So I got some good constructive criticism on the comic and here’s some changes I will make before going to page 3
Slightly thicker lines
Slightly thicker text
Less background stuff! And clutter, they will still be the same mostly just less shading and painting than there was
The stylistic changes that aren’t the backgrounds:
A little more emotion and movement :)
Everyone will still look the same besides a small detail where Urms hat will now be a solid red color instead of a pattern and Blonney will also now have a tiny knobby tail with two little spots, Blonney will also still have arms but they show up when needed for comedic value
By the way I would enjoy my comic being mildly interactive! Feel free to drops asks in the box













