a short story i made, feel free to correct my grammar and or overall writing in general
TW: this story has to do with a rough home life, I am 15 and if at points it seems I don't know what I'm talking about, just know, I barely understand my home life, it just doesn't feel good and I wanted to write about it
Characters:
Main (Amber)
Sister (Entity)
Mom (???)
Dark.. The room was always dark, and quiet, and messy
Often times her mom would tell her to clean it but she never had the motivation to clean it
For her everyday was a battlefield, the people in her life her the rounds of ammunition being shot at her, everyday actions like “socializing” were grenades and aerial strikes, in war there was only one way to avoid it all; the trenches
Every so often though, the trenches were gassed out, the room was no longer safe… if the trenches were unsafe, what then?
death
cruel, agonizing, suffocating death at the hands of mustard gas, at the hands of her mother
It wasn’t always like this, or at least she doesn’t think so…
To be honest, she doesn’t remember a time before this, but that’s more so a failure of her memory rather than a failure of her mother
nothing is ever a failure on her mothers side
Before it became so suffocating there was an entity, an unknowable, almost lovecraftian
Her sister
The entity was at least 5 years older than her, so she says
The entity was the first victim of the mother, so she says
Like SEGA does cooler like publishing Persona 5 Royal and making Jet Set Radio, SEGA can cook, lay off the hedgehogs for bit (I say that as a Sonic fan)
[looking at people younger than me] you have your whole life ahead of you [looking at people older than me] you have your whole life ahead of you [looking at myself] its over
hi we’re a24 and we loved the ytp you posted when you were 15. do you want to direct the multimillion dollar adaptation of your opus, simpsons gone purple?
I'll try my best to not spoil just like the fish said but you know [SPOILERS AHEAD]
I cried in the car cause of just how emotional that ending was
I mean of course the writing was on the wall to what was gonna happen (literally) but still, what the fuck
There was this once scene where I had to hold my tongue to not yell at a character cause of what they were doing
Something I loved was the visual story telling
The way the VHS is used to signify when a character is feeling a lot of negative emotions at once
The way the light hearted stuff is in Gangle (or Zoobles I'm not sure which one) artstyle
The muffin in the Cafe being split in exact halves representing the way a brainscan looks.
The way that when Pomni tries to take her VR headset she touches her face, which if you used a headset you'd know you can only touch around you're face cause there's something physically there, that being the headset
Pomni isn't real, she's digital which also means that JAX WAS RIGHT, EVERYONE TECHNICALLY WAS A BUNCH OF CARTOON CHARACTERS
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dailybridgerton
gummygunk
yousharknotpass
snowghoul
blakekathryn
