the style of writing is not the problem, not the genre, not the subject matter, not even the words themselves. the SINGLE defining issue with the âTumblr Proseâ style i was trying to tackle is that itâs front loaded with imagery and metaphor and completely lacking in sense, reason, symmetry, motion, conveying information. i agree that plenty of writing can sound good and feel good to read when itâs all metaphor and visceral images but it needs to have a baseline that can carry it through or else the tail wags the dog and itâs all cool âquotableâ lines and no substance, nothing to read between the lines, no character