Ten Year Old Fan "Could Have Written This Episode Better."
After reading the latest episode of acclaimed Webtoon Nevermore, ten year old fan Olivia Smith announced on social media that she "could have written this episode better."
"Another Monty flashback?" she rhetorically asked her followers in a TikTok live. "This season keeps getting worse. I only started this Webtoon because I wanted to see the girls kiss. And it's totally out of character for Monty to pretend to be religious! It's like RnF don't even know the characters anymore," she added, using the common fan name for writer Kit Trace and artist Kate Flynn.
After a viewer asked how she would improve upon the current episode, Smith straightened slightly and elaborated on her plan. "First, I'd kill off both Monty and Will, of course. Then I'd kill off all the other side characters who take too much screentime. And then after that I think I'd bring the focus to Lenore, and she'd be looking for Annabel. She'd find her about halfway through the episode, and they'd kiss in front of all the remaining background students, too scared of death to worry about hiding anymore. The Wild Hunt would see them kiss and be overwhelmed by the power of true love and would leave the school, dragging the Deans away with them. And then Lenore and Annabel would kiss again."
"After all," Smith noted with a roll of her eyes. "How am I supposed to know they love each other if they don't ever kiss?"
While her initial plan seemed cut and dry, a second viewer (identified as fourteen year old Ava Garcia-Ramirez) quickly asked Smith if she knew that "Lennabel" was a toxic relationship, meaning it shouldn't be glorified in media and that having the two of them kiss would be actively harmful to minors and minor-coded adults.
Smith was preparing her rebuttal when her parents opened her bedroom door and informed her it was past her bedtime, ending the livestream and preventing reporters from procuring any further details about the unfolding story.






















