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okay so there are three types of writers when it comes to dialogue tags.
the first type writes this:
"i can't believe you did that," she exclaimed breathlessly, her voice trembling with barely concealed emotion.
the second type writes this:
"i can't believe you did that," she said. "i just — i can't." "i know," he said. "do you?" she said. "yeah," he said.
and the third type has been told "said is invisible" so many times they've started doing this:
"i can't believe you did that," she whispered-yelled, her eyes flashing.
all three of these are wrong. (sorry.)
this is what's actually happening in each case.
1. the purple tagger
"you BETRAYED me," he snarled furiously.
the problem isn't the snarl. the problem is furiously. if he's snarling, we know he's not delighted. the adverb is doing work the verb already did, which means you don't trust your own writing. and your reader can feel that.
also: people cannot hiss words that don't have an s in them. "i love you," she hissed. no she didn't. she CAN'T have.
fix: one strong verb OR one adverb. never both. and only when said genuinely doesn't cut it.
2. the said-only purist
said IS invisible. that's true. but a page of nothing but "said" in a tense scene creates this weird flat affect where everything feels equally weighted. the invisibility is the problem, not the solution.
"get out," she said.
versus
"get out." she didn't look up from the counter.
the second one has no attribution at all. we know who's talking. and now we know she's not even giving him the dignity of eye contact. that's CHARACTER. that's free.
action beats do more work than tags. use them.
3. the said-is-dead convert
this one genuinely pains me because it usually comes from good advice received badly. someone told you to vary your tags, and now your characters are interjecting, conceding, deflecting, and sighing their dialogue like a victorian novel.
"we need to leave," he urged. "i'm not ready," she hedged.
hedged. HEDGED. what is she, a financial advisor.
the rule isn't "never use said." the rule is: your tag should disappear, and the line itself should carry the weight. if you need urged to tell me he's urgent, the line isn't doing its job.
the actual framework (one sentence)
ask yourself: does this tag add information the line doesn't already have, or am I patching a weak line with a strong verb?
if it's patching, rewrite the line.
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things i wish someone told me before i started writing (and also things i ignored anyway)
okay. writers of tumblr. i’ve compiled a list of things i desperately wish someone had sat me down and said before i started writing, not that i would’ve listened, because i was 14 and powered entirely by hubris, iced coffee, and my wattpad era.
anyway. here we go:
1. stop rewriting chapter one.
i know you think it’ll fix everything. it won’t. it’s a hydra. you cut one head off, two Google Docs appear.
2. your first draft is not a treaty with god.
it can be messy. it can be unhinged. it can have 47 placeholders named “idk something happens.” it’s fine.
3. perfectionism is just fear wearing a blazer.
write badly on purpose. humiliate your draft. it builds character (yours).
4. word count culture is a scam.
you are allowed to write 200 words and call it a day. you are allowed to write 5k and then disappear into the void for three business weeks.
5. google docs autosave WILL betray you.
download backups. then back up your backups. then sacrifice a pen to the writing gods idk.
6. description is not pretty synonyms.
it’s specificity. the torn movie ticket in their pocket. the buzzing light in the hallway. the chipped nail polish on their thumb. write the thing not the aesthetics around the thing.
7. dialogue isn’t two Shakespeare ghosts monologuing at each other.
interruptions. trailing off. people lying. people avoiding the truth. people saying “whatever man.” let it get messy.
8. you don’t need a whole map before you start.
sometimes you just need one character with one problem and the stupidest idea imaginable.
9. reading your old writing will make you cringe but also cry a little because wow you cared so much.
keep that version of you alive.
10. don’t wait to ‘be good.’
you get good by writing the stuff you think is embarrassing.
11. also: nine out of ten times, your “bad” idea is actually the one that goes feral and grows teeth and becomes your WIP.
12. hydrate.
no further explanation.
ok that’s it because if i keep going i’ll start confessing things about the time i wrote a whole novel in 2017 that will never see daylight again.
reply if u relate or if u too have 87 abandoned document fragments in your google drive.
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i didn’t realise i was doing this wrong for way too long, mostly because it’s one of those things nobody explicitly tells you is a problem.
okay. so. this is going to feel a little bit like a call-out, but in a “i have done this and will probably do it again” way, not a “you specifically are the problem” way.
because.....:
most writers don’t under-describe.
they don’t.
they over-describe, just… not the parts that actually matter.
and that’s where everything starts to feel off in a way that’s hard to explain but very easy to feel.
like you read a paragraph and go:
“this is technically fine. why am i bored.”
let me show you the pattern.
you will spend:
5 lines describing the curtains
3 lines describing the exact shade of the wallpaper
2 lines describing the way light hits the floorboards
and then when your character is:
about to lie
about to confess something
about to make a decision that will literally alter the trajectory of the story
you give it:
“she hesitated.”
and then you MOVE ON??
be serious for a second.
this is what i mean when i say you’re over-describing the wrong things.
it’s not that description is bad. i love description. i want to eat description. i want to live inside it.
but description has a job.
and its job is not “make the scene look pretty.”
its job is:
direct the reader’s attention to what matters emotionally.
so if you are describing something in detail, i need you to ask:
“why this. why right now.”
because if the answer is:
“i pictured it really clearly in my head”
i regret to inform you that your reader does not care. gently. respectfully. they do not care.
they care about:
what your character wants
what is getting in the way
what this moment means
everything else is background noise unless you make it matter.
here’s where it gets a little uncomfortable:
you are probably avoiding describing the things that feel harder to articulate.
like:
the exact shape of someone’s hesitation
the difference between anger and hurt in a single line of dialogue
the way attraction feels when it’s inconvenient
the moment a character realizes something they don’t want to know
that’s the stuff you skim past.
because it’s messy. and specific. and requires you to make choices.
so instead, you describe the room.
because the room is safe.
the room will not expose you.
the room will not force you to decide what your character is actually feeling.
and i get it. i really do.
but also: that’s why your scenes feel flat.
not because nothing is happening.
but because the important thing is happening off-screen.
let’s fix it. practically. no vague advice. i don’t do vague advice.
next time you’re writing a scene, do this:
pick one moment where something shifts.
not physically. emotionally.
a realization. a decision. a change in power. a crack in composure.
and then instead of writing:
“she hesitated”
you stay there.
you stretch it.
you get uncomfortably specific.
what kind of hesitation?
is it:
the kind where she already knows the answer and is stalling
the kind where she’s hoping someone interrupts
the kind where saying it out loud will make it real
what does it feel like in her body?
what does she notice in the room because she’s hesitating?
(see how now the description has a job. it’s not random anymore. yay)
this is the shift:
description should orbit emotion.
not replace it.
not distract from it.
not hide it.
orbit it.
another thing. and i’m going to say this very gently because i know how attached we get to our sentences:
if you can cut a description and nothing changes about how the reader understands the scene?
it was never doing anything.
it was just sitting there. looking pretty. contributing nothing to the emotional experience.
and we do not keep freeloaders in this house.
this doesn’t mean your writing has to be minimal.
it means your writing has to be intentional.
you can describe everything if you want.
but then everything you describe needs to be pulling weight.
it needs to be revealing character, or building tension, or reinforcing mood in a way that actually connects to what’s happening internally.
otherwise it’s just… decorative.
and decoration is not story.
so next time you feel like your scene is “missing something”
before you add more description
ask yourself:
am i avoiding the part that actually matters?
and then go write that part.
even if it’s harder.
especially if it’s harder.
anyway. that’s your gentle (not gentle) reminder for today.
go make your characters feel things on the page instead of hiding behind the wallpaper.
i’m watching you.
(in a supportive way. mostly.)
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first of all: 💀
why does every enemies-to-lovers dynamic either hit like a literary gut punch… or feel like two cardboard cutouts aggressively flirting?
there is no in between. i don’t make the rules.
and if you’re here, i’m guessing you’ve tasted both. the elite. the devastating. the oh my god i need to lie down after this confession scene kind…
and also the ones where you’re like “why do you hate each other again? because he smirked?? be serious.”
yeah. we’re fixing that today.
⚔️ if you’re writing enemies-to-lovers, we need to talk.
because most people aren’t writing enemies.
they’re writing:
mild annoyances
workplace rivals with ✨tension✨
people who had one (1) misunderstanding in chapter two and never emotionally recovered
and listen. that’s fine. that’s a trope. it’s cute.
but it’s not enemies-to-lovers.
🩸 step one: define your enemy
an enemy is not someone who:
is kinda rude
disagrees with your protagonist
has a “bad attitude” (???)
an enemy is someone who cannot coexist with your protagonist without cost.
read that again. PLEASE.
their goals? incompatible.
their values? clashing at a moral level.
their existence? actively making the other’s life worse.
what i'm talking about:
opposing sides of a war
hunter vs hunted
“if i let you live, everything i believe in collapses” energy
if they can just… avoid each other and be fine?
that’s not enemies. that’s tension with good lighting.
🗡️ step two: make the hatred make sense
this is where people fumble it CONSTANTLY.
they jump straight to:
banter → sexual tension → accidental hand touch → oh no i’m in love
NO. come back. sit down.
before attraction, there needs to be justified hostility.
and not surface-level “you insulted me once.”
i’m talking about (and yes please quote 'rin t' on this!):
betrayal
loss
ideological opposition
deeply ingrained bias they don’t even realize they have
the kind of thing where, if someone asked your character:
“why do you hate them?”
they wouldn’t hesitate. they’d have a list
the twist:
👉 both sides need to be right. (or at least feel right)
if one is clearly wrong, you don’t have enemies-to-lovers.
you have “problematic person gets redeemed because they’re hot.”
and we are not doing that today.
🔥 step three: attraction should feel like a problem
this is where it gets fun. :)
when they start catching feelings, it should not be:
“oh this is inconvenient but kind of exciting :)”
it should be:
“this is catastrophic. this compromises everything.”
love = risk.
because now:
their judgment is compromised
their loyalties are tested
their identity starts to crack
they should be actively resisting it.
denying it. sabotaging it. making worse choices because of it.
if falling in love doesn’t cost them something?
you skipped the entire point of the trope.
🕯️ step four: force proximity (but PLEASEEE make it hurt)
you can’t resolve enemies-to-lovers from opposite sides of the map.
they need to be stuck together.
BUT-important distinction-
not in a cute “one bed at the inn” way (yet. we’ll get there. don’t worry.)
in a:
forced alliance
mutual threat
political arrangement
survival situation
where they have to rely on each other…
while still fundamentally not trusting each other.
this creates:
tension
vulnerability leaks
moments where they see each other as human (ugh. disgusting. hate that.)
and every time that happens?
it should complicate things further.
💔 step five: the shift is not soft. it’s violent.
i need you to understand this.
the transition from enemies → lovers should feel like something breaking.
because it is.
their worldview? breaking.
their assumptions? breaking.
their sense of self? yeah. that too.
there should be a moment where:
they realize they were wrong about the other person
and it doesn’t feel good.
it feels like:
guilt
confusion
grief for the version of reality they believed in
this is what makes the payoff hit.
not the kiss.
the reckoning.
🗝️ step six: they don’t “fix” each other
if i see one more enemies-to-lovers arc where:
“he became a better person because she loved him 🥺”
i will simply pass away.
they don’t fix each other.
they force each other to confront things they were avoiding.
that’s different.
love isn’t the solution.
it’s the pressure that reveals the cracks.
🖤 final thought (and a gentle threat):
if your enemies-to-lovers could be replaced with:
friends-to-lovers + mild inconvenience
and nothing changes?
you didn’t go far enough.
push them harder.
make it uglier. riskier. a little bit devastating.
so, question to you my chaotic writers... what’s the real reason your characters hate each other?
not the surface answer.
the one they’d never admit out loud.
i’m nosy. tell me everything. 👀 I LOVE HEARING your thoughts (i reply because yes, i am a real person!)
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if you're writing dark academia feel free to check out this packet filled with all the juicy prompts to spark ideas!
A gothic prompt pack for writers who love cursed universities, secret societies, and scholarly rot.✎ Write the Darkness ✎A 75-prompt horror
need help with your opening pages?! i have a free ebook for you all (aesthetic, cohesive and actually informative! it's free! but tips are highly appreciated!)
✦ A free (and actually helpful) guide to leveling up your first 10 pages ✦If you're unsure whether your opening is ✨doing enough✨ to hook re
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i didn’t realise i was doing this wrong for way too long, mostly because it’s one of those things nobody explicitly tells you is a problem.
A VERY Straightforward Book Review of Phantasma by Kaylie Smith
HEYYY writer friends! ✨ i have NOT been active for a very very long time (about 3-4 months) i am SOOO sorry about that. i've been trying to decide what to do with my blog, and i really want to work on REBRANDING it. but, i decided to crawl back into tumblr and bless you all with a short book review of this "romantasy."
alright, so... I just emerged from the depths of Phantasma by Kaylie Smith, and to be completely honest? My brain is a literal puddle of conflicting emotions. I wanted to LOVE this. I wanted to be consumed by it. I wanted to be so haunted that I’d have to leave the lights on while I worked on my own manuscript. But instead, I’m sitting here at 2 AM, three coffees deep, feeling… well, a little bit GUTTED.
We’re giving this one a solid 3 stars. It wasn’t a disaster, but it definitely didn’t set my soul on fire the way I hoped a Southern Gothic YA fantasy would. 🕯️💀
Let’s break down the "why" behind the rating, because there are some MASSIVE lessons here for us as writers. If you’re working on a fantasy romance or a high-stakes "game" plot, pay attention!
The Atmosphere (Or, Where is the Humidity??)
When I hear "Southern Gothic," I expect to feel the dampness in the air. I want to smell the decay, feel the oppressive heat, and sense the weight of a thousand family secrets pressing down on my chest. I want that GRIT. for "Mirror Girls" by Kelly McWilliams. let me tell you. it hit EVERY SINGLE POINT AND ELEMENT a southern gothic novel needs. LOVEDDDD the atmosphere. highly recommend it.
But with Phantasma, the vibe felt… thin? It lacked that heavy, atmospheric "chokehold" that makes the Southern Gothic subgenre so iconic. As writers, we have to remember that setting is not ONLY a backdrop, it's a CHARACTER. Especially in horror-adjacent fantasy!
• The Lesson: If you tell your readers a story is "Gothic," you have to deliver on the sensory overload. Don't just tell us the house is old; make us hear the wood screaming under the weight of the ghosts. Make us feel the dust in our lungs. Phantasma felt a bit too "clean" for a world that was supposed to be terrifyingly haunted.
The Romance: Lust vs. Connection 🥀
Okay, let’s talk about Ophelia and Blackwell. Sigh.
I wanted to ship them. I really did. But, the chemistry felt… artificial. It felt like "insta-lust" disguised as "fated soulmates," and it just didn't hit the mark for me.
• The Problem: Their connection felt purely physical. Every time they were on page together, it was all about the tension of touching, but I didn't feel the tension of their souls colliding.
• The Fix for Your WIP: When you’re writing a romance, especially a dark one, you NEED emotional stakes. Why do they NEED each other? Not just "why do they want to kiss?" but "how does this person fill a hole in the other's identity?" If the romance is only built on "he’s dark and mysterious" and "she’s the only one who seessss him," it starts to feel like a trope-by-numbers exercise. We want the MESS. We want the emotional devastation!
In Phantasma, I felt like Blackwell was there because the plot demanded a Love Interest™, not because he and Ophelia actually had a foundation of shared vulnerability. It felt performative rather than earned. (and the smut scenes gave me a headache and actually made me want to skip.)
The "Saving Grace": The Game Levels 🎮✨
Now, it wasn't all gloom and doom! The actual Phantasma game? That was the highlight. The different levels of the game were inventive, creepy, and honestly the only thing that kept me turning the pages past midnight.
• Why it Worked: This is a masterclass in "High Concept" execution. The game provided a clear structure, escalating stakes, and a sense of momentum. Each level felt like a new challenge for Ophelia’s character development (even if the development itself felt a bit shaky at times).
• The Takeaway: If your plot is dragging, look at your "trials." Are the obstacles your characters face actually INTERESTING? Are they visually distinct? The levels in Phantasma were vibrant and weird, and that’s exactly what saved the book from being a DNF (Did Not Finish) for me.
The Plot Twist (Or, The Case of the Missing Surprise) 🔍
okay, we need to talk about the "predictable twist."
I knew the "big reveal" from the very beginning. Like, page fifty. And there is nothing—and I mean NOTHING—more frustrating than waiting 300 pages for a character to realize something the reader already knows.
• The Tension Killer: When the reader is miles ahead of the protagonist, the protagonist starts to look… well, a bit dim. It kills the tension. You want your reader to be guessing, or at the very least, you want the reveal to recontextualize EVERYTHING they’ve read so far.
• VERY VERY RIN-ESQUE Advice: If you’re going to have a "predictable" twist, you have to make the journey to that twist so emotionally taxing that the reader doesn't care they guessed it. Or, better yet, use a "Double-Blind" twist. Give them the obvious one early, so they let their guard down, and then hit them with the REAL one at the 90% mark.
Phantasma played it a bit too safe here. It followed the YA fantasy blueprint a little too closely, and because of that, the "shock" moments landed with a bit of a thud.
Final Thoughts for the Writing Soul
So, why a 3 star? Because it was "fine." It was a fun, quick read with some cool imagery, but it lacked the SOUL and the UNIQUE VOICE that makes a book stay with you for years.
As writers, we should aim to be the book that makes someone stay up until 4 AM because they CANNOT look away. (Mexican Gothic by Silvia Moreno Garcia, DID that for me. AND made me a bit creeped out) We want to write the romance that makes people ache, and the twists that make people throw the book across the room (in a good way!).
Don't be afraid to be "too much."
• Be TOO atmospheric.
• Be TOO emotional.
• Be TOO weird.
Don't settle for the "artificial" feel. Dig deep into your characters' shadows and find the stuff that actually hurts to write. That’s where the magic is.
I’m going to go drink my fourth coffee and try to fix my own "predictable" subplot. Wish me luck! ☕✨
(let me know if you guys wanna see my wips i'm working on, i missed you all!!!)
-rin ✨
A gothic prompt pack for writers who love cursed universities, secret societies, and scholarly rot.✎ Write the Darkness ✎A 75-prompt horror
✦ A free (and actually helpful) guide to leveling up your first 10 pages ✦If you're unsure whether your opening is ✨doing enough✨ to hook re
A VERY Straightforward Book Review of Phantasma by Kaylie Smith
HEYYY writer friends! ✨ i have NOT been active for a very very long time (about 3-4 months) i am SOOO sorry about that. i've been trying to decide what to do with my blog, and i really want to work on REBRANDING it. but, i decided to crawl back into tumblr and bless you all with a short book review of this "romantasy."
alright, so... I just emerged from the depths of Phantasma by Kaylie Smith, and to be completely honest? My brain is a literal puddle of conflicting emotions. I wanted to LOVE this. I wanted to be consumed by it. I wanted to be so haunted that I’d have to leave the lights on while I worked on my own manuscript. But instead, I’m sitting here at 2 AM, three coffees deep, feeling… well, a little bit GUTTED.
We’re giving this one a solid 3 stars. It wasn’t a disaster, but it definitely didn’t set my soul on fire the way I hoped a Southern Gothic YA fantasy would. 🕯️💀
Let’s break down the "why" behind the rating, because there are some MASSIVE lessons here for us as writers. If you’re working on a fantasy romance or a high-stakes "game" plot, pay attention!
The Atmosphere (Or, Where is the Humidity??)
When I hear "Southern Gothic," I expect to feel the dampness in the air. I want to smell the decay, feel the oppressive heat, and sense the weight of a thousand family secrets pressing down on my chest. I want that GRIT. for "Mirror Girls" by Kelly McWilliams. let me tell you. it hit EVERY SINGLE POINT AND ELEMENT a southern gothic novel needs. LOVEDDDD the atmosphere. highly recommend it.
But with Phantasma, the vibe felt… thin? It lacked that heavy, atmospheric "chokehold" that makes the Southern Gothic subgenre so iconic. As writers, we have to remember that setting is not ONLY a backdrop, it's a CHARACTER. Especially in horror-adjacent fantasy!
• The Lesson: If you tell your readers a story is "Gothic," you have to deliver on the sensory overload. Don't just tell us the house is old; make us hear the wood screaming under the weight of the ghosts. Make us feel the dust in our lungs. Phantasma felt a bit too "clean" for a world that was supposed to be terrifyingly haunted.
The Romance: Lust vs. Connection 🥀
Okay, let’s talk about Ophelia and Blackwell. Sigh.
I wanted to ship them. I really did. But, the chemistry felt… artificial. It felt like "insta-lust" disguised as "fated soulmates," and it just didn't hit the mark for me.
• The Problem: Their connection felt purely physical. Every time they were on page together, it was all about the tension of touching, but I didn't feel the tension of their souls colliding.
• The Fix for Your WIP: When you’re writing a romance, especially a dark one, you NEED emotional stakes. Why do they NEED each other? Not just "why do they want to kiss?" but "how does this person fill a hole in the other's identity?" If the romance is only built on "he’s dark and mysterious" and "she’s the only one who seessss him," it starts to feel like a trope-by-numbers exercise. We want the MESS. We want the emotional devastation!
In Phantasma, I felt like Blackwell was there because the plot demanded a Love Interest™, not because he and Ophelia actually had a foundation of shared vulnerability. It felt performative rather than earned. (and the smut scenes gave me a headache and actually made me want to skip.)
The "Saving Grace": The Game Levels 🎮✨
Now, it wasn't all gloom and doom! The actual Phantasma game? That was the highlight. The different levels of the game were inventive, creepy, and honestly the only thing that kept me turning the pages past midnight.
• Why it Worked: This is a masterclass in "High Concept" execution. The game provided a clear structure, escalating stakes, and a sense of momentum. Each level felt like a new challenge for Ophelia’s character development (even if the development itself felt a bit shaky at times).
• The Takeaway: If your plot is dragging, look at your "trials." Are the obstacles your characters face actually INTERESTING? Are they visually distinct? The levels in Phantasma were vibrant and weird, and that’s exactly what saved the book from being a DNF (Did Not Finish) for me.
The Plot Twist (Or, The Case of the Missing Surprise) 🔍
okay, we need to talk about the "predictable twist."
I knew the "big reveal" from the very beginning. Like, page fifty. And there is nothing—and I mean NOTHING—more frustrating than waiting 300 pages for a character to realize something the reader already knows.
• The Tension Killer: When the reader is miles ahead of the protagonist, the protagonist starts to look… well, a bit dim. It kills the tension. You want your reader to be guessing, or at the very least, you want the reveal to recontextualize EVERYTHING they’ve read so far.
• VERY VERY RIN-ESQUE Advice: If you’re going to have a "predictable" twist, you have to make the journey to that twist so emotionally taxing that the reader doesn't care they guessed it. Or, better yet, use a "Double-Blind" twist. Give them the obvious one early, so they let their guard down, and then hit them with the REAL one at the 90% mark.
Phantasma played it a bit too safe here. It followed the YA fantasy blueprint a little too closely, and because of that, the "shock" moments landed with a bit of a thud.
Final Thoughts for the Writing Soul
So, why a 3 star? Because it was "fine." It was a fun, quick read with some cool imagery, but it lacked the SOUL and the UNIQUE VOICE that makes a book stay with you for years.
As writers, we should aim to be the book that makes someone stay up until 4 AM because they CANNOT look away. (Mexican Gothic by Silvia Moreno Garcia, DID that for me. AND made me a bit creeped out) We want to write the romance that makes people ache, and the twists that make people throw the book across the room (in a good way!).
Don't be afraid to be "too much."
• Be TOO atmospheric.
• Be TOO emotional.
• Be TOO weird.
Don't settle for the "artificial" feel. Dig deep into your characters' shadows and find the stuff that actually hurts to write. That’s where the magic is.
I’m going to go drink my fourth coffee and try to fix my own "predictable" subplot. Wish me luck! ☕✨
(let me know if you guys wanna see my wips i'm working on, i missed you all!!!)
-rin ✨
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things i wish someone told me before i started writing (and also things i ignored anyway)
okay. writers of tumblr. i’ve compiled a list of things i desperately wish someone had sat me down and said before i started writing, not that i would’ve listened, because i was 14 and powered entirely by hubris, iced coffee, and my wattpad era.
anyway. here we go:
1. stop rewriting chapter one.
i know you think it’ll fix everything. it won’t. it’s a hydra. you cut one head off, two Google Docs appear.
2. your first draft is not a treaty with god.
it can be messy. it can be unhinged. it can have 47 placeholders named “idk something happens.” it’s fine.
3. perfectionism is just fear wearing a blazer.
write badly on purpose. humiliate your draft. it builds character (yours).
4. word count culture is a scam.
you are allowed to write 200 words and call it a day. you are allowed to write 5k and then disappear into the void for three business weeks.
5. google docs autosave WILL betray you.
download backups. then back up your backups. then sacrifice a pen to the writing gods idk.
6. description is not pretty synonyms.
it’s specificity. the torn movie ticket in their pocket. the buzzing light in the hallway. the chipped nail polish on their thumb. write the thing not the aesthetics around the thing.
7. dialogue isn’t two Shakespeare ghosts monologuing at each other.
interruptions. trailing off. people lying. people avoiding the truth. people saying “whatever man.” let it get messy.
8. you don’t need a whole map before you start.
sometimes you just need one character with one problem and the stupidest idea imaginable.
9. reading your old writing will make you cringe but also cry a little because wow you cared so much.
keep that version of you alive.
10. don’t wait to ‘be good.’
you get good by writing the stuff you think is embarrassing.
11. also: nine out of ten times, your “bad” idea is actually the one that goes feral and grows teeth and becomes your WIP.
12. hydrate.
no further explanation.
ok that’s it because if i keep going i’ll start confessing things about the time i wrote a whole novel in 2017 that will never see daylight again.
reply if u relate or if u too have 87 abandoned document fragments in your google drive.
I don’t remember the first thing I ever wrote, but I remember the first time it felt like something real. I was a kid sitting on the floor with a notebook I stole from a school supply closet (sorry to whoever had to reorder those). The paper smelled like dust and cardboard, and the pen barely worked unless I pressed down so hard the letters carved grooves through the page.
But it was the first time the noise in my brain actually went somewhere. Like, every thought finally had a door it could run through instead of ricocheting around in my head all day.
I didn’t think “oh, writing is my calling” or any dramatic chosen-one moment. It was more like an accidental coping mechanism that stuck. The way some people pick up nail-biting or energy drinks. I picked up stories.
For a long time I didn’t show anything to anyone. I wrote in margins, on backs of worksheets, in the notes app that was one cracked screen away from deleting everything forever. Half the time the stories made no sense. They weren’t good. They weren’t even readable. But they made me feel like I could breathe.
And then life hit. The real stuff. The stuff you don’t talk about outside a group chat with one trusted friend and maybe your cat. And I kept writing because it was the only place I could say things without flinching. Not even as myself, usually through characters who didn’t exist, who could take the fall for feelings I didn’t want to claim yet.
Somewhere along the way, it became less about escape and more about… construction. Like building rooms in my head where I could actually live. I wasn’t trying to run away anymore. I was trying to understand.
At some point I started sharing pieces online, thinking maybe three people would read them. And then somehow a little circle formed, people who also hoard stories, who also overthink sentence structure at 2AM, who also have that twitchy urge to write something down before it slips away.
I don’t know when it shifted from “this is my weird hobby” to “this is how I exist in the world,” but it did. Writing is the place I go to make sense of things, or break them, or rebuild them, or at least pretend I know what I’m doing for a few minutes.
And if you’re here reading this, chances are writing grabbed you too. Maybe gently. Maybe by the throat. (Both are valid.)
Either way, welcome. Pull up a chair. We’re all trying to figure it out.
i wrote a villain who was right and it broke my brain
okay so try to picture this: you're deep in your manuscript, probably three coffees past reasonable human consumption, and you're writing this villain monologue. you know the one, where they explain their master plan and you as the author get to flex your "look how evil and wrong they are" muscles.
except.
except they start making points.
good points.
points that have you staring at your screen like "wait… are they… are they RIGHT?"
this happened to me last month and i'm still recovering. my villain, let's call her vera because i'm not ready to say her real name out loud yet... was supposed to be this corrupt politician type who wanted to tear down the magical council system in my fantasy world. classic power-hungry antagonist, right? wrong. (i promise you the plot is good, it sounds basic, but its good.)
turns out the magical council system i'd built was actually a bureaucratic nightmare that perpetuated class inequality and suppressed innovation. vera wasn't power-hungry, she was FRUSTRATED. she'd tried working within the system for decades and watched it fail people over and over again.
and suddenly i'm sitting there at 1am realizing my protagonist has been defending a broken system this entire time just because it's "traditional."
soooo the thing nobody tells you about writing morally complex villains is that sometimes you accidentally write someone who's more ethically consistent than your hero. and that's when the real work begins.
because now you have options:
option one: rewrite vera to be more obviously wrong. add some puppy-kicking or unnecessary cruelty. make her methods so extreme that her valid points get overshadowed. (this is the coward's way out and also boring)
option two: lean into it. let vera be right about the problems even if her solutions are questionable. make your protagonist grapple with the fact that the world they're trying to save actually sucks for a lot of people.
option three: the galaxy brain move, realize that vera isn't actually your villain. she's your protagonist's wake-up call. maybe the real antagonist is the system itself, and both your protag and vera are just people trying to navigate it.
i went with option three and it changed everything. suddenly my story wasn't about good vs evil, it was about different approaches to change. my protagonist had to evolve from "defender of the status quo" to "person who recognizes that sometimes revolution is necessary."
but here's what really broke my brain: i started agreeing with vera more than my protagonist. like, significantly more. to the point where i had to step back and ask myself if i'd accidentally written the wrong person as my main character.
(spoiler alert: i had)
the weirdest part? this made my story SO much better. because when your villain has legitimate grievances, your protagonist can't just sword-fight their way to victory. they have to actually engage with the problems. they have to grow. they have to earn their hero status instead of just being born into it.
so if you find yourself nodding along to your villain's speech, don't panic. you might have just accidentally written a story with actual moral complexity.
just maybe don't tell your beta readers you're team villain until after they finish reading.
i wrote a villain who was right and it broke my brain
okay so try to picture this: you're deep in your manuscript, probably three coffees past reasonable human consumption, and you're writing this villain monologue. you know the one, where they explain their master plan and you as the author get to flex your "look how evil and wrong they are" muscles.
except.
except they start making points.
good points.
points that have you staring at your screen like "wait… are they… are they RIGHT?"
this happened to me last month and i'm still recovering. my villain, let's call her vera because i'm not ready to say her real name out loud yet... was supposed to be this corrupt politician type who wanted to tear down the magical council system in my fantasy world. classic power-hungry antagonist, right? wrong. (i promise you the plot is good, it sounds basic, but its good.)
turns out the magical council system i'd built was actually a bureaucratic nightmare that perpetuated class inequality and suppressed innovation. vera wasn't power-hungry, she was FRUSTRATED. she'd tried working within the system for decades and watched it fail people over and over again.
and suddenly i'm sitting there at 1am realizing my protagonist has been defending a broken system this entire time just because it's "traditional."
soooo the thing nobody tells you about writing morally complex villains is that sometimes you accidentally write someone who's more ethically consistent than your hero. and that's when the real work begins.
because now you have options:
option one: rewrite vera to be more obviously wrong. add some puppy-kicking or unnecessary cruelty. make her methods so extreme that her valid points get overshadowed. (this is the coward's way out and also boring)
option two: lean into it. let vera be right about the problems even if her solutions are questionable. make your protagonist grapple with the fact that the world they're trying to save actually sucks for a lot of people.
option three: the galaxy brain move, realize that vera isn't actually your villain. she's your protagonist's wake-up call. maybe the real antagonist is the system itself, and both your protag and vera are just people trying to navigate it.
i went with option three and it changed everything. suddenly my story wasn't about good vs evil, it was about different approaches to change. my protagonist had to evolve from "defender of the status quo" to "person who recognizes that sometimes revolution is necessary."
but here's what really broke my brain: i started agreeing with vera more than my protagonist. like, significantly more. to the point where i had to step back and ask myself if i'd accidentally written the wrong person as my main character.
(spoiler alert: i had)
the weirdest part? this made my story SO much better. because when your villain has legitimate grievances, your protagonist can't just sword-fight their way to victory. they have to actually engage with the problems. they have to grow. they have to earn their hero status instead of just being born into it.
so if you find yourself nodding along to your villain's speech, don't panic. you might have just accidentally written a story with actual moral complexity.
just maybe don't tell your beta readers you're team villain until after they finish reading.
hey hey, so if this post feels a little chaotic, it’s because i’ve been buried in making a bunch of digital products for my gumroad shop 👀 and now i’m curious: what do you all actually want most when it comes to writer-y digital stuff? like what’s the kind of resource/tool/template/etc. you’d actually grab and use?
i set up a poll below with some options, but if your answer isn’t there, just hit “other” and drop your thoughts in the replies. i’d love to hear what you value most as writers/authors/aspiring authors. thank youuu tumblr 🖤
how my writing goals evolved from 'bestselling author' to 'please just finish one thing' 🎯
remember when you were like 16 and thought you were going to be the next cassandra clare? just me? okay cool cool cool.
i used to have this VISION. i was going to write the next big YA fantasy series that would get optioned for netflix and i'd be interviewed on talk shows wearing perfectly tousled author hair talking about my "writing process" (which was definitely going to involve a lot of aesthetic coffee shops and leather journals).
my goals back then were absolutely unhinged:
write a 7-book series by age 25
get a movie deal
have fans make tiktoks about my characters
retire early on book royalties
maybe date a hot actor who played one of my love interests (this was a serious consideration)
fast forward to now and my current writing goals look like:
finish. literally anything.
write "the end" on something. ANYTHING.
stop opening new documents when i'm 20k words into my current WIP
remember what my protagonist's eye color is supposed to be
figure out what happens in chapter 12 (it's been 8 months)
the evolution was… gradual. and then sudden. like bankruptcy, but for creative ambitions.
it started with the first reality check: writing a book is HARD. not just "ugh this is difficult" hard but "why are there so many words and why do they all have to make sense together" hard. turns out you can't just vibe your way through 80,000 words. WHO KNEW.
then came the second reality check: the publishing industry is a NIGHTMARE. agents want you to have platform before you have a book but you need a book to build platform but you need platform to get an agent to look at your book and it's just capitalism eating its own tail while writers cry in the corner.
but the REAL plot twist was discovering that finishing things is actually… really f*cking difficult? like, starting stories? easy. i can start a story while i'm brushing my teeth. but endings? conclusions? wrapping up loose threads in a satisfying way that doesn't make readers want to throw my book at a wall?
apparently that's a SKILL that requires PRACTICE.
so somewhere between draft 23 of my first novel and the crushing realization that my magic system made no sense, my goals shifted. instead of "change the literary landscape forever," it became "write something my mom would read and not just say 'that's nice honey.'"
and you know what? this evolution isn't failure. it's GROWTH. it's understanding that the real magic isn't in becoming famous—it's in the moment when you type "the end" and mean it. when you've actually told a complete story that makes sense and has characters people might care about.
my current goal is simple: finish one (1) entire novel. not a perfect novel. not a bestselling novel. just a complete story with a beginning, middle, and end that doesn't leave readers confused about what the hell just happened.
and honestly? that feels way more achievable than dating chris hemsworth ever did.
(though if chris is reading this and wants to discuss my worldbuilding over coffee, my DMs are open)
how my writing goals evolved from 'bestselling author' to 'please just finish one thing' 🎯
remember when you were like 16 and thought you were going to be the next cassandra clare? just me? okay cool cool cool.
i used to have this VISION. i was going to write the next big YA fantasy series that would get optioned for netflix and i'd be interviewed on talk shows wearing perfectly tousled author hair talking about my "writing process" (which was definitely going to involve a lot of aesthetic coffee shops and leather journals).
my goals back then were absolutely unhinged:
write a 7-book series by age 25
get a movie deal
have fans make tiktoks about my characters
retire early on book royalties
maybe date a hot actor who played one of my love interests (this was a serious consideration)
fast forward to now and my current writing goals look like:
finish. literally anything.
write "the end" on something. ANYTHING.
stop opening new documents when i'm 20k words into my current WIP
remember what my protagonist's eye color is supposed to be
figure out what happens in chapter 12 (it's been 8 months)
the evolution was… gradual. and then sudden. like bankruptcy, but for creative ambitions.
it started with the first reality check: writing a book is HARD. not just "ugh this is difficult" hard but "why are there so many words and why do they all have to make sense together" hard. turns out you can't just vibe your way through 80,000 words. WHO KNEW.
then came the second reality check: the publishing industry is a NIGHTMARE. agents want you to have platform before you have a book but you need a book to build platform but you need platform to get an agent to look at your book and it's just capitalism eating its own tail while writers cry in the corner.
but the REAL plot twist was discovering that finishing things is actually… really f*cking difficult? like, starting stories? easy. i can start a story while i'm brushing my teeth. but endings? conclusions? wrapping up loose threads in a satisfying way that doesn't make readers want to throw my book at a wall?
apparently that's a SKILL that requires PRACTICE.
so somewhere between draft 23 of my first novel and the crushing realization that my magic system made no sense, my goals shifted. instead of "change the literary landscape forever," it became "write something my mom would read and not just say 'that's nice honey.'"
and you know what? this evolution isn't failure. it's GROWTH. it's understanding that the real magic isn't in becoming famous—it's in the moment when you type "the end" and mean it. when you've actually told a complete story that makes sense and has characters people might care about.
my current goal is simple: finish one (1) entire novel. not a perfect novel. not a bestselling novel. just a complete story with a beginning, middle, and end that doesn't leave readers confused about what the hell just happened.
and honestly? that feels way more achievable than dating chris hemsworth ever did.
(though if chris is reading this and wants to discuss my worldbuilding over coffee, my DMs are open)
