āHe was quietly, startlingly charmed that for all his curt, practical manner, Courcey had chosen such a pretty kind of magic to show Robin.ā - A MARVELLOUS LIGHT by Freya Marske ( @fahye )
Presenting the Patreon fanart poll winner for the month of October! Gosh, I would take any excuse in the world to draw the characters from this book. If you havenāt read it yet, I canāt recommend it enough. The magical system alone is mindblowing, nevermind Freya Marskeās beautiful prose. This one isnāt to be missed if you love queer historical fantasy. š
Drew main characters as Tarot, referencing to Three Star Warriors in Link Click, so here we go:
Lu Guang as Star of Courage: XVIII Moon - the archetype: night (overcoming fear, returning to the light)
Cheng Xiaoshi as Star of Justice: VIII Justice is the archetype of the mind (awareness of the laws, fair play; what you sow is what you reap)
Qiao Ling as Star of Wisdom: IX Star - the archetype: wisdom (hope, vision of the future - a sense of renewal, a surge of strength)
Darker in theme and content than its predecessor, more polished in terms of plot and pacing, more cohesive from start to finish. Still not without its problems, but I liked this substantially more, more even than I expected to.
Still, Iād rather talk about the problems rather than endlessly gush about how much I adore my best boy Alec. Because I could. But I wonāt.
So, those problems:
Micum. He was a major side character in the first book, and this plot would have me believe heās one of the mystical Four that are needed to save the world from the Big Bad. But heās not present at all in this book until Seregil goes to fetch him from home 2/3 of the way through, and even when heās around, heās not really doing much. The page-space I expected him to fill here was entirely taken up by the military subplot featuring his daughter Beka, and given the triumphant-but-not-perfect way the ending falls out, I honestly donāt see why she couldnāt have taken over his role entirely, even in the prophetic sense.
And while I like Beka and I understand the point of her arc, honestly, the military maneuvering was boring compared to the rest of the story, and it was hard to be invested in the various injuries and deaths among her troops, because I didnāt have time to get to know them, and meanwhile in another plot thread my favorite character was being psychically tortured by an evil, vengeful necromancer. What can stand up to that, in terms of engagement?
Certain aspects of the ending were not just foreshadowed, but telegraphed, to the point where I have a hard time believing Seregil didnāt see it comingā¦
Which is tied to my dissatisfaction with Nysanderās constant insistence that everything related to the prophecy must be kept strictly secret on pain of death, until oops Seregil figures out a bunch of it on his own, so then Nysander is like ālol I guess you can warn the others then.ā And thatās before Alec falls into enemy hands. Why the sudden change of heart? Nysander acts like not telling them is mostly to spare them the dread of knowing that āa terrible Something,ā as Seregil puts it, might happenābut then after the fact, Alec is pleased that he couldnāt tell the enemy anything important during his torture, because he didnāt know anything important, despite Seregil explaining the prophecy. The prophecy that was the enemyās plan in the first place, so didnāt they already know? And the actual information that needed to be kept secret wasnāt something Seregil ever knew, exactly, and wasnāt revealed to the enemy by him, but through the murky Ylinestra/Thero subplot at the beginning. Iām genuinely confused by the ways secrets are regarded and handled in this story, because I canāt figure out why theyāre vital sometimes and less dangerous other times.
Maybe not so much a problem, exactly, but this ties up all our plot threads pretty damn neatly, so if I had read this at the time of its publishing, I would have dusted my hands together and said, āCool ending, thatās taken care of.ā But there are five more books. I own the next one and glanced at the authorās note at the beginning, which repeatedly and pointedly declares that āThis is not a trilogy.ā So where do we go from here? I love Alec and Seregil and will be happy to read more about them, but I feel like the Big Bad is vanquished, and the war that got started in this book may not be over but wasnāt particularly interesting without the mystical evil, soā¦
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