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peer feedback: where can we help?
I am curious about this, do you tend to give more consideration to feedback postings that have a few words or those that have many words?
Hi!
If I am being honest, yes. As a busy college student, I am looking for the easiest peer reblogs to complete. So, when the feedback posts have fewer words, I am more likely to pay attention to them. Great question!
Bella
Original Content Week 15, Post #2
What do you like most about your essay?
My favorite part of my essay is that you can see everything I have learned throughout the semester. This is important to me because with every class I take I hope to continue growing as an individual both academically and non-academically. When reading my essay you can clearly tell how much I have grown in this class. This is important because in order to learn academically you must continue to grow as an individual within the classes. I also have enjoyed reflecting back on the semester in my letter. It adds to the viewing of growth throughout the semester.
Hi!
I think this is great! As students, we are constantly learning new things and I think it's important that we recognize that growth. So the fact that this is visible in your essay is amazing!
Bella
Thursday Check-in Post Week #15
What assignment questions do you have that will help you complete the assignment successfully?-
Does the assignment have to be in APA format?
Can we do a question-and-answer format?
Do you want it double-spaced?
Is this more of a reflection assignment?
@npfannen
Original Content Post Week #15 (3)
What are you most proud of with your writing process?-
I am most proud of the fact that I learned the purpose of content strategy and what that means, while tieing it into web writing. This allowed me to build a solid foundation for my writing process. Web writing is dependent on audience engagement and how the audience responds to your writing. With this, I learned so much about the process. This process takes a lot of drafting, revisions, peer feedback, more drafting, more audience feedback, and final revisions. Throughout this class, I was able to put this process into action with the Content Analysis Project. Ultimately, building upon my writing skills, drafting, and revisions.
Original Content Post Week #15 (2)
What do I like most about my learning?-
What I liked most about my learning throughout this class was that it was ongoing. Each week, I was learning something new. I was almost always building off of what I learned the week before as well. This type of learning is beneficial as we continue to learn and build on our base. This process allowed me to learn a lot this semester, specifically about web writing.
Original Content Post Week #15 (1)
What do you like most about your essay?-
Personally, what I liked most about my essay was the fun images and graphics. I thought that each image in my slideshow was meaningful and made connections with my analysis. My images enhanced my writing because, as the audience read my reasoning/explanations, they had a visual to go along with it, so they knew exactly what I was talking about.
#DrPGame Extra Credit Week #14
We are finishing all the projects - share pictures of your favorite snack foods for staying motivated while you do all the school work-
These are my go-tos!
Original Content Week 14, Post #3
post an image of an element of your Content Analysis that needs input from your peers. Post an image AND request the feedback you want.
I am looking for feedback on my title page. I made the design quick because it was something simple. However, I am wondering if it fancy enough for this project. Should I add more images relevant to the content of my paper? Is it too plain? Or is it good for this project? My only concern is I do not want the title page to take away from the content in my paper. I am looking forward to hearing the thoughts of others in the class.
Hi!
I think it's good so far! One thing I would add or change is the position of the photos or choose different images. They look very similar and at first I thought they were all the same image/player copied. Otherwise, I like it!
Bella
Original Content Post Week 14, Post 3
Above is a section of my background knowledge section of the paper. I tried to give a basic rundown of how posts from each of my 3 movie theatre accounts usually go. This is to provide the audience a basis on what these accounts are like and what their audience expects and already knows about the accounts.
I was wondering if my graph was fitting for the section? Also does this section read well and is it understandable to those who are not familiar with the accounts?
I also tried to highlight the main focus of each account to show what aspects of movie experiences they like to promote. Does this come across well in my writing? is it helpful to know before I later make comparisons on the data and specific posts?
Hi!
I think it is absolutely fitting for this section! You can never go wrong with a visual to help the audience understand what you're talking about. Personally, I think you did a great job explaining to the audience about your research topic. I would maybe add another sentence builing upon what aspects each movie experiences they like to promote. Overall, good job!
Bella
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What did you learn about your writing process that will help you after college?
I learned that when it comes to my writing process it is beneficial to have others look at my work. I feel like when others look at my work it is easier to find the mistakes then when I am looking at it myself. When it comes to my future it is important to have someone maybe read over a resume before I submit it and also as I create IEPs for my future students it will be very important for someone to look over that.
Hi Maggie!
I learned this as well! With the help of others and another set of eyes, they are able to catch mistakes that we didn't see before! I also agree, i think that when it comes to resumes, I will definitely need help from a peer to review it.
Bella
Original Content Post Week #14 (3)
Post an image of an element of your Content Analysis that needs input from your peers. Post an image AND request the feedback you want. Be focused!! Only focused requests count!
Repeatable x3 at least #writ318mu #week14
This is a great prompt for peer reblog
I have 7 graphs like these. Should I include another type of graph to display my data?
Original Content Post Week #14 (3)
Post an image of an element of your Content Analysis that needs input from your peers. Post an image AND request the feedback you want. Be focused!! Only focused requests count!
Repeatable x3 at least #writ318mu #week14
This is a great prompt for peer reblog
For the appendix and codes used section, is this all we need to include? Or am I missing something?
Original Content Post Week #14 (3)
Post an image of an element of your Content Analysis that needs input from your peers. Post an image AND request the feedback you want. Be focused!! Only focused requests count!
Repeatable x3 at least #writ318mu #week14
This is a great prompt for peer reblog
For this request, I was wondering if this is enough background information on who she is as a content creator? I don't want my slides to be too lengthy, but I want to ensure that I include enough information for others to understand.
Original Content Post Week #14 (2)
What did you learn about your writing process that will help you after college?-
Something specific that I learned about my writing process that will help me after college is that revision and peer feedback matter so much. I feel like we always think our work is good until we take a step back and let someone see it from another perspective. Peer review was extremely helpful for my writing process. It gave me time to take a break from revising and collaborate with others and their thoughts. This process ensures that my writing is clear, well-organized, and grammatically correct. Ultimately, improving my writing process down the road.
Original Content Post Week #14 (1)
What did you learn about drafting across multiple weeks that will inform your writing process after college?-
After drafting across multiple weeks, something I will take away and utilize in my writing process after college is that things take time. I feel like working on simple sections at a time and ensuring they are meeting all the requirements works so much better than working on the entire project at once. This way I was able to stay organized and focus on one section at a time to ensure my best work. I then could go back the next week and see what changes I need to make based on my peer review. I felt like this process kept me from feeling overwhelmed with work. Overall, I will definitely use this writing process in the future.
#DrPGame Extra Credit Week #13
Share an image of data you've seen posted in the real world.-
Original Content Week 13, Post #2
How are you developing style to build your argument in the content analysis?
I am developing style by using words that will relate to my paper. My paper is focusing on MLB athletes and their social media engagement rates. In order to portray this properly I am using terminology that is typically used when discuss their schedules. Some examples may include the post season, playoffs, World Baseball Classic, Allstar Week, and Spring Training. This helps see if the time in the season affects the engagement rates.
Hi!
I think it's great that you are developing style by using words that are commonly used/linked to your topic. This will give the audience a better understanding of what you're trying to say. I think it's great that you have identified these key terms as you did above; it will catch the reader's eye. This also shows the audience that you know what you're talking about and builds credibility. Great job!
Bella
