this isnt a question but thank you very much for reviewing Depray! again she is a W.I.P so im still working on her thanks for the help! but ey i have a friend and her HS OC is Eridans sister and im like "Wut ._." heh anyway thanks! (btw i used to think making your HS OC a highblood is kinda mary sue-ing so sorry!)
No problem. I’m glad that you find our reviews useful.
As for the siblings thing, I’m not entirely sure if it is possible in troll society. They don’t exactly have siblings since they were born from eggs and raised by their lusii until they mature. The lusus usually only takes care of one grub at a time so I highly doubt that the concept of siblings is applicable to your friend’s OC.
And also, it’s totally okay to make your OC a Highblood. What’s not okay is using the highblood for justifying the Mary Sue personalities (which is unfortunately common in Mary Sue OCs, especially fuchsias). I mean, even Highbloods can be arses at times.
Hii! im the one who asked if this was dead or not and if i could upload my HS OC sooo here she is! im just adding very simple info tho cause shes a bit of a wip ^_^
Hello and happy 4/13.
Today we are gathered here to celebrate the end of Homestuck. It’s been a while since I do a proper review but lo and behold.
We have a submission.
First of all, thank you very much for your submission. Since this is Homestuck, I may cover some character points that may contain spoilers for at least the first 5 Acts (or maybe Act 7) so please read with discretion. This will also be very, very long so bear with it. Other than that, I hope you will find my suggestions useful.
Without further ado, let’s begin.
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Name: Depray Morial (D-PRAY MORY-AL)
Age: Not decided yet
Okay, before I start making comments, I’m going to assume that this troll is gonna be inserted to the Beta trolls (the post-scratch ones) universe. It’s a good thing that you followed the 6-letter naming convention. I have no objections with the name and age. The appearance, though... we have plenty to talk about.
So let’s start with the outfit. Beta trolls (with the sole exception of Kanaya), aren’t exactly the most fashionable creatures. They only wear those black shirt with their symbol and pants or skirt with different types of shoes. If they do have accessories and other layer of clothes, it would be in the same color (exception for the freaking rich trolls of the higher blood hierarchy) as their blood. Yes, even their power up outfits (see: Vriska’s Mindfang Outfit). There are cases of them wearing other colors, but it would mostly be their God tier outfits or just costumes for shenanigans in their afterlife as ghosts in the Furthest Ring. Nothing else.
So, the striped dress is out of question as a default outfit. Since you didn’t specify her powers, I will have to make reservations for judging that in later parts.
Planet: Land of Genocide and Insanity (65% chance of keeping this name maybe)
Are you absolutely sure you want to use this name? Planet names are usually comprised of a combination between an object and an adjective. For example: Land of Wind and Shade (LOWAS). Sometimes they involve the combination of two objects (see: Land of Little Cubes and Tea), but I have never seen a combination of two adjective. It’s possible, yes, but it’s not exactly doable.
In Homestuck canon, a planet’s name should describe the planet itself. Based on the examples I had given you, you can definitely imagine what the planet is like. Of course you need to draw a little bit of the planet’s environment for your reference, but the environment should fit the Planet’s name to a T.
In your OC’s case, her planet name is too vague (not to mention very Mary Sue). Try to think of the type of objects that is native to the planet and an adjective to describe the land. Use the two words and voila. A planet name.
Typing style: !=i \=l
I… I have no idea about what you’re trying to convey here. Is this supposed to be the typing style? Like, which symbols replace which letters? If so, it’s too vague. I can’t exactly judge now, so I would like an example. In sentences. Putting a letter there will only confuse you and your audience, so I really hope you would add more to this soon.
Lusus: Thylacine
Sign: refrence to her personality
Blood: maroon-ish red
I have no qualms with the lusus so I’ll move on straight to the sign and blood.
The sign is… well… dangerously close to the Heart symbol. No other comments but I really suggest that you don’t use that symbol as your final design. I suggest googling for symbols representing stars in the sky and such for reference.
Judging from the blood color, she’s really close, dangerously close, to a mutant. The significance of mutant blood will be mentioned later in the bio parts, but I have two things to tell you right now. One, mutant blood is a common Mary Sue trait in Homestuck troll OCs. They’re rare conditions which unfortunately got abused by OC creators. And two, please make sure the blood colors aren’t neon. That color is almost neon it hurts.
Moving on.
Weapon: Scythe
I’m sorry to say this but I have a pet peeve with scythes as a weapon. Trust me, they look cool and I would love to use them for myself but I have seen too much OCs (aka Mary Sues) who uses scythes without proper character development and such. It makes me feel like some people have no idea about other cool weapons and fighting styles.
Don’t get me wrong, you can still use them as weapons for your OC. But of course, I suggest you research more on other possible weapons and fighting styles that will suit your character best.
Dancestor: Deepth Morial (DEP-TH)
Ancestor: !er\!shk (Ierlishk) (EYE-ER-ISK) W.I.P name
That’s… that’s not how you do an Ancestor name. AT ALL.
The Ancestor ‘name’ is usually a title based on what they do. An Ancestor is the incarnation of a troll’s Dancestor in the Alternian timeline. In other words, you don’t need to make a name for an Ancestor, just a title that is commonly: “The” + an 8 letter job/title/pseud. There are exceptions, but this is mostly subverted by the trolls’ typing quirk (See the link I gave you for details). I’m glad that the name actually follows the 8 character convention, but it’s not exactly a legible title. So, you might need to find another one.
And also, I finally figured out what the typing style section means. I think. I’m sorry.
Relationships: Gamzee Makara - Close friend one of the little of trolls talks to Aradia Megido - Another one of a little of trolls she talks to Eridan Ampora - Kismesis
Oh, goodness gracious... WHY?
I have to admit that I have a negative bias for shipping OCs with canon characters but I can deal with those that are done really well. This, however, is NOT one of those cases.
She might be shy or anything, but are you sure she’s only talking to just Gamzee, Aradia and Eridan? Like, in her how-many-sweeps of her life, she only talked to these three? Are you sure? How about Karkat, Gamzee’s freaking moirail and Tavros, the slam poetry buddy and flush crush? Like, you sure she’s not exactly talking to them? You might want to explore on that.
So, Gamzee as a close friend.... Trolls don’t exactly have a concept of friendship, only quadrants. They may have a concept of friendship after meeting the humans, but for now... let’s just assume that she hasn’t met any of the humans yet. Since the closest thing to friendship is a moirail... you get the point. And also Gamzee’s pale quadrant used to be filled by Karkat (before he went full batshit genocidal), so you might want to think up for a reason for him to be interested in pale relationships at all.
Aradia’s approachable, so I won’t comment much on her relationship with your character.
And Eridan as kismesis, though? As far as I know, Eridan only has caliginous crushes on Rose and Sollux. Both are pretty much the intellectual types and somewhat of a smartass (at least to my interpretation). Your character is not exactly fit into those archetypes so I really doubt that Eridan will take even a slightest interest of her.
Personality: Shy,calm,depressed,lonely,quiet,a bit suicidal
Bio: Depray also has a insane side of her the reason is her dancestor and ancestor are both insane murderers who have killed alot,but Depray was different but at night her insane side could be caused in a easy way.When insane her eyes go complete black and starts killing anything in sigh with scythe.Depray doesnt really talk much the only people she talks to are Gamzee and Aradia.
Okay. Here’s the thing.
Depression and calm don’t go hand in hand. Depression causes apathy, not a calm mind. It’s a mental illness for humans so it’s probably even worse for trolls. This is also yet another trope overused by OC creators with little to no thought, so this has become my pet peeve too. So, really, please do your research in personalities.
I also have huge, really HUGE issues with insanity and suicidal tendencies as a personality trait in OCs. This is probably a nitpick, but most of the time, these traits are not exactly developed well. They just felt like people stick those labels for fun with little to no thought on its effects on the characters’ actions and thought process. It’s also terribly common in various Mary Sue anime OCs, so my negative bias is rather obvious here. But I digress.
In Homestuck canon, trolls aren’t exactly the nicest creatures in human standards. Sure, they may be insane in human standards, but in troll standards, the batshit genocidal and suicidal tendencies are mostly observed in purplebloods. This is mostly due to the effects of hearing the Chucklevoodoo voices, which are usually subdued by the soporific effects of the - you guessed it - Sopor Pies. Yes, those lime green slimes are soothing for trolls. They sleep in those.
So, this is the part where the mutation thing comes in. You see, back when the Limebloods exist, they have the ability to calm the Purplebloods down. But the Purplebloods didn’t like that (because Chucklevoodoos). So they killed all Limebloods. It is highly plausible that the candy-red blood of mutants are formerly derived from Limebloods, which is why Karkat was able to calm Gamzee down. This is also probably the reason why Karkat has Cancer as a symbol, that is between Nepeta (Leo) and Kanaya (Virgo) despite the blood hierarchy. Since your fantroll is probably a mutant (based on the almost neon blood color), insanity is definitely NOT consistent with the character.
And also, trolls aren’t werewolves. They don’t change personalities or change their eye color at night. They’re freaking nocturnal, for goodness’ sake. The sun burns their (except jadebloods) skin badly. Are you implying that the only time she’s calm is when she sleeps? No wonder she didn’t talk much to anyone.
At this point, I’m convinced that she should’ve been a purple blood instead. But I will have to stop analyzing further because your character needs a lot of work right now, especially on personalities and relationship between trolls or humans whenever possible.
You also need a Classpect if you want to develop her well. Decide on which aspects of her personality should be tested on and from there, you can determine the classpects. Use the online Classpect tests for your reference, if you want to. And please, get her a hobby. She needs it.
Dang, that was long. That upd8 probably had gotten to me more than it should have been, so I apologize if I have ranted too much. I would also like some feedback on some information regarding the trolls, since it’s been a while since I touched on the subject.
As usual, my advice is to do your research carefully. This will be easier since Homestuck’s main story is pretty much done. The info about trolls are available everywhere and you can definitely refer on those when creating your character. So, thank you for reading and I hope you will find this useful.
ok so i dont know if this tumblr is dead or nah but idc so i even tho this is a Sue review can i sumbit my HS OC? i really want to so i know if she is a marry sue or not Reply when ya can
This isn’t a review, sorry! >^< But I found some info on the recent N.Pole you reviewed, and I’d like your thoughts on it. I find this blog interesting. ^^
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First her personality is bast of one the bad pums are my grandma her out going part is my grandfather Her freckles are from the Lady from fosters home for imaginary friends
Her gap in the front of her teeth is from code name kids next store
Her dody is my image of a healthy and chiled baring worth idea chubby wide hips
Her curl is from Rome and all his curls
Her tattoo on her back is one of my mom’s tattoos that I’ve always liked
Her big wiled hair is a Lion main Fun fact north was actually just a oc I had yet to named for a long time and when I found hetalia bi maid changes to her for the part but then …stuff happed so she’s back to her first form but with only the curl remaining”
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Before I start, thank you for messaging us. I am glad that you like our reviews and found it interesting. I also appreciate that you would take your time to add more details to the characters we reviewed. So, without further ado - let’s begin.
First her personality is bast of one the bad pums are my grandma her out going part is my grandfather Her freckles are from the Lady from fosters home for imaginary friends
Her gap in the front of her teeth is from code name kids next store
I appreciate the extra details, I really do. But frankly, these do not exactly contribute to the character design. To me, they feel like they’re just random tidbits of inspiration. That’s it. Random. I can overlook the personality part a little. Only a little. And you know exactly the reason why *coughyanderecough*. Yes, I’m still salty with that part of the personality.
Hetalia characters have personalities based on the stereotypes surrounding people of said country. Knowing that there’s barely anyone living in the North Pole sans researchers and scientists, I really, really doubt that bad puns and outgoing personality will be a huge part of her.
As for the appearance, I really, really have to draw a line. Why freckles and teeth gap though? Are the researchers freckled with teeth gap? Like I said in my previous review, Hetalia characters tend to have appearances based on the geographical or man-made landmarks or city, like Nantucket or Mariazell. Not from fictional characters outside from their own territory. So, yeah. I’m still not convinced by these extra information.
Moving on.
Her dody is my image of a healthy and chiled baring worth idea chubby wide hips
Thank you for the information of the character inspiration, but honestly, North Pole isn’t exactly the most fitting location for “child-bearing”. It’s freaking cold, for goodness’ sake. Humans and most animals wouldn’t survive under these circumstances so why?
Her curl is from Rome and all his curls
WHY?
Rome literally has no connection to her. Literally none. Zilch. Zero. Nada. I know the creator would love to justify the curls, but please. At least not Rome.
Her tattoo on her back is one of my mom’s tattoos that I’ve always liked
Okay, that’s new. It’s not mentioned in the previous bio, but okay. I really don’t have much comment on this one, as I’ve said quiet a lot about the appearance before. Although... I do want to know its significance. And also about the tattoo’s appearance.
Her big wiled hair is a Lion main
A lion is not an animal that can survive in the North Pole. At all. They originate from the African savanna, not a freaking cold tundra of the North Pole.
At this point, I’m starting to be convinced that this character is only a Hetalia OC by name. Judging from the previous information and the newer ones, she would be alright as a character in another story but certainly not Hetalia. Especially for a personification of a huge landmass of ice.
Fun fact north was actually just a oc I had yet to named for a long time and when I found hetalia bi maid changes to her for the part but then …stuff happed so she’s back to her first form but with only the curl remaining
Well, that explains why the character does not seem like a Hetalia character at all.
So, there you have it. Like I said, this character is not exactly a personification material. This character would be a decent character that could use some character development in another stories, but certainly not Hetalia. All in all, there’s not much extra info that’s actually helpful for the character design and development. The tattoo’s new, but that’s it. Coupled with the lack of research, I really think that this character should not even be a Hetalia character at all.
So really, my suggestions remain the same. Please put more emphasis on the character development, do your research, and you’re good to go.
these are north and south pole my ocs other wise known as Anastasia and may jankumms frost
northpole is a kind old soul she enjoys playing in the snow and making horrible puns her full name is anastasha jankumms frost most pepole just call her north or anna shes tall and a bit chubby but she doesn’t care shes one of the oldest countries more like continent she has big brown hair with freckles and a round face .even thought she stutters sometimes shes not shy shes just cold.. since shes a continent she ages a bit differently shes over 9000 years old but she still looks like shes 17, she us what you call a yandere “so best back of her man ” southpole is a bit bitter but kinda sweet she enjoys reading and watching out for her twin and just talking walks outside shes 5 minutes and 2 seconds older than her so she says her age is 25 even though she looks the same age as her sister she has big brown hair like her sister but a bit darker she has freckles like her sister but she wears glasses she is what you call a Tsundere she dont be alarmed if she is a bit rude
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Thank you, kind person who submitted this.
So, let me start this review with a pet peeve of mine.
They need more clothes. Seriously. For real. They are supposed to be the personification of the coldest regions of the Earth. Those outfits look nothing like what someone from a cold region would wear, unless those are casual wear while travelling to other countries. But honestly, please put more layers on them. Those clothes will not protect any one of them from the harsh wind and temperature. I suggest the inclusion of fur jacket (for the olden times) or those high-tech thermal jacket since North and South Pole are mostly occupied by scientists and researchers from various countries in the recent years. They’re personifications, not some supernatural creatures from the folklore. Besides, they may not die from the cold but they will not blend in with the populace with those kind of clothes.
Now that I got that off my chest, let’s continue.
Naming-wise, not much comment. I do question the choice of their last name though, since it reminds me too much of a certain character from a famous tale *coughJackFrostcough*. Also, there is no middle name called Jankumms since I couldn’t find anyone with Jankumms in their names. As for the first names, no comment.
Appearance-wise, I really don’t have much to comment on. I’ve ranted enough on their clothes so I guess that’s that. I will refrain on commenting much on their ethnicity, since plenty of the researchers on both Poles are from various countries, but mostly Russian for North Pole. At least, in recent years.
Which leads to the question of age.
9000 years. Really? REALLY? Okay, I know the Earth exists for about more than 10 billion years but a personification that is 9000 years old is really stretching it. I mean, it’s still the Neolithic Era, for goodness’ sake. Even the ancient Egypt just domesticated cats, so really, I’m not buying the 9000 years old deal.
Besides, the two Poles are cold, really cold. And really harsh for human standards. They’re just... huge landmass made of ice. There may have been Natives living in these regions, but there may not be much of them. Not enough for personifications, at least. Even if they do, they certainly won’t look like that. Of course, this is made under the assumption that their appearance does not change over 9000 years.
But I digress.
The creator certainly put the Himaruya-style ahoges there, although I would like to know the significance of those ahoges. I mean, even Austria got Mariazell. Yes, that hair signifies a city. So, unless they have a significant geographical or man-made location, I suggest you start giving explanation for that hair. Hell, even a detail such as “the odd hair represents one of the research stations in each pole” would suffice.
For the personality, hooo boy, we have a storm coming.
I find it funny that the personification of North Pole is depicted as the colder one, especially since North Pole is a little warmer than the South Pole. Key word on a little because the temperature is still freaking cold. Old soul and making puns? Yandere? Okay, those traits sound contradictory but I’ll bite.
“so best back of her man”.
With that inconsistent personality, I certainly would, alright?
even thought she stutters sometimes shes not shy shes just cold
THEN GIVE HER MORE LAYER OF CLOTHES, DANG IT! *flips a bloody table*
Of all personality traits the creator can pick for a South Pole, they chose tsundere. With glasses. Of course they would choose one of the most Mary Sue-ish personality trait right next to yandere. Please, they could have been more than that. What about the relationship with other countries? Especially those who did expedition on their lands? Their reactions? Anything else that they like other than just reading and walking? Anything?
Yeah, the creator should really work on it.
And also, “5 minutes and 2 seconds older”. HOW? They’re personification of landmasses. Not some human twins. So, definitely not buying it.
Nevertheless, I appreciate the fact that the creator drew this by their own hands. Character-wise, though, there’s still a lot (emphasis on a lot) of things that the creator could improve. Remember, do your research, especially for Hetalia OCs, and you’re good to go.
Hey all, it’s been a while since I did a proper review and I apologize for my inactivity on this blog. So, without further ado, let us review!
Her full bio can be found here.
South Chile is the sister of Chile she is well known for her extreme easy going-ness and has a love for morrocos and tequila. she has hetrochromia and will never ever take off her hat. she also loves snowboarding.
First off, let me tell you that Hetalia OCs are supposed to be the personification of a country, micronations or part of a state. If you decide to go with South Chile, at least give us a little historical background on why she exist, such as separation before the country’s merge (such as the Italies), economic autonomy and any other circumstances (such as the British Isles and Northern Ireland), or even conflict that separates them (like North and South Korea). Not to mention that Southern Chile is rather broad, especially since Chile’s divided by many regions. Saying her as a sister is a little vague, don’t you think?
I notice that you only put down ‘extreme easy going-ness’ as her personality. That’s very, very vague. What are her dislikes? Any small habits, good or bad? How about things she’s bad at? Any other interesting facts? You might need to do more research on character traits to give her more complexity and character depth.
As for the rest, her hobbies are okay, since Chile’s got some ski resorts and ice cap in the South, but I would like more explanation on her love of… morrocos? Is this supposed to be Morocco or maracas? The world may never know…
APPEARANCE
South Chile once again has hetrochromia. one eye is yellow and the other eye is red. a few years back she died her hair purple, she called it a “faze”. she has tan skin and her preferred style is punk in a sort of way. sometimes she will be wearing a ski mask probally cause she’s always in the snow. she has a tatoo of a rose on the right side of her waist.
I have lots of questions on her design.
Heterochromia is considered a rare condition. Like I said previously, Hetalia OCs are supposed to be the personification of the country/state, so giving her a rare condition is rather questionable, especially since heterochromia is one of the most common Mary Sue traits I’ve ever seen. Unless there is a reason for her heterochromia, you probably should pick a more common eye color for her. Since I already commented on her snowboarding habit, the ski mask, by default, is acceptable. And that tattoo, any particular reason why she got it on her right side of her waist? You probably should explore on that more in order to give her more character depth, but then again, this is just my nitpicking. Other than that, not much qualms on her outfit…
…though that hat piques my interest. Why wouldn’t she take it off? (Not to mention that the hat looks a whole lot like a certain country’s flag *coughFrancecough*) You probably should give it an explanation.
Moving on.
RELATIONSHIPS
Her best friends are Bahamas and Costa Rica, in fact she they live together in a apartment. she is related to Prussia by blood so she isntt related to Germany. her aunt is Indonesia though she doesn’t know much about her, once again her and her brother, Chile, get along horribly. her mom is Antartica and her dad is Spain. she is also friends with Hungary and Prussia.
This part is probably the one that will give me the most headache, so I’ll try to organize them carefully here.
One, how do Bahamas and Costa Rica live in the same apartment as your character? And why? The Bahamas, geographically, isn’t that close to Chile, they’re in North America, for goodness sake. Costa Rica isn’t neighbors with Chile either, so why on Earth would they live in the same apartment?
Two, why is she related to Prussia by blood?!! I thought she’s Chile’s sister! WHY? If anything, South Chile should be friends or frenemies with Germany, especially since German immigrants once colonized her.
Three, HOW AND WHY IS INDONESIA HER AUNT? I have lots of questions for this especially since I happen to be Indonesian myself. Indonesia and Chile may have diplomatic relations since it was started in 1964, but you really should give a whole lot of historical explanation for this. Like, a lot.
Four, good job for including Spain in this, but WHY IS ANTARCTICA HER MOM?!! Antarctica is a continent! Not to mention that it’s not populated by common people, only researchers from various countries are there.
Five, care to explain her relations with Hungary and Prussia? ‘Cause it’s way too vague.
Six and the last one, what kind of things made her fight with Chile all the time? Do people of South Chile fights with the North often? Is there some sort of animosity that I missed? Unless you explained it, this made no sense.
So, now that it’s all done, here’s what I suggest you to do. Do more research on Southern part of Chile, try to specify which regions she encompasses and what are her relations to other countries in her bio. Do try to research for more character traits and interests though, so that her character can be improved. Include lots and lots of details, particularly in her history and how does she interact with other countries and with her brother, Chile. I hope you’ll find this advice useful.
Name: Yumi Oni
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Orientation: Straight
Species: Oni
Color: Blue
Hair Color: Dark Blue
Eye Color: Medium Blue
Personality: Yumi can be shy and stubborn and times but if you’re close to her, she’s open and happy, she doesn’t personaly she might be a little bit secretive unless she already knows stuff about you, if you’re a friend of Yumi’s sister, Kasumi she’ll automaticaly like you, she is an artist, she sings, and sometimes she dances.
Let me describe the onis in Ao Oni for those of you who haven’t played it. This is the Oni:
The Oni does not make friends. The Oni finds and kills people.
My computer is about to be reset, and soon I'll have everything up again! Luv u all! (Also thanks to that wonderful person who says they love our icon)
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Hey guys, Mod Partridge is back, with a Homestuck sue to start it off!
First, I don' think even a highblood can wear stuff like that.
Also, her Derse (or even Prospit) outfit must have this symbol.
Love my hat that Nepeta Maid me
Kitkat Axeion is me :3
Title-Knight of Heart
OK PLEASE don't make your OC a Heart player if they don't fir the personality. Also, a common HS sue trait is being a Heart player or a Maid.
Age-5.54 Alternian solar sweeps(12 earth years)
Screen Name-aquaheartKitty(can you suggest something better?)
Typing-Starts all sentence with ":3<" and perfect typing syntax.USES CAPS WHENEVER MAD.
I suggest you change that. It's too similar to Nepeta's quirk.
Zodiac Sign-Aquarius
Not a good idea. No two trolls have the same sign as far as we know, and I suggest researching symbols.
Strife Specibi-Axekind(yeah i have split personality)
Not very original, but it's nice to see an axe carrying OC rather than a scythe wielding OC.
Relations-
Nepeta Leijon-Moiral
Karkat Vantas-Moiral
(i'll add another one once i saw another male fantroll)
NOPE NOPE NOPE. NEVER GIVE A HS OC CANON RELATIONSHIPS! IT FUCKS THE TIME LINE UP AND ACCCCK!
Planet-The Land of Sweet Treats and Fluffiness(any suggestion for my planets name XD so it wouldn't be so Cutesy XD)
About Kitkat Axeion-
(any suggestion about me?and i'll soon give myself gills)
Personality-
Loves making friends.acts like a cat. Nepeta maid her a special hat and tail that looks exactly like her hat. the only difference is that it's pink. somehow acts like Nepeta as her normal form. But also acts like Karkat when she's mad or even annoyed. she also loves friendly role playing and Plays "Truth or Dare" with her friends. Inside her room she always practice pouncing on her bed when no one is looking. really shy at 1st when she meets new friends but super active when she got use to them.
TOO MUCH LIKE NEPETA DUDE! I REAAALLLLY suggest you change that.
Traits-
(any suggestion for what would my blood color be?i wish pink was posible but it's not so i think it would be purple what would it be guys?)
I think she needs a lower blood color with that sort of personality. Most highbloods are very violent.
Relations-
even if everyone thinks that she has a split personality, she is really good at making friends even if she's shy.but the others can be mean to her sometimes.
Nepeta Leijon-
She's her Moiral. or i could at least say Best friend. But Nepeta has a big feeling that she also has Flushed feeling for Karkat. And Karkat is somehow half nice to her but also his grouchy form. Since she 1st Met Nepeta,Nepeta maid her a special hat that looks exactly like hers but pinkish. they both get along pretty well because she has almost desame personality like Nepeta.
Karkat Vantas-
Somewhat became a little nice to her since he knew her blood color was desame as hers. but also acts like himself in front of her. he is actually being careful not to piss her off because once he piss her of and she almost tried to kill him. for some reason they play Truth or Dare even if he doesn't want to.
Wait,....KARKAT/nepeta's blood is the same as Kitkat's? WHY WAA THAT NOT IN DA COMIC
(I'm still thinking about this one and gonna add another one once i saw another male
fantroll and make another one)
THERE!!!!!!!
Kitkat Axeion is actually me who became a troll and became BFF With both of them
also, I STRONGLY SUPPORT NEPETA X KARKAT AND NO THIS IS NOT KARKAT X KITKAT someone suggest that it's better to be Fannon X Fannon (or something like Fantroll X Fantroll)
I
ONLY WANT TO MAKE A FANTROLL OR A HOMESTUCK OC!!!!
AND ALSO I MAKE MY 1ST CHARACTER OC INTO ME LIKE FOR EXAMPLE:
Pokeloid Pachi-Me(Pokeloid)
Sweet Melody-Me(My little pony)
Cookie the Rabbit Fox-Me(Sonic X)
Kitkat Axeion-Me(Homestuck)
These are different kind of characters in different shows. so please just RESPECT IT
these 4 are my 1st OC's(original Character) In each show.....so please...........
also i'm kitkat axeion :3
I only do self inserts with my friends to make a fanfic. Making yourself a single slef insert JUST TO get hooked up with your bae/canon char is BAD. NOPE NOPE NOPE.
Now, you too can have fun playing Character Cliche Bingo while you’re reading over someone’s 3000 page epic on Wattpad. A great game to play with friends! …or, friend, because I only made one other bingo card. Oh well. >w<;
