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If your writing feels “off” but you don’t know why… read this:
It’s probably because you’re telling instead of showing.
❌ “She was very nervous.”
✅ “Her hands wouldn’t stop shaking as she reached for the door.”
Readers don’t want to be told what to feel — they want to experience it.
This is one of the most common issues I fix when beta reading manuscripts.
Follow if you’re serious about improving your writing.
To All readers be honest: how many unread books are currently mocking you from your shelf?
To All authors: What's the one book that convinced you to start writing your own?
To All readers be honest: how many unread books are currently mocking you from your shelf?
To All authors: What's the one book that convinced you to start writing your own?
We all know the feeling of the perfect book, that moment you never want to return to reality. As an editor, I live to help authors create that exact experience. Is your current draft ready for the next level? 📚
Let’s get your manuscript reader-ready. secure a spot for yourself
What genre is your WIP?
Two of my main WIPs (Burned Secrets and Alliance Bonds of Power) are Medieval Fantasy and I think The Children Who Never Returned (TCWNR) would be considered a Thriller
Those titles are killer! Medieval fantasy is such a classic, but a thriller called The Children Who Never Returned? That sounds incredibly gripping. You’ve got a great range going; I love the contrast between epic world-building and high-tension mystery.
A cure for the Act 2 Blues.
We’ve all been there. You have a killer opening and a grand finale, but chapter 15 feels like wading through molasses.
Try this: Look at your protagonist’s biggest strength. In the middle of the book, take it away. Or better yet, turn that strength into their biggest liability. If they’re a smooth talker, put them in a situation where they’re sworn to silence.
Reblog and add: What is the one thing your protagonist absolutely cannot live without? (And then go take it away from them).
