I am never looking to critique fic writers, but I GOTTA say this: people with dark skin’s knuckles do not turn white when they are tightly gripping something.
I can usually suspend a lot of reality with things like that, but the knuckle one really bugs me because it shows how little society is actually *seeing* dark skinned people as entire beings. I know no one is trying to be malicious, but it’s a pretty glaring blind spot.
















