Our boy is traumatized! 🥹🥹🥹 (as if he didn't go through other horrors previously)
Oh Jazz... I was stressing throughout the entire chapter. Even tho we know he ends up in the safety of the autobots at the end of it. It's rough man. I think some people forget that Jazz is capable of feeling fear during his missions. I really do like how you incorporated that fear in his inner thoughts. Its subtle but you can feel his anxiety throughout the chapter.
Also! Women's wrongs! I enjoyed reading a woman commit acts of violence. We need more of that. Genocide (Shockwave, full offense, get better at naming) pop off queen, we need more female characters in male dominated positions. I support. I also await the day where Jazz kicks your ass (probably unlikely cuz, you really fucked him up).
Will Genocide be a major antagonist in the story? Or is she a minor character that haunts Jazz's nightmares or something?
What is Shockwave up to? What is he on? Will he also represent a disorder?
How much more trauma are you planning to put Jazz through? Aside from the next 2 chapters.
This chapter was amazing! I cant wait to see what other horrors Jazz has to go through and suffer alongside him :D
- Perceptor's Husband (I could totally treat him better than Brainstorm, TRUST)
oh you think he is traumatized now?? *author laugh of pre-writen*
yeaa the emotional value is basically the entire story, he does his job and in order he has to suppress his emotions... but PTSD dont play and when faced with your abuser you dont have a choice (he still tries tho rip i could never)
when i tell you i laugh for so fucking long at this paragraph lol, absolutely dying thank you. male dominated feild killed me >< im glad relayed well tho! unfortunately you will have to be along for the ride with here as it is all spoilers... good luck!
no she has her role to play and definitely has an impact on jazz- considered one of his abusers (the many just wait for chapter 6 omg the trigger warnings) but i think we only see her like twice after this... she will have roles to play in others fics tho trust (this shit is gonna be a series series lol)
you will have to seeeeeeee hehe but everything single character represents something: it doesnt have to be a disorder. like slingshot who represents the ignorance of society (you'll see next chapter) or geno, who represents generational abuse and internalized abuse. shockwave primarily represents abusers the effect they have on their victims in this case jazz. he does however have some stuff because i cant resist. it wont be super obvious unless you know cluster B personality disorders but he will manyly be ASPD or anti-social personality disorder plus duh hes autistic and *checks his toyhouse* ...other stuff. TL;DR he is my version of hannible lecter (no canibalism) and you'll meet him in chapter 9 trust
this entire damn fic is jazz going through the ringer lol if you are refering to part 2 and 3 of what happen to jazz... my spoiler is cortical psychic patch of the next one. i would also like to clarify that the flashbacks are every 3 chapters! next time we will jazz will be chapter 6. (dont ask why i did it like this idk man but hopefully it works and its confusing)
thank you so much your anons make my day!