I have hit the chapter with nesta's emotional breakdown and idk how to feel. The expression of her pain and depression feels real but also like the timing & the outpouring of emotion also seems ooc? I want to be relieved by this part but I am slightly thrown off. I'm not sure why though maybe I'm being overly critical.
Anyway, excited to finish the book. Pacing has felt really off until we hit the latter half of the story.
















