection is what you're after, right?
Step 3: Compare Yourself to the Literary Greats
While writing your first draft, it's crucial to constantly compare your work to the literary greats like Shakespeare, Hemingway, and Austen. Ask yourself, "Would Shakespeare have used that adjective?" If the answer is no, delete your entire draft and start again. You're aiming for nothing less than timeless prose here!
Step 4: Edit as You Go
Why wait until you've finished your first draft to edit? That's for amateurs. The moment you type a sentence, go back and rewrite it. Obsess over grammar, word choice, and punctuation. Every word must be perfect before you can proceed. Remember, you're not writing; you're editing the first draft, and you have to get it right the first time.
Step 5: Seek Validation from Friends and Family
Don't forget to send your first draft to everyone you know, including your grandma, your second cousin, and even your dog. Their feedback is absolutely essential. If they don't shower you with praise and declare you the next J. K. Rowling, then clearly, you're a terrible writer. Their opinions matter more than your own, always.
Step 6: Compare Your Progress to Others
Keep a close eye on your fellow writers' progress. If they finish their first drafts faster than you, it's a sure sign that they're more talented and dedicated. Be sure to let envy and self-doubt consume you entirely. It's the only path to success, right?
Step 7: Embrace the Writer's Block
Writer's block is your best friend. When you can't seem to write a single word, it's a clear sign that you're destined for greatness. Spend hours staring at a blank screen, and don't forget to complain about it on social media. Everyone will love hearing about your creative struggles.
So there you have it! Just remember, writing is all about self-doubt and suffering, but the only acceptable outcome is PERFECTION!
Follow these sarcastic steps to write the perfect first draft, and you'll be well on your way to literary stardom.
