boyfriend!jotaro kujo wants you to burn him with his cigarettes ꒰ ୭ ˚. ᵎᵎ
cw: mdni, masochist!jotaro, burn marks, art by 0309flip
Who would've told you that your big, strong boyfriend Jotaro Kujo enjoys being hurt? It started with playful smacks around your apartment, his ass looking too delicious to not spank it a little. Then in bed, he asked you to slap him in the face and you said yes! He's always been in the subbier side. You didn't worry about actually hurt him because, at the end, he's a big man that know how to take hits. And seeing his cute red cheek (and ass cheek) after sex was hot as fuck.
But this was a little bit different. Another level. You know he's always been a smoker, you never really cared and even engage with him, stealing some drags of his cigarettes. You loved how handsome he looks leaning down for you to lighten his cigarette and how he gently takes it a place it between your lips when you ask him.
And now he's asking you to burn him with his cigarette.
You have it between your fingers, thinking it would be fun to smoke during sex. You didn't expect him to make such suggestion.
"Did I step up? I'm sorry, love, I just thought-" Jotaro said, getting on his elbows because, did I mention that he was already buried inside of you? And that you've been riding him for a while.
"No, no. I'm thinking about it, baby. Is it safe?" you asked, pushing his chest down so he's back against the mattress.
"Mhm," he nodded, hips twitching because of how easily you control him. "You can try with just the ashes first."
You tilt your head, a little smile playing on your lips as you watch him. Jotaro's chest rises and falls under you, his breathing already rough from how deep he's buried inside your heat. God, he looks so good like this, flushed and trying to stay in control even though his hips keep twitching.
"Okay, baby. Ashes first," you whisper, tapping the cigarette gently so the gray powder falls onto the center of his chest. It lands warm, not too hot yet, and you grind down slow on his cock just to feel him throb.
He hisses softly, then says: "M'good."
You rock your hips again, riding him nice and easy, feeling every thick inch stretch you open. Another tap, more ashes dusting over his skin, right above his heart. This time you rub them in a little with your thumb, watching the faint red mark bloom underneath. Jotaro's breath catches, his cock twitching hard inside you.
"Still good?" you ask, leaning forward so your breasts brush his chest.
"Yeah… fuck, keep going," he says, voice rougher now.
You take a slow drag from the cigarette yourself, letting the tip glow bright orange. His eyes follow it as you press your free hand on his sternum, pinning him down and start moving faster, rolling your hips in tight circles.
Then you lower the burning end right to his chest, right where the ashes already marked him. The second it touches skin, Jotaro arches up with a sharp groan, his fingers digging into your hips. The smell of singed skin hits you, but he doesn't pull away. Instead his cock swells even thicker inside you, pulsing like crazy.
"S-shit… baby," he gasps, but his eyes are rolling back a little, pain and pleasure written all over his face. "I'll cum if you keep hah..."
You ride him harder, bouncing on his lap while you keep the cigarette pressed there for just a second longer. His whole body jerks under you, muscles tight, and you feel him start to lose it.
The burn makes him thrust up wildly, chasing that hurt. You pull the cigarette away but keep grinding down on him, watching the fresh red mark form on his chest. Jotaro cums with a broken moan, spilling hot and thick inside you as the pain pushes him over the edge. His hips stutter, thighs shaking, but you don't stop moving until he's milked dry.
You finally lift off him a bit, both of you panting. Leaning down, you press your lips to the fresh burn, licking over the sensitive spot slow and gentle. Jotaro shudders hard under your tongue, one big hand coming up to cradle the back of your head.
"Again?" he asks after a minute, voice all hoarse and fucked-out. His fingers thread through your hair, pulling you closer to the wound. "Please."
You smile against his chest, already reaching for the cigarette again.
Oh my GOSH you writing is so addicting I just want to eat it. No, but seriously, what major factors influenced the way you write today? Asking as a person who’s been going through kind of a writing and reading slump these past few months 💔 although your works have gotten me out of my reading drought, I still am kinda lacking in the writing portion, so some advice would be really REALLY appreciated. 🥹
Good morning and thank you ❤️
I go through writing slumps too!
The biggest thing for me is music personally! I'd say about 90% of my fics are inspired by songs in some way. And not just the way a song sounds necessarily, but sometimes I might pick out a line and work with that, or go on vibes.
It's pretty good to know how you think. Words or images?
And this is the same for film too. This is because music helps, I'm the type of person to do my work with a playlist in the background etc, and I just use that same method for my writing flow.
A big thing I can suggest, and I'm not as good at this nowadays lol, is reading what you would like to write. Finding inspo to write because you read a great fic for the same characters, or another author made a choice you wouldn't and you wanna explore that. Fantastic stuff. That's the reason why my fic permissions are open for others to do as they please with my fics 🙂↕️
My last thing and lowkey this is kinda corny and silly but I'll say it anyway: I write what I like lol. I post them so others may enjoy them, that makes me happy, but ultimately I am my target audience. And that influences what I write but also my style. Run on thoughts, emotions and things that take part in a single space or scene, that's how my brain works and so that's what I write! I'm not gonna get as much enjoyment out of this if I'm writing like a multichap novella 😂
So ultimately to answer your question: finding the write inspo and reaching a flow state, growing skills by reading, and actually enjoying what I write
I really hope you come out of your writing slump soon! Much love and thank you for this question. Hearts for you ❤️❤️❤️
I actually need to know how you perfected beating the bad fanfic humor agenda. Because I’ll say this loud and proud, NO fic has had me dying of laughter at the crack ass of dawn like pinky promise has and I’m being so fucking deadass 😭 had me crossing my legs and shit so I don’t PISS myself (ok maybe that’s a problem that has to do with me... cause i be laughing like a mad man on coke from the dumbest shit BUT THATS NOT THE POINT)
That one line you had wrote in ch3 (I think) that I completely forgot, yet I still remember I was in bed HOWLING my shit clean off and my cat thought I was having a seizure LMFAOOO ✌🏾
Take this as you will, but just know you MAD funny twin 🥹 and your writing is the BOMB DOT COMMMM‼️
TOODLES!!
You think im funny 🥹🥹🥹 omg kiss me.
Honestly, I feel like writing humor comes really naturally to me, bc i do think that I am a funny person in real life (self glaze 💔). That and the fact that I have a good understanding of the characters I’m writing, their thought processes as they’re interacting with each other, and of course, what they would happen to find funny as well.
For Janka interactions in my fic, this is pretty easy:
Jabber’s really not afraid to say much of anything, especially if it’s out of pocket, and his goal has been (pretty consistently) trying to ragebait Zanka. As such, he makes lighthearted jokes at Zanka’s expense, some of which are just fucking crazy to say 😭
Zanka, however, does not find most of those jokes funny, and he also gets pissed off easily, so he’s always snapping back rather quickly with his responses. At the end of the day tho, he likes being around Jabber (even if he’s loath to admit it). So he allows so much + gives openings for the bickering to continue lol
This dynamic, paired with a general awareness of modern/gen Z humor (they’re both gen Z in my universe lol) and a sense of comedic timing creates the potential to write these kind of absurd back and forths that end up being really funny, but not overly forced bc… thats literally just how they are lmfao
Side note: I struggle a little w/ the cleaners bc even though i know them, I haven’t taken the time to flesh out any of their characters in the context of a modern setting (Besides Riyo lol, my goat) so sorry if the scene in ch4 feels a little off 😭 it’ll get better with time. trust
Holy yap session but yeah. Skribble’s crash course in writing funny shit.
tysm for the love— this ask literally made my day, and I’m always glad to see that people enjoy reading my fics as much as i like writing them.
