Palxmpsest
Opinion on;
Character in general — Since I just followed you and have not read too many of your interactions just yet, I think my opinion will be a bit more watered down. I will try! As far as face claim is concerned, I absolutely love that you used Boa instead of the plain and mundane girl group idol; it is near refreshing to see muses that aren’t Apink or Girls Day. Who all just sort of blend in together for me. Journalist and painter aren’t the newest of occupations in roleplay; but I firmly believe that people can take the typical and make them atypical. I think you do that quite nicely with Quinn overall, even if I would like to see more of those aspects in interactions? Maybe there was some and I overlooked it.As much as I think detailed biographies are nice, I think at times we as readers can get lost when reading things that are filled with description and metaphors more than simply facts or figures. However, I do think that your usage of description is subtle enough that it does not melt over into flowery language. Though it does straddle that line. I like that you do not give away too much details in your biography because Quinn appears to be quite mysterious, her origins don’t need to be overly elaborated on because her history is meant to be vague. At least, that’s what I take from my prying. I also like the attention to her abilities, each one seems as if they fit nicely into whatever type of being she might be. Instead of adding on to make the character powerful, like an afterthought. Either way, I also like that you took time to tell me about her physical appearance. How her tattoos and odd eye colour fits into her being nonhuman, her origins. Sometimes characters with such quirks can dip into the Mary Sue type of area, mystifying body art and unearthly eyes, I think yours for her works well enough to stray away from that trope.How they play them — I really love how much attention you put into your writing, there is a lot of good solid details, and it breathes life into your muse. I can’t say I read enough where I was able to get a sense of who she was from the words alone. But hopefully in the future that will change. She curses a lot?I think from me to you, you don’t need to try to be poetic or use bigger words, because I believe your writing naturally flows and would be able to stand on its own without the additions. “A city constructed from bones of enemies slain”, you used that line in a reply and I loved it so much that it literally like stuck in my brain for a good ten minutes. People don’t apperciate things like this because they find it simple in comparison to purple prose; but in reality, it’s this type of writing that really pulls a reader in. I was pulled in and it allowed for me to see into her head, she’s old as hell, seeing the world through this type of lense shows not only her age — but her personal views on the world that she NOW is in. Those are character insights that I think are refreshing overall.
The Mun —
Do I;RP w/ them — Not yet! I learned she is my mobile soulmate and she was singing to me.Want to rp w/ them — We plotting, when I get my life together;
What is my;
Overall Opinion — A muse with a hell of a lot of potential, quite nice writing, and a mun who seems really cool overall okay. Just follow. Bye.














