Epic: The Troy Saga, "The Horse and the Infant"
As far as musical introductions go: this one is solid compared to them. I do think the film needs to start off with an overture, in this overture it sets the scene: Troy at night, lightening in the distance, no rain just yet, the horse standing tall outside the gates.
Credentials I forgot to add to the previous post: I have worked in theater for six years now. I am a historian, a vocalist, and a musicologist (I have three degrees: two bachelors and one masters). I have been a costume designer for years.
Scene Beats That Need To Happen:
Odysseus needs to have both his bow and his sword. He is a king who is an archer and I SWEAR if I see another depiction of him without the bow I'll throw a fit (mostly kidding.)
The costumes need to be historically accurate clothing–or as near to it as possible.
The entirety of the first half of this song needs to take place within the horse. The characters need to be in relatively low lighting, not dark completely, but enough that it's almost haunting how they are shown.
When Odysseus gives specific tasks to specific soldiers, he needs to reach out and put his hand on their shoulders–it'll show the fact that he is connected to these men, and that they are not just pawns in his war.
At "Find that inner strength now/use that well of pride/fight through every pain now ask yourself inside/what do you life for? what do you try for?/What do you wish for? What do you fight for?" Odysseus needs to be marching between his soldiers–a bit like the "a red day, a sword day" speech from The Lord of the Rings. It'll solidify this speech as a rallying cry between his men.
THIS FIRST APPEARANCE OF ZEUS: listen closely, he HAS to appear as just a voice from the clouds. He cannot appear as a specific figure because that will ruin the effect of the moment. Something important for every god and goddess is to associate them with a color, and then have that color appear when they are there. In the case of this, Odysseus needs to look up at the lightening and thunder and it needs to be glowing with this unworldly energy that let's Odysseus know the god is there watching him. (I suggest that for Zeus the color is bronze.)
The conversation ("A vision of what is to come, cannot be undone" to "i don't think your ready") needs to be told as Zeus leads Odysseus through the halls of the palace to the baby. It cannot be told stationary, it needs to be told in flashes and darkness and be jarring.
AND THEN! "It's just an infant/it's just a boy/what kind of iminent threat does he pose/that I cannot avoid," Odysseus is at the cradle, and these words are spoken focusing in on the baby itself–which is asleep. It is an innocent moment, made worse by the fact that Odysseus' melody line is so similar to that of a lullaby.
When Zeus says "Penelope" there needs to be a dead-wife montage moment, where Penelope appears faintly in the clouds from behind–don't show her face, but show enough of her that Odysseus is affected.
The trio (Odysseus singing the "I could raise him as my own" and Zeus+the Gods singing "He will burn your house down") segment should be done in the rain on a balcony with the crib visible in the background, but not the focus.
When Odysseus sings "Please don't make me do this/don't make me do this." There needs to be visible tears in his eyes.
He needs to reach out to the baby for the first time–hands shaking–as Zeus sings "The blood on your hands is something you won't loose/all you can choose is whose."
This song needs to end on the baby–Odysseus is not holding him, but he is obviously effected.