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yeah, this is a place where i can post my art and improvement, follow if you want to join my journey!

[rabberry]

I'M MAKING A VISUAL NOVEL

(The Rite of Lost Dolls) - name is a work in progress

ANNOUNCEMENT!!!! 😱

Yup! I (Rabberry) am making a short visual novel. Its at the stage where I feel like I can confidently announce that I am working on it and that it will be completed.

It will be free!!

CONCEPT:

The Rite of Lost Dolls is a short point and click visual novel about a woman named Cordellia who went on a 7 year journey in order to complete a ritual that her father had done before she was born You play as Cordellia after she's finished the journey, but the journey and the process of collecting the symbols is making her lose her memories. So at her desk she must put together the ritual and her memories before the night ends or else her journey would be for nothing. it's a mystery game with horror and a tiny bit of romance as she looks back on her journey

Anyway follow if any of this looks interesting ^^

[rabberry]

I ended up not doing a lot of rendering on the characters so that their emotions could show well. Ive noticed in my other attempts at comics

[rabberry]

Mackie being all alone while Prim always has friends willing to be there for her is like ALAkALKNALnk Mackie thinks she has it all but in reality she doesn't.

[exemiin]

my little 190cm baby

[rabberry]

more line art for the comic

[rabberry]

fist line art complete! ^^

[rabberry]

exploring my ocs with a comic lol. Mackie and Primrose used to be friends lol

[rabberry]

been doing some practice sketches

[rabberry]

by the way, this is the panels from the Visual Novel clip, they are quite simple compared to the full cgs

[chubcloud]

I didn't fully finish Nilou either, but pretty proud of him!! Especially his Skin details!

[rabberry]

I actually quite like drawing romance lol i just don't do it often. what can i say, drawing two people interacting closely is hard

[fae-swamp-witch]

behold. the rough draft. it.

[rabberry]

im about half way through this drawing, i was thinking of doing a short comic for these two or Primrose and Mackie's backstories

[rabberry]

My visual novel is going well hehe. added some panels that drop down in some parts to add some pizazz!!

[rabberry]

im drawing straight ppl (GASP!) jk lol. I mean they are straight lol. I thinkkkk Primrose may be bisexual

[rabberry]

its doneeee!! it turned out exactly how i wanted it, the spirit looks so cool but i'm a little biased

[chubcloud]

OH MA GAWD IS THIS PRETTY HELP MY HEART IT GLOWS OUT OF HAPPINESS WTFFFF

[rabberry]

AHHH! THANK YOUUU!!! BUT BE CAREFUL GLOWING HEARTS ARENT NORMAL!!! sksksk jk lol also that gif is adorable

[rabberry]

its doneeee!! it turned out exactly how i wanted it, the spirit looks so cool but i'm a little biased