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DJP #12

in my two essays my authors both have different ideas on the black lives matter movement. Author heather MacDonald says that the black lives matter is promoting false evidence and is a danger to police and African american lives. While Author Ranjana Natarajan says that the black Lives movement is alerting all peoples of how corrupt the police are and how they are dangerous they can be.

Author MacDonald says “that the black lives matter narrative racial criminal justice system is false and dangerous”(MacDonald 2-3)

In the essays both authors feel that the black lives movement has a huge impact on how the american public sees the united states police force. While author MacDonald feels that the impact is negative and will put officers and citizens in unnecessary danger. While author Natarajan feel that the black lives matter movement can finally bring a new beginning in the way police and citizens connect and can put to bed the animosity the minorities community feels towards the police force.

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DJP 9

Sentence to use in my essay

1.in a recent study published by the APA researched about the link between video games and criminal violence and they stated that " insufficient evidence suggest video games link to criminal violence" (LINK)

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DJ8

Im planning to write a about the concept of how video games are perceived by the american parent and politician.Most parents have this common notion that video games are rotting a persons brain. That there is no value to having them. Though in truth video games are works of art and they are similar to books,movies and other art sources.

Some examples would be that when you are young most of the time in school your teacher is trying to get you interested in literature. Though as a child its boring because you can’t see a picture of the books words. While video games can help you see it. Video games can put you into these great world and put you the viewer on center stage to work thru the problems your character is encontering

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djp#6

my concept would be is there honor in wars.i want to know what actual soldiers feel about war. Their are families in america that feel that theirs honor in war and all their family are soldiers or descendants of soldiers. I want to find out because there are people in our community,our government, and our families that argue over topics of war. though we don’t really know because most have not experienced war.

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djp5

in my essay I will be showing my person to my reader who this person is. Tell the reader who this person is to others and what in her life makes her relatable to us. why we should care about knowing this person. to show the reader who on the surface what this person is but also who they are deep down. going into my interview I planned on showing the reader what I knew about her and try to convey some of my feelings when first meeting her. To now how I see her and view her .

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djb 3

in the article written by jack wood and ginpiero petriglieri the say that a gland in our minds decided if a object we perceive is something we like or we dislike specifically they say "however, the amygdala decides whether we like the object or not (and often initiates a behavioral response) before the cortex has even managed what the object actually is, and long before we are allowed the luxury of a conscious thought or conscious feeling.

So basically what the authors are telling us is that the gland in our head labels things or persons in categories before we even rationally think about it. the documentary what the bleep do we know also expands on this. the documentary  says that we as humans have gland in our head that label things for us before we even know what it is. they give a example of being in your bed and deciding to get up out of bed or not. our eyes look at our floor and decide for us that the floor we stand on is not dangerous to us so we get out of bed. if we eyes labeled the floor as dangerous we would stay in bed all day.

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