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[fogthefroggy]

After the Peer review;

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09/02/2028

[fogthefroggy]

Week 4 Friday

I edited my animatic based on some feedback I got from my group before our meeting at 1:30 The feedback;

New Verison + Crown that I worked on in the morning. I made a new template for myself where I extended the band. I tried to also mimic the way I did the swirl however it just wasn't turning out the way I wanted too so I took it from my older model and bridged it onto the longer band.

Heres the new one I presented today with the added feedback!

And further feedback from Susan, the whole team got some feedback but this is stuff for my scene;

Animatic; Adding more scenes with waking up, little more time - let her think before doing Add more dramatic scenes Hold the end shot of spike, add a little ding Name shots for the animatic Have some foreground and backgrounds move.

Crown; Have the crown stick out even more

Further request from A is to have it exported for 3D adobe effects, make the gem red.

I was fighting for my life for a bit before reearching this; which i sent to the team to check with A that it was what they wanted.

Heres the final result, adding in S feedback too

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Week 4 Monday

had a meeting at 3pm where we went over out animatics and got feedback. I had made mine on the day pirior Sunday

feedback;

Slow down beginning & hold on moon shot

add foreground when looking through the books have one either slated, maybe cowebs too

after that we settled on a style, since the character themselves are very stiff ( since they were made in toonboom and had skinnier limbs - which seemed to give more restriction on their movement and apparently they broke a lot from S). We settled on Life is a run way animatic for the style/expressions/posing. So I got home and drew from it to understand how the artist captured them.

Some studies of spike too since he shows up in my part of the animatic ( he does not appear in the Life is a runway)