THIS ISNT A FINISHED STORY !! I JUST NEED OPINIONS.
hey yāall, itās been a MINUTEEEEE since iāve written anything omg. please read this and let me know if you think i should continue to write this story. itāll be like two maybe three parts? idk just lmk what you think :)
there is nothing too crazy in this so far (no smut or anything yet. so i guess trigger warning swears?)
bully shikamaru who is so viciously mean to you :(
he makes fun of your glasses and outfit choices. you look homeless.. why are you wearing sweatpants to school? baggy clothes that make you look.. poor?
youāre disgusting in every way, him and his friends are sick of seeing you to the point where even bullying you becomes old.
youāre an absolute nobody.
and that changes come third year of high school.
you never tried with looking good in school because.. whatās the point? itās a place to come and learn, to prepare for the big world.
but then you think about how youāre sick of being treated the way you do. being talked about behind your back. being beat up for the sole fact of your looks.
so when you decide to shop for new clothes, try new skin care and makeup, a new hairstyle, you see the difference in yourself. the confident oozing from your eyes. your posture straightening out.
you look good.. better than the popular girls that hang around shikamaru and his friends.
first day of school arrives and itās finally time to make some friends, enjoy high school like every other normal kid teenager.
when you walk in people are staring and whispering.
āis that a new girl?ā
ādude sheās so hot!ā
the chattering amongst everyone doesnāt go unnoticed. itās overwhelming with how much positive attention youāre getting considering how much negative attention you used to get.
and then you walk past shikamaru and the rest of his shitty group of friends.
they all turn around and stare at you. itās like youāre in a movie and this is your big corny slow motion scene. you walk forward without sparing them a glance. flipping your hair over your shoulder and turning the music in your headphones up.
from the corner of your eye you can see naruto and kiba gawking at you, the popular girls glaring at you, and shikamaru eyeing you with the same bored expression on his face he always has.
you smile to yourself as you walk into class, taking a seat at the back corner and glancing out the window. first day of your third year of high school and so far itās already been a success.
the home room teacher comes in introduces himself, opting his students to say their name and an interesting fact about themselves. when itās your turn you stand and place a piece of hair behind your ear. āhi iām y/n y/l/n.. and uh an interesting fact about myself is i enjoy reading manga.ā you bow and sit down. everyoneās eyes still on you as they yet again whisper amongst themselves.
āshe looks so different.ā
āwhat happened to her over summer break?ā
lunch period comes around before you know it and youāre debating on leaving school to get lunch or hiding somewhere.
but itās a new school year right? you should try new things and stop hiding from everyone.
walking out of the school entrance you spot shikamaru and his friends sitting in the parking lot, talking amongst themselves about who knows what.
you only hope they donāt notice you as you scurry by and try to leave.
to your dismay they do see you and sai calls you over. āhey you! get over here.ā
you walk over with your head held high. āis there something that you need?ā
āwhat? you think youāre all high and mighty now because you got āprettier?āā the most popular girl in school speaks. ino. you hate this bitch. āyou donāt even look that good. all you did was take your glasses off and put on sluttier clothes.ā
āare you done yet? lunch periodās only an hour and i gotta get something to eat.ā you pass a glance at each of them, who are completely dumbfounded by your change of character.
once no one says anything you make your way out of the parking lot, walking to a near cafe up the road.
(btw this isnāt the end of the first chapter this is only half lol)