Itâs been a mad, mad end to summer, so Iâm late sharing this news. However, having a piece that uses N*zi vampires as an allegory for the disgusting lengths weâll go to for career success IN A LIT MAG NAMED AFTER ONE OF MY LITERARY ANCESTOERS is worth celebrating at any time.Â
To read âToscanini in the Plague Year,â scroll down to the last piece in this issue or do a CTRL + F search for âJessica Hatch.â đ€
After World War II, movie studios like MGM and Paramount found themselves at a crossroads as they adapted to changes brought on by both the war and the advancement of filmmaking technology.
Grief Triptych with Squeaky Hinges | Jessica Hatch
âGrief over a mentor, not a friend, is parasocial at best. It feels performative, untrue, like a mockingbird making its home in a blackbirdâs nest. When there was the opportunity for friendship after all, it feels worse.â
When our writing mentor, instructor, and in some cases friend Giancarlo DiTrapano died suddenly this spring, my fellow MTVM alumni Cory Bennet and Mila Jaroniec asked Giacomo at Neutral Spaces if we could publish an issue in his memory. Iâm honored to have the piece linked here published beside such lovely remembrances.
8 Strategies to Try If a Short Piece Isnât âLanding.â
(For all my fellow authors, based on notes I took from this fantastic piece by Lincoln Michel for LitHub.)
Try the Robert McKee way: Create a short outline of plot beats to make sure the story âworks.â
Try applying a âform engineâ to the piece (e.g., Carmen Maria Machadoâs âEspecially Heinousâ).
Linguistics engine: Take repetition or contrast; take syllable sounds or sentence rhythms; a pair of concepts (up/down; light/dark); or associated words to drive the piece. (A prose villanelle?)
Write a first sentence/hook. Circle 2-3 keywords. Write 10-20 words you associate with them and add them to the piece.
In revision, look for scenes or sections that are not âreceiving power from the storyâs engines.â Cut or fix.Â
Is the inciting incident clear?Â
Could I be using dialogue to greater effect?
Cut too much description for descriptionâs sake; suggest back story, but donât elaborate. When in doubt, leave it (a word, sentence, etc.) out.
Iâve been thinking a lot about social media and being a writer lately. I understand the correlation between the two. Social media equals built-in platform: grow yours, and youâll be able to say you have a verified account or 10,000 followers in your query letter, or whatever metric seems to suggest youâll sell a lot of books.Â
At the same time, social media seems to also equal a lot of distraction and a lot of snark. At least for me. Iâll hype myself up to go on Twitter, to interact with other writers and the publishing industry gatekeepers who keep accounts there. Itâll work for a while, but soon Iâll find myself demoralized by a subtweet that seems to condemn if not me, then my brand of optimism or my brand of being a little too quirky to be mainstream or, or, or...Â
And the worst, in my opinion, is when these subtweets come from agents or editors themselves. It makes me feel like Iâm the nerdy theater kid all over again, and the cool kids just laughed in my face when I asked if I could put my cafeteria tray down at their table.Â
With that in mind, Iâve been thinking actively about how social media is a boon and how it is an energy drain at one and the same time. I donât think even the most well-meaning advice (e.g., Cal Newportâs admonishment in Deep Work [HBG, 2016] that we shouldnât be on social media at all) is one-size-fits-all. While I find Twitter exhausting, someone else might thrill from it. Vice versa for me getting a rush from Instagram.
I think moving forward Iâm going to be on:
- Instagram for my editing business
- This Tumblr to journal (to myself mainly! I donât expect anyone else to follow this rambling nonsense) about my writing life
- Facebook because, call me old-fashioned or lame or a Millennial, but I like keeping in touch with far-away friends.
I had been using Twitter to post about my writing life, etc., but nope. Tumblrâs more fun. It makes more sense to me.Â
So I suppose the answer to my question is: câest depend. And câest depend on what you get out of it in exchange for what you put in.
The hard thing about writingâor one of the hard things in the endless series of hard things about writingâis that thereâs no one way to do it. Instead, there are infinite paths in the dark woods ofâŠ
My writing has been feeling a little stale and getting its fair share of rejections lately.Â
This article has me jazzed to try some different âenginesâ on for size.
Iâve been thinking a lot about operant conditioning lately...
...and it seems clear to me that the #writinglife, past a certain point, plays completely into B.F. Skinner-style psychology.Â
Recall that Skinner is the dudebro who conditioned mice to press a button and get a food pellet. One day he didnât have enough food pellets for his mice, so he randomized the button to sometimes produce a pellet, sometimes not. As you may guess, given the way casinos succeed and the way we can never get off our phones, thanks to the randomized reward patterns both provide, the mice continued to press the button for a lot longer when the reward was randomized than they did when it was given every time.Â
And yes, writing should be an intrinsic passion first and foremost. I donât know anyone who shells out for conferences, workshops, editorial work, etc., who doesnât absolutely love writing. Otherwise, why would you? But the ups and downs of putting yourself out there as a writer, the operant conditioning of being a writer, has to count for something.
Case in point: Yesterday morning I was reflecting on how Iâm not getting any younger but that if I hold the line, hopefully some agent will eventually want to represent me. That afternoon a [dream] agent asked for my full manuscript. This doesnât necessarily mean anything, but the sliver of hope it gave me--the randomized food pellet--is enough for me to go on for a while.
tl;dr I guess weâre all really mice in a maze sometimes, huh?
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