Me and my friend had created a new guild on Hollyberry server and we're looking for members! We just need you to be a bit active in the guild and that's ok if you have some breaks, don't worry! 30 days is just a point when we'll kick someone out, but that's a whole month
Hands clenched into fists — Anger, restraint, or holding back something violent or vulnerable.
Fingers tapping rhythmically — Impatience, nerves, or a personal ritual.
Picking at a scab/cut/nail — Anxious, distracted, or self-soothing.
Hands behind back — Formal, guarded, or trying to appear in control.
Palms up / open hands — Surrender, honesty, or pleading.
Hands gripping something tightly — Trying to stay grounded or keep it together.
Rubbing temples — Overwhelmed, stressed, or trying to think clearly.
Knuckles white from pressure — Rage, fear, or intense focus.
Cracking knuckles — Habitual tension, or a signal that something’s about to go down.
Thumbs hooked into pockets/belt loops — Relaxed, cocky, or casual authority.
Touching their mouth while thinking — Deep in thought, holding something back.
Hands fluttering mid-gesture — Nervous energy, overexplaining, or searching for words.
Hands in fists in pockets — Rage or fear hidden under fake chill.
Wrists limp at their sides — Defeated, exhausted, or too numb to react.
Shaking out their fingers — Releasing adrenaline, fear, or something they don’t want to carry anymore.
I really love how it looks, they look so good together AAAAA
But besides that, I'm now available on bluesky -> @ silverstar-8.bsky.social
So if someone wants to see more of my art, especially nsfw, I will be here! :3
Also! 12th chapter of my fic is here! So when ao3 will come back to normal, here's the link for everyone interested ^^
But watch out! This chapter is intense!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/53641336/chapters/149447134
Wanted to post on Twitter, but I'm fucking irritated. Shadowban disappeared in the morning and now it came back.
Not to mention to mention the post I published with nudity warning is only in media but not on my main page on profile? Wtf is this shit?
Tbh, I really hope blue sky will become more and more popular, because the only reason people use Twitter is because there's many people. So I really hope they'll start leaving this site.
I can also post stuff here, but not nsfw things, which I like to draw. I really consider more and more to just post sfw content and nsfw one would be on patreon or something.
Will have to think more about this but if anyone who reads it have some proposition, I'll be happy to read them and consider. I'm just tired with this shit, ya know?
Silly got some redesign! It's not all of course (their bug form is left and I want to draw expressions), but these are their main designs from past and present!
As writers, we all know that feeling when we read a sentence so beautifully crafted that it takes our breath away. We pause, reread it, and marvel at how the author managed to string those words together in such a captivating way. Well, today I'm going to unpack a few secrets to creating that same magic in your own writing. These same tips I use in my writing.
But before I begin, please remember that writing is an art form, and like any art, it's subjective. What sounds beautiful to one person might not resonate with another. The tips I'm about to share are meant to be tools in your writer's toolkit, not rigid rules. Feel free to experiment, play around, and find what works best for your unique voice and style.
Power of Rhythm 🎵
One of the most overlooked aspects of beautiful prose is rhythm. Just like music, writing has a flow and cadence that can make it pleasing to the ear (or mind's ear, in this case). Here are some ways to incorporate rhythm into your writing:
a) Vary your sentence length: Mix short, punchy sentences with longer, flowing ones. This creates a natural ebb and flow that keeps your reader engaged.
Example:
"The sun set. Darkness crept in, wrapping the world in its velvet embrace. Stars winked to life, one by one, until the sky was a glittering tapestry of light."
b) Use repetition strategically: Repeating words or phrases can create a hypnotic effect and emphasize important points.
Example:
"She walked through the forest, through the shadows, through the whispers of ancient trees. Through it all, she walked with purpose."
c) Pay attention to the stressed syllables: In English, we naturally stress certain syllables in words. Try to end important sentences with stressed syllables for a stronger impact.
Example:
"Her heart raced as she approached the door." (Stronger ending)
vs.
"She approached the door as her heart raced." (Weaker ending)
Paint with Words 🎨
Beautiful prose often creates vivid imagery in the reader's mind. Here are some techniques to help you paint with words:
a) Use specific, concrete details: Instead of general descriptions, zoom in on particular details that bring a scene to life.
Example:
Instead of: "The room was messy."
Try: "Crumpled papers overflowed from the waste bin, books lay spine-up on every surface, and a half-eaten sandwich peeked out from under a stack of wrinkled clothes."
b) Appeal to all five senses: Don't just describe what things look like. Include smells, sounds, textures, and tastes to create a fully immersive experience.
Example:
"The market bustled with life. Colorful fruits glistened in the morning sun, their sweet aroma mingling with the earthy scent of fresh herbs. Vendors called out their wares in sing-song voices, while customers haggled in animated tones. Sarah's fingers brushed against the rough burlap sacks of grain as she passed, and she could almost taste the tang of ripe oranges on her tongue."
c) Use unexpected comparisons: Fresh similes and metaphors can breathe new life into descriptions.
Example:
Instead of: "The old man was very thin."
Try: "The old man was a whisper of his former self, as if life had slowly erased him, leaving behind only the faintest outline."
Choose Your Words Wisely 📚
Every word in your prose should earn its place. Here are some tips for selecting the right words:
a) Embrace strong verbs: Replace weak verb + adverb combinations with single, powerful verbs.
Example:
Instead of: "She walked quickly to the store."
Try: "She hurried to the store." or "She dashed to the store."
b) Be specific: Use precise nouns instead of general ones.
Example:
Instead of: "She picked up the flower."
Try: "She plucked the daisy."
c) Avoid clichés: Clichés can make your writing feel stale. Try to find fresh ways to express common ideas.
Example:
Instead of: "It was raining cats and dogs."
Try: "The rain fell in sheets, transforming the streets into rushing rivers."
Play with Sound 🎶
The sound of words can contribute greatly to the beauty of your prose. Here are some techniques to make your writing more musical:
a) Alliteration: Repeating initial consonant sounds can create a pleasing effect.
Example: "She sells seashells by the seashore."
b) Assonance: Repeating vowel sounds can add a subtle musicality to your prose.
Example: "The light of the bright sky might ignite a fight."
c) Onomatopoeia: Using words that sound like what they describe can make your writing more immersive.
Example: "The bees buzzed and hummed as they flitted from flower to flower."
Art of Sentence Structure 🏗️
How you structure your sentences can greatly affect the flow and impact of your prose. Here are some tips:
a) Use parallel structure: When listing items or actions, keep the grammatical structure consistent.
Example:
"She came, she saw, she conquered."
b) Try periodic sentences: Build suspense by putting the main clause at the end of the sentence.
Example:
"Through storm and strife, across oceans and continents, despite all odds and obstacles, they persevered."
c) Experiment with sentence fragments: While not grammatically correct, sentence fragments can be powerful when used intentionally for emphasis or style.
Example:
"She stood at the edge of the cliff. Heart racing. Palms sweating. Ready to jump."
Power of White Space ⬜
Sometimes, what you don't say is just as important as what you do. Use paragraph breaks and short sentences to create pauses and emphasize important moments.
Example:
"He opened the letter with trembling hands.
Inside, a single word.
'Yes.'"
Read Your Work Aloud 🗣️
One of the best ways to polish your prose is to read it aloud. This helps you catch awkward phrasing, repetitive words, and rhythm issues that you might miss when reading silently.
Edit Ruthlessly ✂️
Beautiful prose often comes from rigorous editing. Don't be afraid to cut words, sentences, or even entire paragraphs if they don't serve the overall beauty and effectiveness of your writing.
Study the Masters 📖
Please! Read widely and pay attention to how your favorite authors craft their prose. Analyze sentences you find particularly beautiful and try to understand what makes them work.
Practice, Practice, Practice 💪
Like any skill, writing beautiful prose takes practice. Set aside time to experiment with different techniques and styles. Try writing exercises focused on specific aspects of prose, like describing a scene using only sound words, or rewriting a simple sentence in ten different ways.
Remember, that developing your prose style is a journey, not a destination. It's okay if your first draft isn't perfect – that's what editing is for! The most important thing is to keep writing, keep experimenting, and keep finding joy in the process.
Here are a few more unique tips to help you on your prose-perfecting journey:
Create a Word Bank 🏦
Keep a notebook or digital file where you collect beautiful words, phrases, or sentences you come across in your reading. This can be a great resource when you're looking for inspiration or the perfect word to complete a sentence.
Use the "Rule of Three" 3️⃣
There's something inherently satisfying about groups of three. Use this to your advantage in your writing, whether it's in listing items, repeating phrases, or structuring your paragraphs.
Example:
"The old house groaned, creaked, and whispered its secrets to the night."
Power of Silence 🤫
Sometimes, the most powerful prose comes from what's left unsaid. Use implication and subtext to add depth to your writing.
Example:
Instead of: "She was heartbroken when he left."
Try: "She stared at his empty chair across the breakfast table, the untouched coffee growing cold."
Play with Perspective 👁️
Experiment with different points of view to find the most impactful way to tell your story. Sometimes, an unexpected perspective can make your prose truly memorable.
Example:
Instead of describing a bustling city from a human perspective, try describing it from the point of view of a bird soaring overhead, or a coin passed from hand to hand.
Use Punctuation Creatively 🖋️
While it's important to use punctuation correctly, don't be afraid to bend the rules a little for stylistic effect. Em dashes, ellipses, and even unconventional use of periods can add rhythm and emphasis to your prose.
Example:
"She hesitated—heart pounding, palms sweating—then knocked on the door."
Create Contrast 🌓
Juxtapose different elements in your writing to create interest and emphasis. This can be in terms of tone, pacing, or even the literal elements you're describing.
Example:
"The delicate butterfly alighted on the rusted barrel of the abandoned tank."
Use Synesthesia 🌈
Synesthesia is a condition where one sensory experience triggers another. While not everyone experiences this, using synesthetic descriptions in your writing can create vivid and unique imagery.
Example:
"The violin's melody tasted like honey on her tongue."
Experiment with Sentence Diagrams 📊
Remember those sentence diagrams from school? Try diagramming some of your favorite sentences from literature. This can give you insight into how complex sentences are structured and help you craft your own.
Create a Sensory Tour 🚶♀️
When describing a setting, try taking your reader on a sensory tour. Move from one sense to another, creating a full, immersive experience.
Example:
"The old bookstore welcomed her with the musty scent of aging paper. Dust motes danced in the shafts of sunlight piercing the high windows. Her fingers trailed over the cracked leather spines as she moved deeper into the stacks, the floorboards creaking a greeting beneath her feet. In the distance, she could hear the soft ticking of an ancient clock and taste the faint bitterness of old coffee in the air."
Use Active Voice (Most of the Time) 🏃♂️
While passive voice has its place, active voice generally creates more dynamic and engaging prose. Compare these two sentences:
Passive: "The ball was thrown by the boy."
Active: "The boy threw the ball."
Magic of Ordinary Moments ✨
Sometimes, the most beautiful prose comes from describing everyday occurrences in a new light. Challenge yourself to find beauty and meaning in the mundane.
Example:
"The kettle's whistle pierced the quiet morning, a clarion call heralding the day's first cup of possibility."
Play with Time ⏳
Experiment with how you present the passage of time in your prose. You can stretch a moment out over several paragraphs or compress years into a single sentence.
Example:
"In that heartbeat between his question and her answer, universes were born and died, civilizations rose and fell, and their entire future hung in the balance."
Use Anaphora for Emphasis 🔁
Anaphora is the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses or sentences. It can create a powerful rhythm and emphasize key points.
Example:
"She was the sunrise after the longest night. She was the first bloom of spring after a harsh winter. She was the cool breeze on a sweltering summer day. She was hope personified, walking among us."
Create Word Pictures 🖼️
Try to create images that linger in the reader's mind long after they've finished reading. These don't have to be elaborate – sometimes a simple, unexpected combination of words can be incredibly powerful.
Example:
"Her laughter was a flock of birds taking flight."
Use Rhetorical Devices 🎭
Familiarize yourself with rhetorical devices like chiasmus, antithesis, and oxymoron. These can add depth and interest to your prose.
Example of chiasmus:
"Ask not what your country can do for you – ask what you can do for your country." - John F. Kennedy
Even the most accomplished authors continue to hone their craft with each new piece they write. Don't be discouraged if your first attempts don't sound exactly like you imagined – keep practicing, keep experimenting, and most importantly, keep writing.
Your unique voice and perspective are what will ultimately make your prose beautiful. These techniques are simply tools to help you express that voice more effectively. Use them, adapt them, or discard them as you see fit. The most important thing is to write in a way that feels authentic to you and brings you joy.
Happy writing, everyone! 🖋️💖📚 - Rin T
Hey fellow writers! I'm super excited to share that I've just launched a Tumblr community. I'm inviting all of you to join my community. All you have to do is fill out this Google form, and I'll personally send you an invitation to join the Write Right Society on Tumblr! Can't wait to see your posts!
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At Write Right Society, we are dedicated to nurturing the creative spirit and honing the skills of writers a
Calling all aspiring storytellers with hearts full of whimsy! Get ready to sprinkle a touch of enchantment into your scenes with my Scene Wo
Have you ever read a story where it felt like the protagonist was being personally guided by the author?
When a character has to always rely on their love interest, friends, allies, and even enemies in order to get from point A to point B
When the only reason a character is even on their journey is because they're the "Chosen One" or God themselves is literally dragging this random along.
Well, you probably hated this character because they lacked Agency.
Agency is defined as when a person makes a specific action, hoping to garner a certain result.
Agency is goal, motive, and plan. A person wants(motive) something(goal) so they try to get it(action).
Based on this definition, it's incredibly hard to write a compelling protagonist and story without agency.
Agency is what makes an interesting plot as plot is based on "what is a character willing to do in order to get their goal".
If your protagonist never tries to do anything and whenever they do try to do something, it never impacts the surrounding world either negatively or positively, you've managed to written a story that has squandered all it's potential.
You might be saying "What about characters who are trapped in these circumstances, trapped in general, or Fate?"
Well let me tell you, I don't know where you got the assumption that all abused/kidnapped individuals just stopped thinking and desiring when the abuse happened but it's wrong!
Maybe your abused character is trying to leave their circumstances so they make some decisions to seperate themselves.
Maybe your abused character is trying to help their abuser so they make decisions that help their abuser.
Maybe they're planning something!
Also, for the Fate thing. You could have your characters actively fighting Fate? Nevermind if they succed or fail!
You could have the existence of Fate be a plot twist?
There is just no proper excuse to not write a character that doesn't make decisions to get what they want!
If you didn't want to write a Point Of View character that interacts with the world you could've written an omniscient character who is travelling around. Or a narrator who is reading the journals of the actual main character(like in Book Thief).
If you didn't want to make this character have an impact on the world, you could have chosen a different character to be the protagonist!
I had lots of fun writing this one. But don't expect it to be only about sexy time, because I like to describe other things too, as well as making a reaaaaally long entrance XD
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the
Organization for Transformative Works
6TH CHAPTER IS HERE, GUYS!
Few weeks ago I was busy, then I became sick. And to be honest, this chapter would be published faster, but somehow it got almost 12k words?! WHAT?! It's like 3 chapters in one or something to be honest XD
No, I don't know how I did it, but so far this is the longest chapter XD
This time I've tried something different. You can expect a bit of, hehe, musical~
Hope you have fun reading!
Silver~
PS: I've found a ship name for my oc x Lucifer! They'll be called silverapple together uwu
Maybe in the future I'll change something for Silver, but right now I think it looks pretty good!
It's more of the mix of my own style with Hazbin's. I tried to do only Hazbin's style with Luci, but it didn't work for me.
But it's so great that I can actually draw him and my self-insert! I love them so much AAAAA
If someone's curious: Silver is from the fic "Paragon of Free Will" on ao3. It's a story about the winner, who decided to leave Heaven and go to Hell by their choice.
The fic is during development, so it'll take a long time to finish or maybe I won't ever finish it! We'll see in the future how much energy and passion I'll have for it!
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