without the comic bubbles
"Well things started out quite normal in the mushroom kingdom, Mario received a letter from Peach saying that she has baked a very special cake and has invited him, Luigi, Yoshi and Wario to come to the castle to join her for a tea party. However as they reached to the castle Mario notice something was unusual, it was very quiet... too quiet I mean the outside of the castle has never been too noisy in the past but you usually hear couple of birds tweeting or some of the toads running around screaming any popular song and uploading it on social media, but that was it Mario couldn't hear a single thing. Nevertheless he ignored it and they went inside the castle. As they got inside Mario had several questions, where is everybody?, where was Peach?, and what happened to Luigi, Yoshi and Wario? as they all walked through the door at the same time, they couldn't have just run off so quickly, and above all else where was the cake?. Mario can only think that Bowser has got something to do with it so he decides to look around the castle to see if he can find anything, but there was one thing that really puzzled him, why is there an anthropomorphic lemur in the mushroom kingdom."
That's the last time I ever decide to write some form of a story let alone a paragraph of it. your free to clean it up and continue it if you like
Anyway this is an updated picture of this pic below
This was scrapped because I didn't find them showing enough expressions through their face and poses especially Mario who you would think Tangle would the hard one to draw BUT NO IT'S A HIM Mario who has no proportions on him just a bunch of roundness and fat
Now as for Tangle the running pose I gave her looked good sideways but from the front it didn't look right plus it was a bit generic not completely like her (NOT that I know much about her cuz I don't read the comics or any form of media and I never will, only seen snippets on the internet).