I'm new here, is this a upcoming yandere visual novel and can you please tell me what the story is about ? 🥹❤️
Hi and yes! Sorry for responding so late, I've been working on the demo script like crazy so I haven't checked Tumblr for a while 😖
I copy and pasted these from my itch page drafts which will probably be edited later on 🙌
About 🖤
can we fix things? is a visual novel where your yandere ex-boyfriend wants to get back together with you! Keep up your work at the local diner and avoid getting distracted. You have three days left to make rent or else you'll be tossed out onto streets.
Here's the synopsis 👇
"can we fix things?"
That's the last message you get from your ex-boyfriend, Corbin after you broke up with him. You block him, of course. His actions leading up to the separation still left a bitter taste in your mouth.
You work at an old diner trying to make ends meet, as well as trying to keep the loan sharks surveilling you at bay. Maybe it's not the life you envisioned yourself living, but hey, at least you haven't drowned yet, right?
One day Corbin shows up again, sticking to you like glue, and asking for a chance to talk, to try again. Will you give him another chance? Do you have a choice?
Hey guys it's been some time since I last gave an update so here it is! :)
These past few days I've really been working on getting the script done since that's usually the hardest part for me.
Anyways, here's my very mathematically correct calculations.
Progress towards demo:
Scripting ~ 80% done
Sprites ~ 100% done
BGs ~ 95% done
CGs ~ 65% done
Coding ~ 25% done
The demo will definitely be released this month even if it's not perfect since I really just want to get it out there.
I know I said I wouldn't be doing doing it yet, but I decided to redo Corbin's sprite and also finish two other side characters' sprites.
Introducing...
Reina
Matt
and of course, the new Corbin :D
I'm a complete beginner at making visual novels, so redoing Corbin's sprite was very necessary lol 😔
Roadmap
I'm planning to have cwft consist of 4 chapters and 3 main endings for now.
- 1 "Happy" Ending
- 1 Neutral Ending
- 1 Good Ending
There'll also be several small endings that can achieved throughout the chapters, but I'm not sure about the total amount for now.
Chapter 1 will most likely be released around the end of June . It's about 11,000 words currently so it'll probably be around an hour of gameplay.
That being said, I want to be transparent guys, I have no proofreaders (T_T) It's mostly because I'm too embarrassed to show anyone but I just wanted to give a heads up for some leeway.
As for how long it'll take me to complete this vn, I'm not completely sure. This vn is just a fun passion project for me that I want to share with people, but it's one that I'm really feeling committed to working on consistently.
Also, if you made it to the end, here's a peak at what the main menu will look like!
I've been playing around with possible art styles for cgs, and I think I finally settled on one 🤧
TW: Torture, blood, knife, violence
Here's a black and white version! I like how it kind of looks like a manga panel hehehe
Omg, what a scary, evil man 😖😳
My art style is lowkey all over the place, and I kind of want to change Corbin's sprite, but I'll hold off for now to protect my sanity (-_-；)
Also, since this piece basically reveals it, Corbin works as somewhat of a freelance assassin, or at least that's what he wants to believe 😅
Some of his clients put hits out to satisfy feelings like revenge and like to leave specific instructions such as torturing the target on camera, which is basically where I got the idea for this drawing ᕕ( ՞ ᗜ ՞ )ᕗ
Hiii I'm sorry if this has been asked before but how old is Corbin?
Hey, no problem! I actually haven't answered this question before which reminds me that I should probably make a profile sheet for him sometime soon Σ(゜゜)
For immersion purposes, he won't have a completely set age but I like to think of him being in his early to mid twenties with MC being about a year younger than him :)
Heyyy! How are you? How was your week? I hope it was great! I was thinking about this in the shower, so here it goes: what would Corbin be like with a Brazilian reader 🇧🇷? Would he be concerned with learning about his idol and his culture? And if the reader returned to his country, would Corbin go along? I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE ANSWER, THANK YOU SO MUCH IN ADVANCE!
hey my week was pretty decent thanks for asking (≡^∇^≡)‼️
I'm officially on summer break now, so I'll really be working on getting a demo out some time soon! ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
Answering your question, Corbin would be very interested in learning about MC’S culture and traditions ( ﾟ∀ﾟ)!! Since MC and Corbin kind of start off as awkward neighborhood friends, I think Corbin would actually get a chance to see and learn about MC’S culture when they're both still little kids.
Corbin likes knowing everything about MC, so he would really like hearing them talk about their culture, favorite memories, and traditions.
If MC wants to visit their home country, Corbin would love to go with them. He would be so happy MC lets him join in the first place after he messed things up so bad (T_T)
He actually has a lot of experience with traveling due to his job, so if MC needed help he could make the process much smoother, especially because he has special connections ;-) plus he gets to feel like a really cool guy (*｀▽ ´ *)!
Tysm for this ask! I'll be posting somewhat of a vn road map soon just so that I can get a clearer visual of the direction I want to take and also share a bit more about it ᕕ( ՞ ᗜ ՞ )ᕗ🙌
AHHH CORBIN IS SO CUTE!! I'M GOING TO PINCH HIS CHEEKS AND BITE HIM ALL OVER, I love how we can find the greatest treasures on Tumblr browsing through recent yandere tag posts haha ;)) I'm going to take advantage of the open box and ask Corbin, please forgive me in advance, English is not my first language so I use a translator, here it goes:
1- What was the reason for Mc's breakup with Corbin?
2- In a relationship, is he the dom or pass type?
3- Is he the type who steals things and has a shrine for his beloved?
4- Has he ever broken into Mc's house?
5- Would he create a fake social media account to get close to Mc again?
6- How would Corbin react to a very good MC!gamer, who has already completed the most famous and the most forgotten games, has an impeccable login, and always has a Nintendo under his arm?
7- Headcanons: Super-gifted, intelligent MC with a perfect score, excellent grades, and quick thinking?
hehe Sorry for the many questions, feel free not to answer them if you don't feel comfortable. Corbin and Yuen are so cute! Keep up the good work, I'll be happy to play some of your games in the future 💕
omg I'm so glad you like Corbin ‼️(≡^∇^≡) and thanks so much for calling my little posts a treasure I appreciate it! ♡(>_<)
He would definitely let you bite his cheeks, but he might get a little too excited so please let him him bite you back 😖
Answers below the cut!
1. For your first question, it's a little of a spoiler so I won't go too deep into it but he was definitely at fault for the break up 😔😬 A lot of what happened was out of his control (though MC doesn't know it yet) but it ultimately leads to MC being fed up with him and ending things.
2. I wasn't sure if you meant dom and pass like in a... sexual manner or not, but when I made Corbin I definitely imagined him as a more dominant type of person in a relationship. He would have a sort of soft and gentle type of dominance for the most part, except when you're doing something he doesn't like then he might be a little bit more mean and sometimes evil 🥹 BUT he would truly believe (or try to convince himself) that it was for your best interest.
3 + 4. He doesn't exactly have a shrine, but he does has collection full of things he stole from MC and their apartment. He likes to keep it organized and labeled in his drawers like a freak and for the most precious items he'll keep them in special bags/containers to preserve their MCness(?) better.
Corbin has broken into MC's home multiple times and he likes to help them out a little bit sometimes, doing things like changing the lights and keeping food stocked. He doesn't do too much though since he doesn't want to make you wary of anything different.
5. This is really nice question since I didn't really think about this method, but I think he would make a fake account to keep himself updated on MC's life for the most part.
As far as using a fake account to get close to them again, I think he would prefer not to do this since it would make him feel jealous of himself? in a weird way 😭 The idea of MC getting closer and talking to someone they think isn't him would make him feel a little defeated. I won't spoil too much but he's a little more of an imposing type of yandere, so he would just track you down and see you in person.
6. Corbin would LOVE if MC was really good at video games since he also really likes them. He would love playing games with you or listening to you rant about your games and their lore. However, he's actually pretty bad at videos games so you might need to carry him in game 😖 Even though he's bad at a lot of games he still likes them and would try really hard to get better so he could keep up with you.
7. If MC was really smart and alert, I think Corbin would be much more careful about how he acts around them so that he doesn't scare them off. Academically, Corbin's just slightly above average, but he is very intelligent in terms of people reading and getting them to do what he wants. He is also physically gifted with fast reflexes and strength so if MC is gifted in that area he might be able to match/overpower them.
Ultimately, I think he would choose to act in a a way that best makes MC feel secure around him. For example, since MC and Corbin get together around high school, so I think he would actually start acting like he's struggling in classes. He'd ask them for help and tutoring just to spend more time with him and really get them to loosen their guard and feel like they're in power in a way.
thanks sm for your questions and your support (-^〇^-) I really appreciate it, it gives me motivation 🫶‼️
1-¿Is it possible there are comics or more information and details about how the yandere OCs met MC?
2-¿Also, how would Corbin and Yuen react if a boy is (Y/N) were given a bouquet of roses, but there were people around looking at them with disgust and starting to criticize and judge them What would you two yandere boys do?
Question for Corbin:
1-¿Did breaking up with Y/N affect him a lot because she was his only love?
2-¿What would his perfect date with Y/N be like?
Question for Yuen:
1-¿Was Y/N his first human pet?
hey I'm so glad you're interested in my OCS‼🫶
1. For your first question, there will be more small comic snippets of Corbin and Yuen's lore coming out later on 🙌
It's still a really big work in progress, but I'm actually working on visual novel for Corbin right now so a lot of his story will be revealed there‼️ᕕ( ՞ ᗜ ՞ )ᕗ.
What I will say for now is that MC and Corbin met when they were really little. They spend a long time just being aware of one another before actually getting close and dating around high school.
For Yuen, I'm also hoping to make a visual novel based around him sometime down the line. I was actually planning to make it for Yan Jam but I ran out of adrenaline unfortunately (T_T).
Yuen and MC's first meeting is kind of a spoiler for now so let's just say that they intrigued him in some way.
2. It looks you're using a translator, so sorry if I misinterpreted the question (>_<)
I think you were asking how they would react to people judging them for giving roses to a male MC?
For Corbin, I think he would definitely try to not let it ruin the moment. He'd try to smile to cheer you up and get your attention away from those type of people. Corbin in general is very apathetic about society so he isn't really surprised when these type of things happen 😔.
If it really distresses MMC, he might try to get them to a more comfortable setting where they don't have to worry about being judged. I think seeing how distressed MMC gets would just convince him more that his extreme methods of "protection" are righteous and necessary.
Unfortunately for Corbin, he's not invincible to the law, so he can't just slime out everyone who expresses malice towards MC without some sort of risk (T_T). Depending on how many people were around and if it was in a public area he might decide to track them down and kill them for ruining his sweet gesture.
Yuen, on the other hand, can slay whoever he wants with little consequences because of his high social status ᕦ( ᐛ )ᕡ. Nobody would even dare to say anything negative about him or his human, at least not in the same radius. I think its more likely that Yuen would just end up getting gossiped about being some rich freak with a human fetish rather than getting judged for being with another man.
However, if he and MMC did face that sort of judgement, he'd probably slaughter those people on the spot and have his servants clean up the mess 😀👍. He'd be slightly annoyed and confused why anybody had a problem with him and a MMC being together since on his planet, homophobia is much less common while speciesism and classism is rampant. He'd try to continue as normal with acting sweet before realizing that it might've really scared MMC for some reason 🧐
Questions for Corbin
Without spoiling too much, yes.
A perfect date to him would be a day where he gets MC all to himself so, I think he'd really like small picnics, movie nights, and just spending quality time with them 🖤
Question for Yuen
Yes, MC is his first and only human pet. Him getting MC was already a very out of character thing for him to do which you'll learn more about in the vn I'll make for him some day down the line ╥﹏╥
he's a freaky alien yandere aristocrat just trying his best to give his new human pet the greatest quality of life care in all the ways he thinks best 🥹🫶
this is him killing the poachers who sold you to him after they roughed you up too much
