Do you think you would be able to get more behind FS if it was written better? I think chemistry wise I would still ship both characters with other ppl but at least i would still want to watch the show. Also I think Barry/Iris is such a better version of the friends to lover trope in which one friend is pining after the other
Oh, definitely! Like, there have certainly been scenes when I’ve gone “awwww, maybe I can ship thiiiiiiiis nope they ruined it.” Honestly, three things would have to change/have been different for me to get behind fs:
the lead up to them getting together. he was a jerk about her not returning his feelings and the fact that EVERYONE was pushing Jemma to accept/return them will never stop making me uncomfortable
LET THEM HAVE ARCS OUTSIDE OF EACH OTHER. I’ve ranted about this before, but...let’s take a look at s5, hm?
Jemma was enslaved by Kasius. Seems like something that’d be pretty traumatizing, especially with the whole sensory deprivation thing, but nope. Fitz shows up, she’s freed, and the whole thing is brushed aside minus a few offhand references on Jemma’s part. (and the team, aside from Daisy, was TOTALLY UNCONCERNED about her the whole time and STILL HASN’T ASKED what she went through, but I’m not sure we can blame that on fs.)
Fitz was in prison for six months?? Alone??? After watching his entire team disappear before his very eyes???? And was so desperate to get back to them that he just LOCKED HIMSELF IN CRYO FOR SEVENTY YEARS????? is this ringing a bell for anyone?
and no, okay, there’s even more but I’m stopping there because I’m getting too angry
the point is, as soon as the two of them are together, any emotional fall-out and/or logical follow-through from the super traumatic things they go through is immediately dropped. see also: Jemma undercover in Hydra, Fitz’s brain damage, JEMMA’S SEARCH FOR A WAY BACK TO WILL, WHICH GOT IMMEDIATELY PASSED OVER TO FITZ SO HE COULD PROVE WHAT A GREAT GUY HE WAS BY SEARCHING FOR THE WOMAN HE LOVES’ LOVE INTEREST
......which brings me to my next point: stop. telling. me. how. much. Fitz. loves. Jemma. and. how. much. he. would. do. for. her.
we do not need a dramatic recounting of all the, frankly, moronic ways he’s proved that he’s willing to die for her EVERY TIME they’re in a bit of danger
we DO need some acknowledgement that he’s done really stupid things and other people have suffered for it
this is not a positive thing (SACRIFICING THE WORLD IS NOT ROMANTIC. TRYING TO COMMIT SUICIDE BECAUSE YOU “CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT” THE PERSON YOU LOVE IS A BAD THING.) and Jemma should not present them as anything but negative.
like, let’s be honest here. Jemma was willing to DIE and BE TORTURED (*cough*which she got no emotional or even physical fall-out from*cough*) to keep the portal from opening. FITZ couldn’t stand to hear her being hurt and therefore led Hydra on Maveth. Hive came back, people--including Lincoln!--died, and it all could’ve been avoided.
Sooooooo, this kinda turned into a rant. Sorry, nonnie! tl;dr I could ship fs if it were written better, but at this point the ship has totally sunk for me. It’s way too late for the writers to fix all the many, many things they did wrong.