how to make your writing the right pace 🔍
making sure your book has the right pacing
pace heavily depends on your genre, the type of feeling youre going for, and the scene youre writing
(typically) fast-paced genres: these genres usually introduce conflict quickly and regularly change the situation
the reader is here mainly for entertainment (and not so much character or philosophical meaning)
introduces the main problem within the first chapter
has a major complication every few chapters
ends many chapters on questions or surprises
spends less time on reflection and character
(typically) medium-paced genres: (can be both)
these balance plot progression and character development
readers can tolerate slower parts of the book because they arent only here for the plot, they are also here for the worldbuidling, character development, and dynamics
the reader is here for entertainment and character, learning about life and the human condition
(typically) slow-paced genres:
these prioritize character, atmosphere, psychology, theme, or prose
some horrors (depends on the kind. eery, atmosphearic horrors can sometimes be slow paced. jumpscare type horrors are fast)
philosophical/experimental/stream of consciousness
the point isnt what happens next, its how characters think, respond, act; the mood, prose, themes, wisdom, and perspective changes
the reader is here mainly for character, perspecive change, learning about the human condition
is your book more plot or character based?
character-usually slow paced
ask yourself what your reader is reading for and how can you provide that
thriller: suspense, entertainment
romance: hope, emotional moments, character
fantasy: escape, wonder, journey, creativity, entertainment, world
lit fic: insight, meaning, voice
pacing feels wrong when a book spends too much time on things its target audience doesn’t primarily care about
i recommend to look up the typical pacing/outlining of your genre (but dont take it as a rule, shift anything you like to fit your own vision—you can make a slow paced mystery and a fast paced lit fic. its often the experimental/rule-breaking books that readers like best)
fast-paced books tend to have a high rate of change
slow-paced books have a lower rate of change, but the changes are usually explored more deeply
extra tip: even if your book is slow paced, make sure you still make the start interesting. dont dump 50 pages of worldbuilding or backstory or your characters boring usual routine.
even if your book is slow paced, you can make gradual changes. it might not feel like much has changed in the past 20 pages but if you look back, a lot actually has (the mood, your characters thoughts, mindset, character dynamics, etc)
ask: what should your reader feel in this moment? (tension, fear, calm, etc)
short sentences-fast, fear, anxiety
longer sentences-slow the reader down and ground them, calm
more things to consider are scene length and paragraph length
you also dont want your whole book to fall into one category. if you make the whole book too fast (characters jumping from one scene to the next, no time to feel emotion) your reader just wont have time to think, feel, or care. on the other hand, making your book too slow (too much descreption, nothing really happens, unimportant details and scenes, no change) your reader will get bored. what you need is a good balance while keeping in mind the general pacing of your book and genre. there definitely doesnt need to be a dramatic change in your characters life every few pages, it could be:
new information revealed, revelations, a change of scenery, feeling, character development, relationship dynamic development or change, etc
dont write everything. trust that the reader is more than capable of filling in the gaps.
you dont need to show your characters morning routine in details, then them getting on the bus to go to school, then walking into school, then putting stuff into their locker, etc etc (see how even reading all of this was boring)
just skip the unimportant stuff leasing into the important scene and put your character right into it
but know balance. there should still be slow scenes that reveal character and atmospheare
leave room for details and time to feel/think when its needed:
instead of: the monster burst through the door. amy ran downstairs. she escaped from the window. she was scared
do: the window exploded inward. pieces of glass covering the room. something huge stepped through the opening. for a second she was paralysed, then she ran.
am i bored?->speed it up, make a change
am i confused?->slow down and clarify
did an important event pass too quicky, not leaving enough time to feel?->add detail, reaction, thought, feeling
did nothing change for several pages/paragraphs?->cut