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An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
I'M DONE! I'VE FINALLY FINISHED! THANK YOU ALL WHO HAVE FOLLOWED ME ALONG THIS JOURNEY!
I should have the final chapter out by tomorrow
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Atal's Rest is finally finished! Thank you to all those who have been following along, and for those who are new please enjoy!
Finals complete! Next two chapters should be out soon.
Writing advice from someone who's read way too much fanfiction!!
─ .✦ If your villain monologues for more than two paragraphs, your hero should've escaped by now or at least checked their phone. Real people don't wait politely for evil speeches to finish. They interrupt, get bored and say things like "okay but can you get to the point I have dinner plans."
─ .✦ Stop having your characters look in mirrors to describe themselves. Your protagonist doesn't wake up and think "I looked at my reflection and saw my shoulder-length auburn hair and piercing green eyes." They think "ugh I look like death" and move on. Find literally ANY other way.
─ .✦ If every sentence in your action scene is the same length it reads like a grocery list with violence. Short punchy sentences for fast moments. Longer flowing ones when they catch their breath and realize oh god that hurt. Variety is your friend and so is rhythm.
─ .✦ Your character can cry without it being beautiful. Let them be UGLY. Let their face get blotchy and their nose run and their eyes puff up. Let them hiccup and gasp and wipe snot on their sleeve. Crying IS GROSS!
Writing a character who becomes severely malnourished/dehydrated/sleep-deprived?
Here’s what you’ll need to know! Learn all about the wonders of the human body and add scientifically-accurate drama to your stories.
MALNOURISHMENT
DEATH: average - 21 days (3 weeks), max ever recorded - 70 days (2.3 months)
6 HOURS: grouchiness and hunger due to lack of glucose.
24 HOURS - 48 HOURS: hunger very apparent; pains in stomach; body has entered ketosis and is using fatty acids as energy.
72 HOURS+: muscles begin to get broken down for energy.
You will become: increasingly depressed, irritable, hysteric apathetic; decline in concentration, comprehension and judgement; social isolation and withdrawal; possible self-harm.
If your character doesn’t eat for 5 consecutive days, they are at risk of Refeeding Syndrome. This is extremely dangerous and can be fatal.
recommended reading:
The Minnesota Starvation Experiment
Psychology of starvation based on the above experiment.
DEHYDRATION
DEATH: average 3 days; some live 8 - 10 days
for the calculations: TWV = total water volume in body; average adult loses 2.5 litres of water per day.
Assuming that your character does not eat, drink or absorb any moisture.
9 HOURS/2% TWV: thirst, discomfort, dry skin, loss of appetite; 50% loss of performance for athletes; elevated body temperature, rapid heartbeat, fatigue, dizziness when standing, decreased fluid secretion (sweat, urination, tears, etc).
24 HOURS/6% TWV: sleepiness, severe headaches, nausea, tingling in limbs.
36 - 72 HOURS/ 6 - 15% TWV: no urination, seizures, muscle spasms, shriveled skin, fainting, vision dimming, delirium.
72 HOURS+/15% TWV+: Organ failure.
recommended reading:
dehydration on the psychology wiki.
SLEEP DEPRIVATION
DEATH: not known, but can stay awake for 11 days; max chronic sleep deprivation ever recorded (until death) - 6 months.
NOTE: This does not mean you can stay awake for 6 months. It means you can survive that long with chronic sleep deprivation - going days without sleep and then sleeping once or twice.
24 HOURS: mental ability impairment of someone who has blood-alcohol content of 0.10%; everything is worse - emotional control, memory, attention, decision-making, hand-eye coordination.
36 HOURS: hormonal spikes everywhere; losing time; lack of motivation; head buzzing like you’re dehydrated.
48 HOURS: microsleep, regardless of what you’re doing (you fall asleep for 1-30 seconds and then become disorientated);
72 HOURS+: say goodbye to higher mental processes like decision-making and planning. Also, say good bye to saying goodbye because even simple conversations are hard.
80 HOURS+: … and hello, hallucinations!
recommended reading:
this article of a soldier’s experience with sleep deprivation.
Eleven Days Awake; The Experiment.
Chapter 8 is out now! I hope you all enjoy!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/57899023/chapters/212519406
Next chapter should be out march 8th
If my fic series contradicts Re9 I will try to go back and edit certain parts of it to be in line.
But for now things should be good. Just need a minor tweak here or there
Finished writing it. I'll edit it and get it out this evening
Update I'm not feeling great. I might delay it to tomorrow.
Next chapter should be out march 8th
If my fic series contradicts Re9 I will try to go back and edit certain parts of it to be in line.
But for now things should be good. Just need a minor tweak here or there
Finished writing it. I'll edit it and get it out this evening
Next chapter should be out march 8th
If my fic series contradicts Re9 I will try to go back and edit certain parts of it to be in line.
But for now things should be good. Just need a minor tweak here or there
Next chapter should be out march 8th
Sorry I couldn't finish my fics by the release of re9! :[
So with Re9 and my fic series.
As of now, nothing I've seen contradicts what happens in my fic. I will try to incorporate RE9 into my fic, but if Leon dies, then I'll likely switch canon here to where he survives. Since I do have a few more plans for him.
I'm also beginning to work on my own writing. As such, my activity on this series will likely become more sporadic after I finish the two fics I've been working on. While I love writing it, I need to start writing actual short stories that I can submit and build upon to hopefully one day become a published author.
Thank you all or read.
You guys ever look at the mess you wrote hoping that people will still be able to understand it because it's too late to change things now?
I don't think what I have is that bad. It's just requires people to suspended their disbelief on how big a funhouse could be.
I want to write a book about dinosaurs
I just don't know what the plot would be about
Next chapter out now!
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I may go back and reedit chapter 7 a bit. Make things a bit more coherent
Writing Notes: Winter Illnesses
Colds, flus and other respiratory illnesses are often more common in colder months. People are indoors more often, allowing viruses to pass more easily from one person to another. And the cold, dry air may weaken resistance. Some examples:
Common Cold. Your nose and throat are infected. Your ears may also be infected. Somebody coughed or sneezed near you, or you touched a contaminated surface, like a doorknob. More than 200 viruses can cause colds. The most common is the rhinovirus. You probably have a runny nose, scratchy throat, low-grade fever, fatigue, chills and aches. And you probably are sneezing and coughing. You probably know that there’s no cure for the common cold. Decongestants, cough drops and antihistamines can help with symptoms. Rest and liquids may speed your recovery. It can last for a few days to several weeks.
Flu. Your upper respiratory tract (nose, throat, and upper airways) is infected. You got the influenza (flu) virus from airborne droplets sneezed or coughed, or by touching contaminated surfaces. Flu viruses keep evolving, which is why influenza vaccines are updated every year. You’re exhausted, and you may have a fever, headache and body aches. You’re likely sneezing and coughing, and your throat may be sore. Relieve symptoms with rest, fluids and medicines. In severe cases, or for individuals at high risk for complications, antiviral medications like oseltamivir (Tamiflu) may be prescribed. Antivirals are most effective when started within 48 hours to reduce the flu’s duration, severity and risk of complications. The worst of it — fever and aches — is often over in 3-5 days. The coughing and general fatigue can linger 2 weeks or more.
Acute Bronchitis. Inflamed bronchi (the big tubes that bring air to the lungs) result in too much mucus. You may get it from a cold or flu virus — so getting a flu shot lowers your risk — or you might have inhaled bacteria. You’re particularly susceptible if you smoke or have allergies, sinusitis, or enlarged tonsils or adenoids. Like you can’t stop coughing. You probably started with a dry cough that soon became mucus-producing. You may also have aches and pains, chills, headache, runny nose, sore throat, shortness of breath, watery eyes and wheezing. It will clear up on its own — unless it progresses to pneumonia, which can be treated with antibiotics. Meanwhile, a humidifier, cough medicine and pain relievers can ease your symptoms. It will last about 2 weeks for most symptoms, though the cough can linger for a couple of months.
Chronic Bronchitis. Inflamed bronchi (the big tubes that bring air to the lungs) result in overproduction of mucus. Bronchitis is considered chronic if you have a mucus-producing cough at least three months per year, two years in a row. You may get it from smoking, but irritants like air pollution may also be to blame. You have a persistent cough, plus chest discomfort and difficulty breathing. The goal of treatment is to reduce symptoms so you can breathe more easily. If you smoke, quitting is recommended. Oral or inhaled medications can open your airways. In severe cases, you might consider lung reduction surgery or a lung transplant. Chronic bronchitis may ebb and flow, but it’s not going away.
Pneumonia. Your lungs are infected, causing air sacs to fill with pus and other liquids. Viruses are responsible for about one-third of cases. The rest are caused by bacteria or fungi that are inhaled, particularly by people weakened by surgery, illness, age or smoking. Symptom severity ranges from mild to life-threatening and can include confusion, fever, a cough that produces mucus, heavy sweating, shaking chills, lack of appetite, rapid breathing and pulse, shortness of breath that gets worse with activity, and stabbing pain in the chest that’s worse with coughing or deep breathing. If you have viral pneumonia, rest, eat well and drink plenty of fluids. Bacterial pneumonia can be treated with antibiotics. In both cases, medications can ease your fever and cough. Most people respond well to treatment and recover in 1-3 weeks, but pneumonia can be very serious and even deadly.
Whooping Cough. Also known as pertussis, it is a serious and very contagious bacterial infection that mainly affects infants and young children. A bacterium called Bordetella pertussis, which is spread by coughing, sneezing and even breathing, causes whooping cough. It starts like a common cold, and progresses to include coughing spells that end with a whooping sound as you gulp for air. Other symptoms include fever, sneezing, runny nose and watery eyes. Your best bet is early treatment with antibiotics, which may reduce the infection and will make you less contagious. Stay warm, drink lots of fluids and limit exposure to things that make you cough, like smoke or dust. It may last up to 10 weeks. It can lead to pneumonia and other complications.
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