[ricemothh]

I don’t get in fairy tail fanfics when they introduce Natsu as the guy with weird pink hair when all of the characters have bright ass color hair too. Erza having blood shot red hair, and Wendy having bright blue hair. I doesnt really make sense.

[ricemothh]

I might buy a laptop just for the main purpose being fanfictions

[ricemothh]

Glancing at Her (Sting x Lucy) pt.1

Summary: HIGH SCHOOL AU

Sting, the popular guy, is falling in love with a girl one year younger than him, Lucy Heartfilia. He tries to gather up the courage to ask her out before summer ends, but there's a problem she has a over protective big brother, Loke. How will this end up?

Warning: sexual tension,

A/N : hello, this is my first fanfic on here. This whole chapter was in Sting’s P.O.V (StingLu might turn into a StingxLucyxNatsu or StiLuRo or StingxLucyxLaxus haven’t really decided on it yet give me your thoughts)

I look through the corner of eyes, looking at the girl I’ve been staring at for the past 3 months. Not even ever trying to take a chance to talk to her, just looking at her was enough to satisfy me. Her beautiful smile, her cute laugh when she talks with her friends sitting at her desk near the window. The sun light shining and hitting her gorgeous glossy lips that I’ve been staring at wondering what the taste of her lips would taste like.

“Lucy...” I sighed while her name gives me a sweet taste leaving my mouth, knowing I wouldn’t have the courage to talk to her face-to-face. “Why you sighing?” A loud voice said while I was deep in my thought. “Oh, I was umm.. thinking.. about how I was gonna finish my stupid math homework tonight,” I said with small pauses between my words trying to make a good lie to tell.

“Yeah, I know right? How could Aquarius-Sensei give us a PACKET to do during summer break?!!” Rufus saids exaggerating the packet part. Rufus Lore, one of my best friends in Fiore High. I’ve been with him since middle school through thick and thin but one of my closest best friends I’ve been through with is from elementary. He may be quiet most of the times but that doesn’t mean he can’t enjoy his times with the mighty Sting Eucliffe. His name is Rouge Cheney, even if we don’t look a like in the closes, they still call us The Twins.

Rouge standing besides me while I’m sitting on top of my desk near the back entrance of the room, surrounded by my group of friends talking loudly. “Are you okay Sting? You’ve been quite now and acting a bit weird,” The quite Rouge stating breaking the short silence between the group of friends. “Hah, I’ve been acting weird? Really? It’s because I’ve been so bored lately. I’m waiting for it to turn finally summer and go to the beach and have some fun!!” I reply to Rouge, laughing off his question then glancing through the corner of my eye to the bright blonde hair girl. Smiling and giggle to myself to see the girl leaning back on her chair and falling to the ground. Gosh, what ever she did always make me laugh and giggle like a maniac.

Rouge and Rufus gives me a weird stare, “What you looking at?” I said to the both of them staring back at them two straight in their eyes. “N-nothing..” they both said in unison giving each other a look of concern for their blond headed friend. The school bell then rings loudly through the halls and classrooms, echoing for at least 5 seconds. Everybody standing up and saying their goodbyes to their friends, now leaving to go back to their own original classrooms.

Lucy standing up from her borrowed seat and heading to the nearest door, the back door. Hearing her say her goodbyes and waving as she leave the classroom. I sniff the air and smelling her wonderful sweet vanilla-strawberry scent lingering through the hallways and down the stairs. Yeah, I know. She is actually a year younger than me. Everyday she comes to visit her friend here, and always sitting in the same seat, the back corner next to the window. I’ve look back to watch her leaving in the distance, I’m always staring at her and I’m even self aware that this is really creepy. But I just can’t stop it. Seeing her elegantly walking and swaying her hips side to side and her breast jiggle, ahem.. she was very curvy and I think everybody knows it. I can feel the drool dripping down my open mouth but before it can fall onto the floor I wipe it with my sleeve. I feel like a pervert looking at her like this...

Right after she left the teacher walks in, Aries-Sensei, our history teacher. She really nice but always apologizes in every sentence she says. It gets annoying sometimes but I’ll let it slide since she gives me passing grades.

Rouge and Rufus go back to their own seats sitting down and not paying attention to whatever the teacher is saying. Even though I don’t get that good of a grade for school I don’t really care since I’m passing the important classes. The only class I’m getting a A all the time in is P.E class. My dad owns a gym and I always go there to train my tone body. I know, I know, I have a sexy muscular body anybody can die for. I give a smirk, even with all this confidence I still don’t have the courage to talk to her.

I’m I really in love or is it just a small crush? I question to myself in my head. Battling the thought on why I just can’t. Tuning out the conversations my classmates are having with Aries-sensei, I sigh again for the second time today. I should really gather all my confidence together to ask her out, even if she rejects and it would hurt my big pride heart.

I lean my chin into my palm as I close my eyes. Tapping my toes. I’ll make a bet to myself, by the end of summer I have to at least ask her out or even better be dating her. And if I don’t I’ll post all of my embarrassing secrets online.

I’ll just hope that asking her out wouldn’t be that as bad as the time I accidentally drank vinegar instead of water. Thinking about that gives me shiver, the face I can imagine when I drank that and the taste going down my throat.

I’m thinking too much about her again... I finally decided to fall asleep in class, laying my head inside my arms. But this is going to be an interesting summer this year.

[ricemothh]

I have soo many fanfic ideas but I suck at writing

[charlietheepic7]

How to Get More Clicks on your Fanfiction

B/c for some godless reason, I managed to get a piece of trash fic moderate popularity over on ff.net, so I might as well teach some of you people how to fake it til you make it. Plus, I can’t tell you how many times I didn’t read a perfectly good fic just because either something in the title, description, or format destroyed whatever interest I had. 

I’m going to split this up into 3 sections: Title, Summary, and Format.  

Title: 

Either write the title with proper capitalization or none at all. 

By “Proper Capitalization,” I mean capitalizing every word in the title except for prepositions (to, on, with, by, etc), pronouns (your, her, him, etc), or article adjectives (a, an, the). The only exception are if they are at the start of the title or the pronoun “I.”

All lower case titles are usually really long, like song lyrics, and for shorter works of fiction. 

Just please, for the love of God, don’t just  capitalize the first word and leave the rest in lower case, that looks so lazy, please.

Length is also important, so try one that reflects your story’s tone. Long titles give the impression that the work is more poetic and prose, while one word titles seem very serious. Metaphors and similes can seem pretentious while titles of popular songs are overused and cliche (Example: search “Angel with a Shotgun” on ff.net.) You want the title to be memorable. 

Song titles and lyrics are fine, but only if they have to do with your fic. No one actually cares either way, but it still helps to set the tone of the story.

Summary: 

Please, for the love of all that is holy, write a damn summary. Don’t leave it blank for only the tags to explain, don’t just write “Read and find out,” just write a damn summary. Your readers want to know what the story is about. People like different things and no matter how good your title is, it’s not going to help people determine if they’re clicking a horror story or a romantic comedy. 

Also, stop writing things like “I suck at summaries!!! :(” No. Bad writer. If you admit you suck at summaries, then you basically admit you’re bad at writing. That’s probably not true, but to the average reader, it’s the same thing. Have confidence. 

If your story contains a certain AU that’s extremely popular (For example: Coffee-house AUs), then mention them in the summary, especially if there are no tags like FF.net. Place it at the end of the summary so the potential reader will have to read the entire summary to get there, increasing the chances they’ll read. 

Quotes are… overused, but that’s understandable. The writer wants to showcase their writing, and in many cases the quotes they choose do exactly that. Just make sure you choose good ones that showcase the story. Is it a comedy? Funny quote. Is it a romance? Kissy quote. Is it horror? Scary quote.

If you want your summary to just be this quote, then… you can, but it’s the same as being vague unless it’s a REALLY good quote.

In terms of placement, it’s up to you to place it at the beginning or the end. Read it out loud to see which sounds better. Just don’t be a weirdo and put it in the middle.

Do not mislead people in summaries. Do not describe the story as lovely fluff if someone gets murdered in the opening paragraph. Do not mislead the audience, for the audience has pitchforks and fire. 

Always do a last minute read-over of your summary for spelling and grammar. No text speech unless it’s a text fic.

Format

PARAGRAPHS

YOU NEED PARAGRAPHS

WHEN YOU CHANGE LOCATION, TIME, OR SPEAKER, PLEASE GO TO A NEW PARAGRAPH. It doesn’t matter if paragraphs are only one sentence long. It doesn’t matter if paragraphs are one word long. We’re not in grade school, you don’t need 5 sentences per paragraph anymore. 

In fact, kill the idea of long paragraph after long paragraph forever. Readers need variation in sentence structure and paragraph structure. A short sentence after an extremely long sentence feels like a breath of fresh air; it’s the same thing with paragraphs.

While writing in certain tenses isn’t as noticeable as the whole paragraph thing, if you start in past tense, try to keep it in past tense. If you started in 3rd persona point of view, don’t switch to 1st halfway through the story.

Keep excessive author’s notes at the bottom unless they are urgent, like you’re in the hospital and you won’t be updating for a few months. EDIT: Or if you are not a native English speaker. As long as you mention that, most people will be a lot more forgiving of spelling and grammar mistakes (Some people will even volunteer to beta for you!).

Excessive misspellings and grammar mistakes. Buy a spelling checker, find a beta reader, just please don’t constantly misspell common words and write only in sentence fragments. Pretend you’re going to publish your fic if you have to, just dont right lik dis.