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Our finished short film
ye s
bc arran didn't like show up, we all had to compromise with just jordan.... so now its all about jordan ;-)
Woooooooooo
Evaluation
Unit 3 Evaluation
 In the first Assignment Brief we were given, we were asked to produce a short film either relating to the trials and tribulations of growing up in Derby or coming up with our own idea but making it aim at younger people. We developed our story off very sensitive subjects at first but also stuck to the brief by creating the young target audience. We did this by taking a classic fairy-tale (Cinderella) and modernizing it by adding action and horror. Personally we thought this narrative would interest young teenagers like ourselves as we developed this thought from our own opinions and after we presented our idea to the class.
Firstly, our short film idea focused around the whole fairy tale romance genre. There were 5 main characters; Daisy/Cinderella, Scott, Stepmother and the two stepsisters. All of the characters related to our Cinderella theme. The main protagonist was Daisy, a cafĂ© worker who lived with her stepmother and sisters. Scott is her boyfriend. Our original story based around the original fairy-tale but with a twist. Daisy worked with her family in the cafĂ©, but she was treated terribly. She was asked on a date by Scott but was forbidden to go by her Stepmother. She sneaked out, but had to be back by midnight. When she isnât back by that time, her stepmother hits her but Daisy retaliates and stabs her. Scott enters, and they both decide to run away and change their names. Scott reveals a pill heâs made called ââFairy Godmotherââ which changed eye colour and state of mind. But at the end they get caught anyway. Our group all thought this was very creative and original as we tried hard to be creative while merging the Cinderella concept with our own ideas.
By the end of the few months we were given to plan our short film, our story and characters completely changed due to complications and opinions. First of all, we calculated that the film will be a lot longer than 5 minutes, which did not fit with the regulations of the assignment brief. So, our group decided to cut half of it, but to the extent that it still makes sense and carries on with the story. Secondly, we could not find a female actress for the main part as many people were busy and nobody wanted to be involved within the romance genre. This is when we decided to change the story so the two main characters were both males and brothers. Daisy was now Marcus, Scott stayed himself but Marcusâ brother, the stepmother was now a father, and there wasnât any step-sisters. Due to this, we completely ditched the whole fairy-tale romance genre and replaced it with a tale of two brothers running away from the murder of their step-father. With this, our short film became a lot more serious and easier to make. We filmed the first two scenes with Arran, Ben and Jordan which were still similar to our original ideas for the scenes. But when we filmed the last scenes, Arran was unavailable for his role. Our group had to compromise to figure out how to make our film without the main character. Originally, Jordan and Arran (Scott and Marcus) were to go upstairs and plan their escape. Instead, Scott was to murder Marcus off-screen so the story focused on Scott instead.
All of the pre-production work that was mentioned in the assignment brief included creating the scripts, storyboards, film scheduling, actor and location agreements, budgeting and floor planning. Our pre-production planning did take a while and made us delay the actual filming. Despite this, we did complete all of the paperwork in an acceptable and non-rushed manner. Our group worked together effectively to complete it all equally.
Despite all of the complications with locations, actors and paperwork, our film ended up really well and how we wanted it to. My group all agree that our project ended up even better than we expected it to be. When we were actually able to go out of college and film, neither of us had difficulties filming, directing or acting. We filmed with ease, and with not many outtakes and bloopers. As I filmed a lot of it, I did not use the college camera but one of my own so I knew all the settings. The editing went well but when we first did it, we knew practically nothing about the software. But as time went on, both me and Josh learnt a lot about it. I think next time I make a film, I should hire proper actors so the production seems a lot more professional.
WHOAH
WE ACTUALLY FINISHED OUR FILM.
Hopefully filming the last two scenes on Monday (if not were screwed)
New Treatment
Scene 1 The main character (Marcus) walks through the doors of college, walks down the steps then looks at his watch. He realises he is late, and starts to power walk and then gradually starts to run. This is where we show the title.
Scene 2 Marcus walks up to the cafĂ© kitchen door and throws his bag to the ground. His stepfather walks in with a stern look on his face and leans against the wall. They both argue about Marcus being late and this ends by Marcus getting hit harder than usual. He retaliates and grabs a knife and stabs his stepfather in the chest. He falls to the ground, and Marcus steps back and takes a moment to realise what he has done. At that moment, Scott (Marcusâs brother) walks in to find the crime scene. Scott doesnât act shocked but just tells his brother to clean himself up upstairs while he sorts the body.
Scene 3 Marcus cleans his hands up and throws a suitcase on his bed. He starts to frantically pack but Scott walks up behind him and tries to calm him down. He comes up with a solution. They both decide to run away as fugitives and Scott hands Marcus a handgun and a small pill bottle with a label that reads ââTake Oneââ. He advises him to take it and he does. Marcusâs attitude changes completely and he loads the gun and places it in his suitcase.
Scene 4 Marcus and Scott are in a cheap motel room or apartment producing the drug that Marcus took earlier. They light a lighter but then they hear footsteps and gradually two detectives knock down the door with a battery ram. They aim at Marcus and try to place him under arrest but he pulls out his gun at them.
Help
Because we've changed our film idea so much, im not sure whether to re-do most of the paperwork we did, e.g proposal and treatment???
BOUGHT A COOL KNIFE
Well uh um uh like in scene 2, our character gets stabbed and we didn't actually want to use a real knife so he didn't like....die
Why did this take so long
Filmed the first 2 scenes yesterday!!!! Gonna film the last 2 tomorrow. Hallelujah
Toot toot
Our film is gonna be proper sp00ky now. Filming tomorrow
Yo douwg
So the group is chilling and it come the attention of the slothmeister that this low down needs a name so i hooked them up with the âblood lineâ and WHAM you know its a winner home run for this media scientist :PÂ
SUP HOMIE
Like the group have come to a decision to change the plan this nancey mancy romance fairy tale stuff wasnât my mocha chocha any way looks like we pulled up and Mc action thriller and asked for a large portion of kick as productions and a side of friesÂ
Changes (David bowie)
Today we decided that were ditching the whole "modernized romance fairytale" genre and making our film a cheeky action thriller. Daisy is now Marcus and Scott is his brother
YO
I've done all my work and I'm waiting for everyone else which is pretty neato. Gotta start filming
BOUGHT A COOL KNIFE