#deltastuck

[chibibiblr]

>Be the nice girl

Another monster girl stands in her very festive room. And of course, this girl's name is... hey, wait what are you doing? >Enter name against the narrator's wishes

Kringle Fucker??? What's wrong with you, look you made her sad. >Enter her ACTUALL name

There ya go, look at that smile. Why would you ever do anything to make this sweet girl upset? Anyways, >PROCEED start over | previous

[fanta-flavored-liver]

Carol Holiday as Bro Strider in that one scene

Ignore how fucked up the katana looks lmao

[moonglide]

Your name is KRIS DREEMURR. You are FIFTEEN years old. You used to have a number of INTERESTS, but you have since determined that you don’t DESERVE them. Your skin is not BRIGHT YELLOW, because you don’t have JAUNDICE, although you’re not quite sure why one might expect your skin to BE that color. Today has very little significance to anyone except YOURSELF and A FEW OTHERS, but it will soon have GREAT significance to several people BEYOND the previously mentioned few. 

PROTAGONISM is not a trait that particularly SUITS YOU, and any story in a medium such as this one where the NARRATOR regularly reveals the FOCUS CHARACTER’S INNER THOUGHTS wouldn’t be able to FOCUS on you for any significant LENGTH OF TIME and still retain any sense of mystery without being FRUSTRATING to WRITE and READ. Instead, this story will generally be from the perspective of your CLASSMATES, specifically those that have been TIED to you through the THREADS OF FATE, the WHIMS OF PROPHECY, and the WILL OF ANOTHER.

The Google Doc is empty. Wind skims the void keeping fandoms apart, as if grazing the hollow of a cut flower, or, say, a forced, shitty nod to Homestuck’s intro. A familiar note is produced. It’s the one Hyperfixation plays to keep its instrument in tune. It is the narrator’s fifth intellectual property that they will obsess over, and as with all four preceding it, it comes with a fan work that they will almost certainly inevitably abandon, even if they try to pre-empt that by making it a “side hustle”. They have a feeling it’s going to be a long several years.

>Kris, be the reindeer girl instead.

[tempelbeast]

I got inspired by @bangermash Dark world Alpha and Beta kids. So I redrawn her's? his? their's? Bec Noir fight art. I made him the secret boss of Chapter 1 instead of Jevil. I also made him the ace of spades card in the light world. The other three are of course aces of the other three card suits.

When fighting him on pacifist route you have to get rid of the Corrupted Shades on his face since that's where he gets his power from and what changed him into this form. When defeating him aggressively you get the Slick Saber and Corrupted Shades and on a pacifist route you get the Spades Hat and the Corrupted Shades.

Now I should mention before I show what the description that I did change the family tree of the kids and guardians. Like the Guardians are not the alt version of the alpha and beta kids. The Guardians actually their parents/grandparents and the Alpha and and Beta kids are sibling's/cousin's. If you want to know how they are related I'll tell you later.

The Corrupted Shades a key item who's text reads: Shades corrupted by frustration and jealously of a lightner.

They can be uncorrupted into Bro's Shades who's description reads: An old pair of shades from the Strider brothers "Big Bro". It's too small to fit him anymore.

It inspired a lot other ideas for things like:

The idea that the oreginal 12 Trolls being Darkners that you find in other dark worlds they are two per chapter and you can recruit them but somevof them need another Troll to be recruited before hand. I don't know where I would put all of them but for those I do:

-Karkat and Terezi in Chapter 1

-Gamzee and Sollux in Chapter 2

-Vriska because she's a spotlight hog and Kanaya in Chapter 3

-Equius and Nepeta in Chapter 5

-Aradia and Tavros in Chapter 4

-And Feferi' and Eridan in Chapter 6

Now the light world forms of the Trolls: they are clay beads of a friendship bracelet.

Jade being a darkner similar Gerson, with the difference of not being dead. She disappeared 4 years without anybody knowing what happened to her. She is a soul in the light world, and when asked she has no clue where her body is and how she got into this state. But, what she does know is a vague prophecy about four heroes defeating the Heart of hatred and banishing it's curse? But unlike Ralsei she doesn't know the entire prophecy.

The Alpha kids have their own dark world adventures at the same time as the Betas. The first dark world would be the same but the Beta kids go towards Card kingdom and the Alpha kids go towards the other locked classroom. The other Chapters have them go through other dark worlds but they would share the same Chapter 7 Dark world.

At the beginning you choose if you want to be a boy or girl. This would make you play ether as John or Jane.

And for who would be the bosses and town inhabitants I only have a few ideas: For bosses:

Black Queen as chapter 1 main boss

Black King as chapter 2 main boss

Bec Noir as chapter 1 secret boss

Gamzee as chapter 2 secret boss

And thats it.

For inhabitans I'm useing the dancestors as back and side caracters:

Aranea is the school teacher for obvious reasons

Kankri is a cop because it would be funny

Meenah is also a cop because would be funny

Kurloz is the town mute priest

Cronus, Damara, Rufiohit and Horuss work at the pizzeria because would be funny

Meulin, Porrim, Latula work at the diner and Meulin is still deaf

Mituna brain is fried but supports his gf.

Kurloz's muteness, Meulin deafness and Mituna brain damege is caused by the same accident.

They would be humans and would not be the exact same characters as in homestuck, for example Kurloz had a dream of becoming a broadway star before the accident, Mituna wouldn't be… whatever you call that in homestuck, but do think that post-electric shock syndrome would make sense, Meenah would be less murders and more I'll put you in a hospital cop.

Now for the guardians:

Nana, Grandpa Harley and Grandma English are siblings.

Nana, Grandpa are dead.

Nana has twins. These twins are Dad Egbert and Dad Crocker.

John and Jane are cousins.

Jade's and Jake's parents left them both on Grandpa's doorstep.

Jake and Jade are siblings and grandchildren of Grandpa.

Grandma traveled most of her life and never married. She hasretired from traveling and now has a flower shop.

Mom Lalonde and Bro Strider are a divorced couple

Bro Strider is Bi. This is so this makes sense and to differentiate from Dirk (Dirk is still gay)

Dirk and Dave are twins (15) and Roxy is the oldest (17) as Rose is second oldest (16)

Mom gets the girls, Bro gets tjhe boys

Calliope and Caliborn are new kids around the block.

They are also twins.

Calliope is the nice on and a complete fanfic nerd and a artist

Caliborn is still a dick and a complete MMA fan and a artist

Doc. Scratch is the Mayor of the town. He's an older man and Jake's custodian after Grandpa's death.

Any thoughts?

[littl3d0ll-art]

Deltastuck but the monsters are still monsters

[taikatis]

Another redraw/ panel edit

wasnt sure whether to make gaster doc scratch or lord english but I don't want to edit any panels with LE and the player being lord english fits. And the holiday sisters being the megidos is very intentional.

[theythemmer]

me and the bad bitch i pulled by eating chalk

[5-htagonist]

SOME! classpect stuff from @oddthedreamer 's whiteboard. i will probably change my mind when ch 5 comes LOL