ITS FINALLY DONE, HERE IS MY DESIGN FOR THE 2ND PRIMARCH!!!
Naran Marin, 2nd Legion The Monocerotes
Origin: As an infant his gestation pod landed on the planet of Tlalli, a desert planet orbiting a binary sun system. This planet used to having a thriving biosphere before it was ruined by war and mining during the age of strife. What was left of its inhabitants struggled for survival in an environment bled dry of any natural resource.
When he crash landed in the middle of the night and was discovered by the local tribe it was said that his first cries brought about the miraculous rain. In truth his gestation pod unearthed a massive reservoir of water beneath the ruined dirt. To commemorate such a blessing the locals named him after this miracle, Naran for the lunar eclipse of his arrival, and Marin for the water he brought them. This, as it turned out, would be the first in a long line of feats of extreme luck that became commonplace with Naran around.
Abilities: Extremely strong and fast as most primarchs are Naran actually lacks something they all have; Sight. Despite this Naran is able to navigate his surroundings with infinite ease thanks to his psyker abilities, utilizing methods not totally unlike those of the imperial astropaths. Although not nearly as strong as someone like Magnus, some brothers would later note that with Naran’s luck it often seemed that the obstacles in his path simply jump to avoid him.
This ability is shared to a degree by his legion, The Monocerotes, whose geneseed mutations result in the titular horn and tail (and varying degrees of blindness) that denote their members. Almost preternaturally lucky, it became common practice to have squadrons of the 2nd legion accompany other legions to assist in a faster victory.
The ability which would lead to his eventual capture by Tzeentch is one that even Naran wasn’t aware he possessed: The ability to manipulate the strings of fate. Tzeentch coveted this power as it would mean that all his machinations could be kept in perfect perpetual motion and so he tricked Naran into giving up his freedom as the only way to save his family. Kept trapped in a section of the warp furthest from the influence of any chaos gods Naran now manipulates the strings of fate to an unnatural stasis of war for his people, his eternal company only a single one of his sons.
The emperor struck him from memory for the perceived treason.