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I got inspired by @bangermash Dark world Alpha and Beta kids. So I redrawn her's? his? their's? Bec Noir fight art. I made him the secret boss of Chapter 1 instead of Jevil. I also made him the ace of spades card in the light world. The other three are of course aces of the other three card suits.

When fighting him on pacifist route you have to get rid of the Corrupted Shades on his face since that's where he gets his power from and what changed him into this form. When defeating him aggressively you get the Slick Saber and Corrupted Shades and on a pacifist route you get the Spades Hat and the Corrupted Shades.

Now I should mention before I show what the description that I did change the family tree of the kids and guardians. Like the Guardians are not the alt version of the alpha and beta kids. The Guardians actually their parents/grandparents and the Alpha and and Beta kids are sibling's/cousin's. If you want to know how they are related I'll tell you later.

The Corrupted Shades a key item who's text reads: Shades corrupted by frustration and jealously of a lightner.

They can be uncorrupted into Bro's Shades who's description reads: An old pair of shades from the Strider brothers "Big Bro". It's too small to fit him anymore.

It inspired a lot other ideas for things like:

The idea that the oreginal 12 Trolls being Darkners that you find in other dark worlds they are two per chapter and you can recruit them but somevof them need another Troll to be recruited before hand. I don't know where I would put all of them but for those I do:

-Karkat and Terezi in Chapter 1

-Gamzee and Sollux in Chapter 2

-Vriska because she's a spotlight hog and Kanaya in Chapter 3

-Equius and Nepeta in Chapter 5

-Aradia and Tavros in Chapter 4

-And Feferi' and Eridan in Chapter 6

Now the light world forms of the Trolls: they are clay beads of a friendship bracelet.

Jade being a darkner similar Gerson, with the difference of not being dead. She disappeared 4 years without anybody knowing what happened to her. She is a soul in the light world, and when asked she has no clue where her body is and how she got into this state. But, what she does know is a vague prophecy about four heroes defeating the Heart of hatred and banishing it's curse? But unlike Ralsei she doesn't know the entire prophecy.

The Alpha kids have their own dark world adventures at the same time as the Betas. The first dark world would be the same but the Beta kids go towards Card kingdom and the Alpha kids go towards the other locked classroom. The other Chapters have them go through other dark worlds but they would share the same Chapter 7 Dark world.

At the beginning you choose if you want to be a boy or girl. This would make you play ether as John or Jane.

And for who would be the bosses and town inhabitants I only have a few ideas: For bosses:

Black Queen as chapter 1 main boss

Black King as chapter 2 main boss

Bec Noir as chapter 1 secret boss

Gamzee as chapter 2 secret boss

And thats it.

For inhabitans I'm useing the dancestors as back and side caracters:

Aranea is the school teacher for obvious reasons

Kankri is a cop because it would be funny

Meenah is also a cop because would be funny

Kurloz is the town mute priest

Cronus, Damara, Rufiohit and Horuss work at the pizzeria because would be funny

Meulin, Porrim, Latula work at the diner and Meulin is still deaf

Mituna brain is fried but supports his gf.

Kurloz's muteness, Meulin deafness and Mituna brain damege is caused by the same accident.

They would be humans and would not be the exact same characters as in homestuck, for example Kurloz had a dream of becoming a broadway star before the accident, Mituna wouldn't be… whatever you call that in homestuck, but do think that post-electric shock syndrome would make sense, Meenah would be less murders and more I'll put you in a hospital cop.

Now for the guardians:

Nana, Grandpa Harley and Grandma English are siblings.

Nana, Grandpa are dead.

Nana has twins. These twins are Dad Egbert and Dad Crocker.

John and Jane are cousins.

Jade's and Jake's parents left them both on Grandpa's doorstep.

Jake and Jade are siblings and grandchildren of Grandpa.

Grandma traveled most of her life and never married. She hasretired from traveling and now has a flower shop.

Mom Lalonde and Bro Strider are a divorced couple

Bro Strider is Bi. This is so this makes sense and to differentiate from Dirk (Dirk is still gay)

Dirk and Dave are twins (15) and Roxy is the oldest (17) as Rose is second oldest (16)

Mom gets the girls, Bro gets tjhe boys

Calliope and Caliborn are new kids around the block.

They are also twins.

Calliope is the nice on and a complete fanfic nerd and a artist

Caliborn is still a dick and a complete MMA fan and a artist

Doc. Scratch is the Mayor of the town. He's an older man and Jake's custodian after Grandpa's death.

Any thoughts?

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Made another one. This one is Twisted Gamzee. To get him you need to meet him in a back alley dumpster in the moss room. He will come out of the dumpster when interacted with the dumpster. He will make himself all friendly like to John, Gamzee will ask John to help him find something in the basement of Kings Fortress and will mention that he obtained the information from an unknown individual. He will join your the Key Items even if you don't want to.

Now to get to the basement you will have to help Sollux to find something to help you get rid of The Black King. Sollux finds out through hacking that there's an artifact of power in The Black King Fortress basement. This artifact of power is the same thing that Gamzee is looking for. When you unlock the basment with the help of Sollux, you will have a wall blocking the way to the artifact. With the help of Sollux you will unlock the switch to lowers the wall. When you get to the room with this artifact of power, Sollex will just look at it and immediately see that the power it would give you, is worth what that thing will do to you. When he leaves, Gamzee will leave your Key Items and thank you for getting him here and will ask you to leave. When you exit the room there a a blast of darkness and a roar. After your sight returns John is standing on a platform in a void of smiling masks and crying faces. The rest of the team will then run to John and ask him whats what is happening, just to be interrupted by laughter as a carousel appears.And on one of its standing figures of a capricorn Twisted Gamzee with rides in and with a roaring cacophony of laughter and sobes battle begins.

The Dark Carnival has arrived.

To defeat him passively you need to use cry or laugh acton to attract one of the masks to attack. When a mas attacks you shoot back with the Yellow soul. His mercy meater will always end at 99%. At 99% you use the X Pull act to pull of both the masks. Defeating him passively will grant you ''Holy'' Garment and Corrupted Mask Badge A and B.

''Sacred'' Garment: Questionable lower body garment that makes all beings uncomfortable.

To defeat him aggressively you need to beat him up. Defeating him aggressively will grant you Head Juggler and Corrupted Mask Badge A and B.

Head Juggler: A big bowling pin covered in many colorful splats.

But to recruit Gamzee you need a the Purple Piece item to be used at 99% on his mercy meater. This will end the battle, the masks will fall off and Gamzee will return to his normal form and will speak iN HiS NoRmAl wAy. You will get the Corrupted Mask Badge A and B, but he will give you the choice to get the ''Sacred'' Garment or Head Juggler.

The Purple Piece is hidden in a room in between a room with a :o) graffiti.

Corrupted Mask Badge A: half of a broken theater badge. The comedy mask painted on its surface conceals a strong feeling of despair.

Corrupted Mask Badge B: half of a broken theater badge. The tragedy mask painted on its surface conceals a strong feeling of desperate hope.

The fixed and uncorrupted form is just called The Theater Badge who's description reads: The old fixed badge with a comedy and tragedy masks on it belonging to Father Kurloz. Was broken in the accident at the towns libraries computer room. It feels like broken dreams.