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- A woman who is obsessed with the stars

[theaawalker]

Alternatives to "Saw"

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When a character notices something quickly:

»-♡→ Spotted »-♡→ Caught sight of »-♡→ Glimpsed »-♡→ Noticed »-♡→ Detected »-♡→ Clocked »-♡→ Picked out »-♡→ Espied »-♡→ Observed »-♡→ Sighted

...or if they're searching for something:

➺ Scanned ➺ Surveyed ➺ Examined ➺ Inspected ➺ Searched ➺ Swept their gaze across ➺ Looked over ➺ Studied ➺ Pored over ➺ Scrutinized

...or if they're admiring something:

➵ Beheld ➵ Gazed at ➵ Admired ➵ Marveled at ➵ Took in ➵ Drank in ➵ Appreciated ➵ Feasted their eyes on ➵ Reveled in ➵ Absorbed

...or if they're shocked or horrified:

̗̀➛ Witnessed ̗̀➛ Stared at ̗̀➛ Gawked at ̗̀➛ Recoiled from the sight of ̗̀➛ Bore witness to ̗̀➛ Froze at the sight of ̗̀➛ Locked eyes on ̗̀➛ Gaped at ̗̀➛ Couldn't look away from ̗̀➛ Found themselves staring at

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[kyleighwrites]

Writing Tip: Other Than…

• Beautiful: Attractive, Appealing, Alluring, Bonny, Comely, Delightful, Gorgeous, Good-looking, Glamorous, Fetching, Fascinating, Picturesque, Ravishing, Resplendent, Stunning, Splendid

• Mad: Angered, Angry, Ballistic, Choleric, Foaming, Fuming, Furious, Hopping, Hot, Incensed, Infuriated, Indignant, Inflamed, Irate, Livid, Outraged, Roiled up, Ticked

• Horrible: Appalling, Atrocious, Awful, Alarming, Blood-curdling, Dire, Dreadful, Fearful, Frightening, Frightful, Formidable, Ghastly, Gut-wrenching, Grotesque, Gruesome, Hideous, Horrendous, Horrifying, Horrific, Lurid, Loathsome, Macabre, Monstrous, Nightmarish, Nauseating, Obscene, Offensive, Repugnant, Repulsive, Revolting, Shocking, Sickening, Terrible, Unspeakable

• Happy: Blithe, Blissful, Buoyant, Cheerful, Delighted, Glad, Gladsome, Gleeful, Gratified, Joyful, Joyous, Jovial, Lighthearted, Mirthful, Pleased, Satisfied, Sunny, Upbeat

• Loving: Adoring, Ardent, Amorous, Caring, Cordial, Considerate, Devoted, Doting, Enamored, Fervent, Forgiving, Sappy, Tender, Tenderhearted, Warm, Warmhearted

[theaawalker]

Alternatives to "Touched"

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When the touch is gentle:

»-♡→ Brushed »-♡→ Grazed »-♡→ Caressed »-♡→ Stroked »-♡→ Patted »-♡→ Cradled »-♡→ Rested against »-♡→ Smoothed »-♡→ Trailed along »-♡→ Glided over

...or comforting:

➺ Squeezed ➺ Held ➺ Embraced ➺ Wrapped around ➺ Clasped ➺ Pressed gently against ➺ Rubbed ➺ Supported ➺ Steadied ➺ Cupped

...or affectionate:

➵ Ruffled ➵ Nuzzled ➵ Kissed ➵ Linked arms with ➵ Nestled against ➵ Curled around ➵ Leaned into ➵ Rested a hand on ➵ Laced fingers with ➵ Pulled close

...or romantic:

̗̀➛ Traced ̗̀➛ Ghosted across ̗̀➛ Brushed against ̗̀➛ Skimmed over ̗̀➛ Lingeringly stroked ̗̀➛ Ran a thumb along ̗̀➛ Tilted their chin ̗̀➛ Tucked a strand of hair behind their ear ̗̀➛ Pressed their forehead against ̗̀➛ Intertwined fingers

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[tholdones]

im always laying on my stomach in this corner of my bed reading and writing

[paperplateprose]

writing challenge!

open up your document and put words in it

[luna-azzurra]

Physical Gestures & Movements List!!

☽ Cracking knuckles before doing something important

☽ That little hop-step when catching up to someone

☽ Adjusting glasses with one finger on the bridge

☽ The way someone walks faster when they realize they're being followed

☽ Drumming fingers in a specific rhythm when thinking

☽ Bouncing a leg under the table during tense moments

☽ The head tilt when genuinely confused

☽ Stretching arms overhead with that little back arch

☽ The shoulder check before crossing the street (but for crossing a room)

☽ Rubbing the back of the neck when embarrassed

☽ That thing where someone touches their lips while thinking

☽ The casual lean against a doorframe Hands in pockets but thumbs out

☽ The double-take that's supposedly subtle but isn't

☽ Walking backward while talking to someone

☽ That little run-up before jumping into water (or any commitment)

☽ Pulling sleeves over hands when cold or anxious

☽ The way people unconsciously mirror each other's posture when vibing

☽ Stretching one arm across the chest with the other

☽ That shake-out people do with their hands when nervous

☽ Rolling shoulders back to reset posture

☽ The look-away when eye contact gets too intense

☽ Biting the inside of the cheek

☽ That barely perceptible nod of acknowledgment Interlacing fingers and inverting palms for the aggressive stretch

☽ The point-with-chin instead of using hands

☽ Toe-tapping in different patterns based on mood

☽ The casual shirt-tug to adjust fit

☽ Wiping palms on pants before a handshake

☽ That thing where someone checks their watch/phone but doesn't register the time

[writingdose]

[my-dailydreams]

[catchymemes]

[lectorel]

What gets me is not only do these two cats look damn near identical, one of them decided got picked up by a total stranger and immediately decided ‘this is my human and I’m gonna keep ‘em’.

[itssjanedoe]

[s-h-a-s-e]

[authorinthemaking]

Writing is wild. One day you’re unstoppable and the next day you’re staring at your keyboard like it personally betrayed you.

[writerscourt]

Villain Motivations

Corrupted by greed and pushed to the brink

Desire to gain the affection of the one they are infatuated with

Desperation to be acknowledged as great

Evil for evil’s sake

Fear of what would happen if they gave up control

Genuinely believing they are doing the right thing

Grief turned revenge

Having felt powerless once and swearing to never be weak again

Having literally no other choice for their own survival

Loyalty to a mentor or superior who is purposely leading them astray

Needing to prove that they are capable of succeeding

Protecting the one thing / person they have left

Protecting/increasing their wealth / power

Trying to get justice for a perceived wrong that was done to them

[ilzzey]

[resqectable]

“Someone who is worthy of your love will never put you in a situation where you feel you must sacrifice your dignity, your integrity, or your self worth to be with them.”

— Unknown

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[ariesrin]

Writing tips: Let bodies do the talking

Body language is one of the most powerful tools you can use in your writing, especially when it comes to dialogue.

It reveals emotion without needing long explanations, and it gives your characters presence long before they speak.

Here are some physical cues you can use to bring your scenes to life:

Crossed arms / defensive stance → guarded, annoyed, uncertain

Fidgeting with sleeves / tapping fingers → nervous, impatient

Lingering touches / brushing hands → affection, tension, desire

Tightened jaw / clenched fists → anger, restraint, frustration

Averted eyes / looking at the floor → guilt, fear, embarrassment

Stepping back / leaning away → distrust or discomfort

Tilting head / raised eyebrows → curiosity, challenge

Shoulders relaxing / exhaling slowly → relief, vulnerability

When should you rely on body language?

When you want to show an emotion instead of naming it

When dialogue alone feels flat

When you need subtext (what they won’t say out loud)

When two characters feel differently than the words they’re speaking

When you want to make a scene more sensory and grounded

Are they really calm, or is their foot tapping like a warning signal? Are they truly angry, or is it just the way their jaw tightens when they’re hurt? Are they saying “I’m fine,” but refusing to meet anyone’s eyes?

Body language adds layers. It tells the truth when your characters won’t. It can add to the rage bubbling on their lips, letting the reader know when they're just about to blow up.

Use it intentionally, and your scenes will read less like conversations on a stage and more like real people breathing on the page.