Peer Review #1
Are my angry messages angry enough? I am not sure if I fully committed to the angry fan. I also came up with a few ways to respond to negative messages.
Definitely angry enough, but I would include details about the show or specifics.
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Peer Review #1
Are my angry messages angry enough? I am not sure if I fully committed to the angry fan. I also came up with a few ways to respond to negative messages.
Definitely angry enough, but I would include details about the show or specifics.
Pivot!!!!
Peer Review #2
This is one of the slides in my Design 2 project about pivoting strategies for Interns when it comes to angry fan comments. I wanted to show that while no comment is going to be the same, there are general patterns and strategies to follow when it comes to creating a response. Does this look good? Do my strategies make sense?
I think it looks great, all of them make total sense. If I was the intern I think this would definitely help me. I especially like that you included the hyperlink, that allows you to go back to the Agenda Page, really cool!
Peer Review Request 2/2
Hi all. I am confused about the "Key Concepts" section of the Audience Analysis. There isn't a clear prompt in this section. Are we just supposed to make sure that we think about these concepts in the previous sections? I added a brief summary of how I incorporated each key concept into my Audience Analysis. Am I properly addressing this section?
I took it as things to keep I'm mind while writing the assignment, that we should have all the concepts featured in the project, don't really need to write definitions or give explanations. Hope this helps.
Design Project Request
This is one of my responses to an angry fan post, I'm asking
1- is this too generic?
2- what could change, how would you change it?
Long Youtube videos
The appeal of long youtube videos (10+ Minutes) is that it's free streaming. As more and more people get rid of their cable TV, comes a need to replace it with another streaming platform. However the problem with that is the platforms cost more money and shows are spread out between them, so one platform might have 2 shows you watch while another has 3 shows and a third has another 2 shows. yes, the platforms are constantly switching the shows they have but then you're left waiting till your platform picks it up, or you buy all three platforms and you're stuck with a bill that's only getting more expensive as they raise the price of memberships. The answer is YouTube, people are replacing their platforms with YouTube, where they can find series and shows for free in all lengths and genres.
Short Post Style Rule
When writing short posts you want to get to the point quickly. So the style rule for short posts is to be clear and concise.
The Society
The Society was a show on Netflix that ran for only one season in 2019, the show was like if you took lord of the Flies and made it modern. The show followed a high school senior class as they left for a camping trip only to have to turn around and come back just hours later, the class then goes on to find no one but them left in the town. With all exits and connections to the outside world blocked. the seniors have to find out what it's like to live on their own with ultimate freedom and no control. Following the end of season 1, many of the show's fans including me were confused, angry, and sad when Netflix announced it would not return for another season.
check-in
My question relates to the intern reader,
How do you know what the intern already knows, or are you assuming they know nothing?
What advice do you have when writing for the intern?
check in
the question i have for this week is how do you write for an audience of people who are already creators? They probably know more then me about what works and what doesn't. So how do you make it believable?
Peer Request 2
Should I go into more detail with my introduction, if so, what are some other bits of info that I should include?
You might want to include what you will be looking at to determine wether the information will be harmful or helpful!
Peer Review #1
Do my graphs have enough information? Can you look at them and know what the caption is and how many likes each photo received for each person? It was hard to create graphs for all three dancers I chose since they each have a huge difference in what they post and the amount of likes they post. My research question is how different dancers with different styles connect with the dance world. Looking at the comments and likes I was able to see who people relate more too.
I would think about making them more similar like if you include captions on one include it on the other and have the same amount of posts on the graph. also, be fun and include some different colors!
Hardest Part of Content Creation
What is the hardest part about content creation to me?
Social media is usually about quick information that catches your eye. I struggle with condensing information in a helpful way and making creative witty titles. I have difficulty with the text/description elements when it comes to content creation and writing in general. I struggle with condensing information in a helpful way and creative witty titles.
I think creating visuals and writing out super rough bullet points first helps me work though the final text.
I also get a bit nervous about posting things in general. It's not the thought of a failing post that scares me, but a post that a lot of people see.
totally felt, It takes me 10 minutes to write a three-word caption that I feel good enough to post. Now do it for a project where I have to think strategically about how it will affect its success, let's just say it taking me a while. At least you don't have to publicly post your example content!
data elements
For my project, I'm using the data from views and likes. I'm using these to measure which of the three styles of true crime storytelling does best quantitatively. the difference between views and likes will tell me which style is more successful.
the easy part of creating content
The easiest part of creating content for my project was making all the written parts like the bio, titles, and descriptions. the thumbnail wasn't hard to make either.
What is hard about content creation
so far I have found the hardest part is the format I chose for the project. I chose to use hour-long videos of people telling true crime stories, so I'm still stuck figuring out if I should be making the same as my example content or just snippets of a video.
peer requests 1 & 2
Hi trying to see how I can make this title page more interesting and on theme, my write guide is for true crime story YouTube creators. if you have any ideas I'd love to hear them
2. I wanted to get opinions on my introduction please let me know if it is readable and if I should change anything.
Thanks!
My Go-To Video Content
Lately has been DIY videos and homemakers! I find them so interesting and inspiring! I've been loving Alexandra Gater's videos especially.
I love DIY home renovation and design, it's what I have been watching most on my downtime at work. Currently, I have been watching the channel 'Hunting for George" a lot.