I’m currently working on my original story, Spectral Siblings: Whispers Across the Void, and I would love some feedback to improve it if you have the time to do so.
Think Supernatural meets Locke & Key. For generations, the Thompson family has used their wealth and psychic gifts to protect Sunnydale from supernatural threats. Teen medium Kaylie resents the duty, while her younger brother Max is eager to join the fight. But when they discover the hauntings they battle are not random and that a hostile group called the Spirit Syndicate is deliberately creating the chaos they clean up, they must move from protectors to investigators. Teaming up with unlikely allies, they must uncover the Syndicate's dark plot and stop them from tearing the veil between worlds apart for good. Expect sibling snark, eerie hauntings, and mystical showdowns.
You can find story links here!
Wattpad Story Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/403198329-spectral-siblings-whispers-across-the-void
AO3 Story Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/72972031
Inkitt Story Link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1625479
I would be so grateful for any comments or feedback, it's been pretty rough trying to get any really. happy new year everyone! 💛













