Uh so I wrote you this beefy comment for chapter 19 and it wonโt let me paste it from my notes app so Iโm sending it here :)
I literally only use tumblr for this fic and I have no clue what Iโm doingโฆ sorry!
Okay Iโm going to try out writing my thoughts down as I read, Iโve seen comments like that before and I always wanted to try:
imagine he saw the bruises and said โwho did this to you?โ AHHHDKEJSJE
โThere areโฆ limited possibilities when one remains in my presence.โ AWEEE POOR BABYYY NOOOOO ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Girl why are we calling Kayla? Who made Dove do this? Oh yeah, YOU!!! ๐ซต
And of course she doesnโt pick up. Whatever.
Awe I totally get why Loki doesnโt want her to be alone when she calls the doctor and itโs not coming from a controlling side butโฆ itโs a slippery slope my boy. Why do I love these fictional men acting this way but if my boyfriend started up like this in real life Iโd run for the hillsโฆโฆโฆ
Dang okay I read a bit more and Loki is lowkey right oops๐ฌ
Okay a huge plot point has been Dove wanting respect and for people to see her as an adult. She canโt have it both waysโฆ she needs to be honest about her cancer like, yesterday. Hiding it and getting weird secret injections is like actually insane. How is this just hitting meโฆ like girl why is she making this a billion times worse ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ Maybe sheโs not as mature as she thinks lol. But itโs still her body her choice thoughโฆ so tough. Congrats to you for writing like the perfect drama plot. There are a ton of points on both sides that make sense.
Wait I have the solution - they call a doctor to the cabin, the doctor says she has cancer, Dove acts shocked, we are in the clear ๐ Nobody will know she lied!
Woah โreaders POVโ threw me off, I forgot Dove is readerโฆ I thought we were about to get meta ๐คฃ anywhoooo I love a good Loki POV. I donโt really trust Tony anymore after the situation with Kaylaโs brother. I donโt remember Iโll have to rereadโฆ Dove tried to tell him she was uncomfortable though, right? Didnโt he brush her off? Hm
โBut you werenโt going to tell him. You didn't think it was worth itโ -DOVE. AGAIN? YOUR EDUCATION IS WORTH IT. YOU ARE WORTH IT. We deserve it :( I think itโs time Dove gets some therapy.
โHow you didnโt want to have to experience being sheltered again and treated like a child, or someone who always needed help.โ Ah there it is, yeah that makes sense. I guess that past trauma is affecting how she deals with this. Did somebody say THERAPY??
Wanda! I forgot about Wanda! Yes definitely time for a reread.
WOW can I just say reading this fic is like coming home. Or a warm hug. Iโve been hyperfixated on a different fictional man so Iโve been away from this fandom for a moment. I forgot how perfectly you capture Loki to me. And a couple of fics Iโve stumbled across have been giving AI ๐ข I want to give the authors the benefit of the doubt but itโs just so hard to enjoy. Your fic is my fresh air. This fic and little community you created on here are so special to meโฆ might be time for a full reread ๐คญ
Iโm not sure if Iโll do real time thoughts in my comments again in the future, I reread this and my thoughts are pretty dumb HAH. I erased the worst of it ๐คฃ Thanks for the chapters!
It took me a hot minute to realize this comment was about pt 2 ๐คฃ. I was reading this like "how does this person know about all of this" then realized in was my girl cocobeanies!
Gosh it's been so long since I've updated. I'm planning to get to writing more this weekend. Pray that I get the chance to ๐๐พ