Thunderbird (#1) by Sonia Nimr, translated by M. Lynx Qualey
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Genre/Category: Fantasy for PreK to 6th Grade
Target Age Group: 4th – 6th Grade, or 11-13 years old (Kirkus Reviews, 2022).
Summary:
Noor, a 13-year-old Palestinian girl, is struggling in the wake of her parents’ death as she is unwelcomed and unwanted at her uncle and aunt’s house, when strange fires begin to happen, always around Noor. With the help of her mother’s friend, Dr. Samir, Noor discovers that she has a special gift that ties her to the life of the thunderbird, a phoenix creature that must be saved. In this first part, Noor travels through time with the help of djinns disguised as cats and girls that look all too familiar to save the life and history of the thunderbird.
Justification:
It felt incredibly important to me that I actively seek out Palestinian stories for this assignment, not just because of the current state of the world, but because they are often an overlooked populace, one that Americans would benefit to read and hear from. I purposely took several classes in my undergraduate degree focused on the Israeli/Palestinian conflict, where we read several different children’s books (Tasting the Sky by Ibtisam Barakat was one of the most memorable). To begin, I simply began to Google for elementary and middle school Palestinian books, with no clear focus. I wanted to see what was out there and what would be available for me to read. After about a day or two of searching and verifying age ranges and blog criteria, I settled on Thunderbird by Sonia Nimr, the first book in a three-book series. I discovered this through the University of Texas Press website. Thunderbird was shortlisted for the 2023 Saif Ghobash Banipal Prize for Arabic Literary Translation (University of Texas Press, 2022). The Dallas Public Library had a few copies, so I read a physical book of this copy. It should be noted that this book is published through a university press, so the structure of the book is a bit strange for a children’s book. It has incredibly small print, which may be difficult for young readers.
Evaluation:
I will be evaluating three important elements: plot, style and language, and setting. These elements serve the book in various ways and are vital to the reader.
Because Thunderbird is both a fantasy book and the first in the series, the plot needs to be strong enough to carry the reader through the first book and quickly into the next books in the series. The plot of Thunderbird revolves around a young Palestinian girl named Noor, who has just recently lost her parents in a plane crash and is now living with her uncle and aunt (her grandma was there as well, but passes early in the book). As the reader discovers, the fires that seem to sprout unexpectedly around Noor are actually a supernatural gift tied to the legacy of the thunderbird, a phoenix, that must be saved as it is foretold that the thunderbird will burn soon and not regenerate. We learn, through the cat that is secretly a djinn named Sabeeka, that Noor must collect three thunderbird feathers, one from each burn in the last 1500 years (once every 500 years). Time travel is introduced, as well as Annaleeb, a young girl that looks just like Noor, living in the 16th century, who also has a gift tied to the thunderbird. The first book in the series is concerned with the most recent burn, and it ends on a cliffhanger. This is all important context as to how the plot is fleshed out. Though a short book (about 110 pages), the reader becomes connected to Noor through both the immense grief she carries around and the uncertainty of the future that is being presented to Noor. Her aunt does not want Noor to be around and says some incredibly hurtful things to Noor and about Noor, which endear us further to Noor. The fires that spawn around Noor are deeply connected to her emotional state, one that the reader journeys with because we are angry on her behalf, confused when she’s confused, excited when Noor and Andaleeb begin the journey, frightened when the soldiers in the 16th century kidnap the girls, and intrigued when Sabeeka (the cat/djinn) begins to tell stories and tales. The plot ties us to Noor, and eventually to the girls who Noor will meet, because we care deeply.
When writing a fantasy book for intermediate and middle school students (typically grades 4th – 6th), the style and language is especially important. A fine line exists between making it simple enough for the readers to understand and parse through but complex enough that it both teaches them and engages them. Sonia Nimr (2022) and the translator, M. L. Qualey, have a clear understanding of this fine line and walk it well. The sentences are short, neat, and full of explanation. The words chosen are purposeful – the translator ensured that some Arabic words remained, like “ya ilahi” which can be translated as “oh my gosh”. This engages the reader by exposing them to a new language; questions are sure to pop up about the specific Arabic words chosen to remain within the translated text. One of my favorite lines that evokes a very strong image is when Noor and Dr. Samir go through a checkpoint to get into Jerusalem. Observing the Separation Wall, Nimr (2022) writes that the wall looks “like a snake stretching out to release its poison” (p. 67). Through this simile, readers can clearly ascertain exactly what Noor (and Nimr) thinks of the Separation Wall. Using things like similes and metaphors, Nimr (2022) is able to connect easily with the young reader. This type of writing would be good for classrooms to both evaluate the historical aspect of the book and the syntax and structure of the text.
Without a doubt, the most important aspect of this book is the setting: occupied Palestine. It is not just that Noor is living in a new world without her parents but living under occupation by Israeli forces (likely the Israel Defense Force or IDF) where passes and checkpoints surrounded by military personnel and vehicles is commonplace. This setting and the experiences Noor is going through may feel unfamiliar to students, especially within this age demographic. However, this is a book that treats the occupation with clarity but does not linger on the atrocities that are clearly happening in the background, like at the checkpoint that Dr. Samir and Noor go through on their way to Jerusalem. When Noor asks Dr. Samir what he think will happen to the boys arrested at the checkpoint for the fire (that Noor started, out of mind-numbing fear), Dr. Samir tells Noor, “Under the occupation, every citizen is guilty until proven guilty” (Nimr, 2022, p. 67) and that the IDF may release them. But we are afforded the opportunity to read what Dr. Samir really thinks will happen to these boys when he thinks, “They’ll beat them up … Then they’ll hold them at a detention center for months or even years without trial. And then, after all of this torment, they’ll either drum up charges or just keep them in detention, those sons of dogs” (Nimr, 2022, p. 67). At times, Dr. Samir (and eventually Sabeeka, the cat/djinn) is around to drop history about the setting, particularly in Jerusalem where Noor finds the first gate to the latest thunderbird burning. Dr. Samir tells Noor about the history of the Palestinian Museum of Antiquities, which has been renamed the Rockefeller Museum, “for the American donor whose money contributed to building it back in ’38. Naturally, that was during the British Mandate period” (Nimr, 2022, p. 69). This creates opportunities for children to ask questions, to learn history that often feels too old or too far away to be relevant or important. Though I have not read the next two in the series, it is clear that the thunderbird, the phoenix rising from the ashes, is Palestine – it has been under military control, occupation, apartheid for so long and yet it still remains. It still has the people, the olive trees, the resilience. Noor’s anger at her parents’ death, the world around her, the fear of simply living in Palestine is not shied from; Nimr (2022) does not want to sugarcoat this experience by hiding it or stifling it to make it palatable to the masses.
I would absolutely recommend this book (and the series) to children in grades 4th – 6th grade. The writing style is accessible, with an interesting plot, relatable characters, and a setting that will surely generate questions and conversations. This book does deal with the death of parents, grief and anger, occupation and apartheid by military forces, kidnapping of young children, and mentions of abuse (though none is ever shown on paper). As with any book that doesn’t fit a certain ideal or moral, there is the chance this book could generate conversations around censorship, so it is important that whoever is selecting this book is prepared (and does not self-censor).
References:
Nimr, S. (2022). Thunderbird (M. L. Qualey, Trans.). University of Texas Press. (Original work published 2016).
University of Texas Press. (2022). Thunderbird. University of Texas Press. https://utpress.utexas.edu/9781477325810/








