I love, love, love these kind of stories! In fact I once started researching for a story idea with the same overall theme but unfortunately I never started writing. I got so invested in the research tho so I can’t wait reading about your spin on this!
okay wouldn’t everyone love going there? 😅😂 It’s like that dream of being able to go to Hogwarts. I’m still so sure that I’d be like Hermione in Hogwarts even tho I tend to be really lazy with my schoolwork in real life!
I used to always want to live in the clouds when I was younger to the point where I’d only draw pictures of houses in clouds! But poor Harry never got to see flowers and forests :(
„Harry really didn’t like the human world, he’d decided.“
My god that culture schock he experiences … I cannot fathom how unbelievably stupid humans must look from the outside?! We’re literally destroying the very same place we cannot live without! I mean I’ve had my fair share of culture shocks in my life but this! Poor Harry … I think we’ve all been there where we’d daydream of something for years and when we finally get to experience it it’s soooo disappointing. It’s so sad in a smaller instance I can’t imagine how devastating this would be!
Can I just say how absolutely in love I am with your writing style? The way you play with words, the melodies of sentences and the impact of repetition?!
„An angelic glow of sorts“
He kinda has that in real life too weirdly enough 😂😅
„Hm. I“m a bit busy,“ Harry says, eyes dull with disinterest“
Awwww, Harry is secretly a meanie!😔
„He doesn’t think the two of them would get along anyway.“
Well I certainly hope that’s foreshadowing!! 😂😍
You’re absolutely mindblowingly good at character building, you know that? I’ve only met Y/n a few sentences ago and I already feel like she’s an actual person I know loads about!
Man, I’d love to fly everywhere!
Uuuuuuuuuh, I was wondering whether there would be demons. You never disappoint!
Okay you’re not only really good at creating characters but also brilliant at world building!
The way the mood shifts depending on which characters point of view we’re seeing is just amazing through your writing. Whenever it’s Harry we get to really feel his deep disappointment and overall negative stance towards humans. Whenever it’s from Y/n’s view it’s very bright and curious and motivated to experience new things. We get to really feel the innocent curiosity and the want to help while Harry is just done with it.
I really love the fact that you focus on what the characters see and feel and think a lot. Obviously they talk too but it’s all very focused on actions as well and I literally feel everything that’s happening because of that. I mean I’m speechless … You managed to write her being hurt so well that I actually felt like I was the one that was hurt purely because you painted the situation so clearly!
„These weapons are one of the few things that can actually harm an angel.“
Why do I feel like this is some foreshadowing for something reaaaaaal bad?! Oh oh….
I CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE SECOND PART!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS PART. And Harry cares for her so much already its adorable! Could you please put me on the tag list? I wouldn’t forgive myself for missing the next part xx
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