How I Convert an Orphic Hymn into Song
First of all, you are going to start off with something that looks like this. (This is Orphic Hymn #30 to Dionysos.)
Κικλήσκω Διόνυσον ἐρίβρομον, εὐαστῆρα,
πρωτόγονον, διφυῆ, τρίγονον, Βακχεῖον ἄνακτα,
ἄγριον, ἄρρητον, κρύφιον, δικέρωτα, δίμορφον,
κισσόβρυον, ταυρωπόν, ἀρήϊον, εὔϊον, ἁγνόν,
ὠμάδιον, τριετῆ, βοτρυοτρὸφον, ἐρνεσίπεπλον.
Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύβουλε, Διὸς καὶ Περσεφονείης
ἀρρήτοις λέκτροισι τεκνωθείς, ἄμβροτε δαῖμον·
κλῦθι μάκαρ φωνῆς, ἡδὺς δ’ ἐπίπνευσον ἐνηής,
εὐμενὲς ἦτορ ἔχων, σὺν ἐυζώνοισι τιθήναις.
🗣️ Step #1 is: Identify rhyming patterns and divide into according sections.
Take a look at the ending letters of each line and group them into whatever patterns you see. This step can be a little tricky so pay attention to all possibilities.
Κικλήσκω Διόνυσον ἐρίβρομον, εὐαστῆρα, A
πρωτόγονον, διφυῆ, τρίγονον, Βακχεῖον ἄνακτα, A
ἄγριον, ἄρρητον, κρύφιον, δικέρωτα, δίμορφον, B
κισσόβρυον, ταυρωπόν, ἀρήϊον, εὔϊον, ἁγνόν, B
ὠμάδιον, τριετῆ, βοτρυοτρὸφον, ἐρνεσίπεπλον. B
Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύβουλε, Διὸς καὶ Περσεφονείης C
ἀρρήτοις λέκτροισι τεκνωθείς, ἄμβροτε δαῖμον· B
κλῦθι μάκαρ φωνῆς, ἡδὺς δ’ ἐπίπνευσον ἐνηής, C
εὐμενὲς ἦτορ ἔχων, σὺν ἐυζώνοισι τιθήναις. C
🗣️ Step #2 is: Identify elision.
Usually where a word ends in a vowel and the next word starts with the same vowel. Sometimes it can be a little more tricky, especially when dealing with Latin but this time I didn't see any obvious uses of it so we can just check this off for now and come back to it later if we find something sneaky.
🗣️ Step #3 is: Count lines and syllables.
You can take quite a bit of liberty in this aspect because what you want to do is establish a pattern. There were a few places where a line could read as 15, 14, or 16 but I'm looking to identify the overall pattern. So, I make note of the tricky syllables in question (usually where there is an elongated or shortened vowel) and use those to help construct the rhythm and melody later.
I counted 9 lines--which is super important and I will explain why in a moment.
As for syllables per line, I counted: 14, 16, 16, 15, 17, 15, 15, 14, 15
14 Κικλήσκω Διόνυσον ἐρίβρομον, εὐαστῆρα, A
16 πρωτόγονον, διφυῆ, τρίγονον, Βακχεῖον ἄνακτα, A
16 ἄγριον, ἄρρητον, κρύφιον, δικέρωτα, δίμορφον, B
15 κισσόβρυον, ταυρωπόν, ἀρήϊον, εὔϊον, ἁγνόν, B
17 ὠμάδιον, τριετῆ, βοτρυοτρὸφον, ἐρνεσίπεπλον. B
15 Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύβουλε, Διὸς καὶ Περσεφονείης C
15 ἀρρήτοις λέκτροισι τεκνωθείς, ἄμβροτε δαῖμον· B
14 κλῦθι μάκαρ φωνῆς, ἡδὺς δ’ ἐπίπνευσον ἐνηής, C
15 εὐμενὲς ἦτορ ἔχων, σὺν ἐυζώνοισι τιθήναις. C
This has revealed some preliminary patterns, which will help me anchor some sound.
🐍 Things that stand out to my eyes.
9 Lines. Numbers are rarely ever random when they appear in folklore and they are definitely not random in something like a religious hymn. As we have discussed many times in here before, the number 9 is tied to transition and it often appears in both the cults of Artemis and the cults of Dionysos. Which is absolutely to be expected since their music and dance patterns are nearly identical. Dionysos takes over where Artemis leaves off.
Dionysos and Artemis both like to hang out in the background festivals of other gods. Dionysos particularly likes to hang around in the background of occasions relating to agriculture and romance/marriage. So, even if he is not listed as officially a part of a festival, chances are that if the festival intersects on one or more of those topics there will be some related ecstatic shenanigans going on somewhere. This is important in understanding how the wider cult and associated living traditions have advanced over the years into the modern world.
🗣️ Step #4 is: Identify the load bearing syllables.
These are the syllables that hold the emphasis for pronunciation. When I am writing this out by hand, I usually underline each syllable and then for this step I will come back in and underline the stressed syllables a bit darker. When making notes in type, I just bold the syllable.
Κικλήσκω Διόνυσον ἐρίβρομον, εὐαστῆρα,
πρωτόγονον, διφυῆ, τρίγονον, Βακχεῖον ἄνακτα,
Remember that this is just a rough draft so it doesn't have to be perfect. Call it "guidelines." Gotta start somewhere. 😉
🗣️ Step #5 is: Look for internal rhyming schemes or patterned syllable breaks.
This is the part where it really starts to differ from poetic recitation. We are looking to break up each line with some built in rhythmic pauses. You have 4 couplets to compare for a pattern so turn those sharp eyes on and see if you can spot it. I use a / to indicate where I think the natural breaks are going to land.
14 Κικλήσκω Διόνυσον / ἐρίβρομον, εὐαστῆρα, A
16 πρωτόγονον, διφυῆ, τρίγονον, / Βακχεῖον ἄνακτα, A
16 ἄγριον, ἄρρητον, κρύφιον, / δικέρωτα, δίμορφον, B
15 κισσόβρυον, ταυρωπόν, ἀρήϊον, / εὔϊον, ἁγνόν, B
17 ὠμάδιον, τριετῆ, βοτρυο/τρὸφον, ἐρνεσίπεπλον. B
15 Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύβουλε, /Διὸς καὶ Περσεφονείης C
15 ἀρρήτοις λέκτροισι τεκνω/θείς, ἄμβροτε δαῖμον· B
14 κλῦθι μάκαρ φωνῆς, ἡδὺς δ’ / ἐπίπνευσον ἐνηής, C
15 εὐμενὲς ἦτορ ἔχων, σὺν / ἐυζώνοισι τιθήναις. C
Internal rhyming schemes will usually divide each line into a repeating pattern. Only once you have done this part can you then start to figure out where the weight of the melody is going to be. Poetic recitation can just blow past this part but songs need pauses for dancing and breathing.
🗣️ Step #6 is: Consult the encyclopedia of folk music knowledge!
As you try to figure out what kind of melody the piece can be set to, ask yourself a few questions to help narrow it down. I have gone through and answered these questions for Orphic Hymn #30.
Q: What family of music and dance should this hymn belong to?
A: Single Handed Frame Drum patterns used in ecstatic and partnership dancing.
Q: What are the possible rhythms and dances that could go with it?
A: I know that Artemisian music and dance is very similar to Dionysian so I'm going to start with their pool of shared krotala dances just to try to cross that option off of my list. I already tried it with the Orphic Hymn to Artemis and it worked so if there is a running theme, this is probably our best bet.
Q: Do these patterns stand out as one of those options?
A: Actually, they do.
Q: If yes, play it and sing it several times to see if it will cooperate with that option.
A: Holy carp, it works! First try!
Q: If no, take the topic of the hymn and compare to folk songs with similar topics that fall under this style of music & dance.
A: I will still do this later but I have a working melody and rhythm for now. If I am not satisfied with it after playing it for a while then I will stretch out further.
This involves actually being familiar enough with folk music and music history from this part of the world that you can have something to lean on and lace this to. If you are not there yet, you can start building a familiarity by listening to music. The two genres that I have found most helpful are Dimotika and Rebetiko. It is very easy to find on your own, you just have to take the time to get acquainted.
Dimotika Tragoudia (δημοτικά τραγούδια) - Folk music up to the 1930s.
Rebetiko (ρεμπέτικο) - The Greek Blues, taverna music of the 1920s-1950s.
You can also go a little bit deeper into the topic by reading the works of Alkis Raftis (dance ethnologist) and Elias Petropoulos (folklorist). Also check out the work of ethnomusicologists like Christodoulos Halaris.
🗣️ Step #7 is: You better record it before you forget it and lose your hard work.
🗣️ Unofficial Step #8 is: Proceed to be haunted for the next month (at least) by the spirit of the song you have created. You did this to yourself.