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The most special orange bb boy <3

He's an Abyssinian mix, but unlike the real deal he darkens (not lightens) with age. He begins his life as a little spark. Like a sprawling wildfire that dims and slowly fades away while its powerful existance is coming to an end...

Design info: at this stage you and any other Clan cat can clearly see his soft housepet feauters: the small delicate paws, little nose, soft thin kitty fur and overall roundnes. Not even counting how small and nimble his frame is compered to the bulk of a true Forest-dweller.

Both Ravenpaw and Graypaw were taller than him as apprentices, and not much changed as they aged either xd!

*(I'm gonna make more versions of him as the rewrite story progresses)

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Hi! I liked so much how you do with some details Bluestar Design, (and the design to!) So, Do you can draw Lionheart next?, please? He is my fav, pleaseee.

Yup, of course!!!! sorry for the long wait, I was pretty busy with a map that I'm planning to post in the near future :D

Sire Lionheart the Brave- Warrior, Guardian Chef and Deputy of ThunderClan.

Huge tom, one of the biggest, if not the biggest in all of the Thunder at his time (well, Tigerclaw is taller, but Lionheart is definitly heftier then him, his mass being compoused of ripping muscles, dense bones and an unbelively thick coat) Given his mass and the fact that his mane is almost inpenetrable for cat claws he became the first line of protection in battles. His death crushed not only poor Frostfur (their love was of the most pure and beautyful one you can imagine) but the entierity of ThunderClan by how unfair it was. Lionheart the Brave, such incredibly skilled in battle, honest and pure of heart, a sworn-claw of his father Star Sunfall and later his childhood friend Star Bluemoon. There was no better cat to earn this title. But he has fallen nontheless, killed unchivalrously not by claws like StarClan preached every good warrior must eventually meet their end, but by knife, sloughtered like a prey-animal. Wolfstep who has delivered the final blow, when ShadowClan cats swarmed Lionheart like rats later called himself Wolfstep the Lionslayer, basking in twisted glory and valor of his win, but there is no glory in such a death….and the souls of cats who raise their knifes againsed other fellow Clan members, not in the act of desperate self defense, but with the intention to kill will never see the light of Stars.

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Though only Speckletail and Smallears really know that Lionheart is not the trure son of Star Sunfall, the truth could still be seen in his feauteres: his tiny ears, really sleek fur and tendency to gain an insolating layer of fat all point at him being in part a RiverClan cat, and this is true, hes a quarterblood since Smallears's true father was of the River cats. But any notion of this fact was imediatly shushed by Sunfall, he would not let any cat gossip about his pure ThunderClan kits nor will he let anycat think that he's a cuckold. Well, and by the time Sunfall became a Star there was no doupt in his kits parentage. But if even Star Sunfall suspected something he never sheared his worries with Speckletail, only spent more time with his wife to recompensate her him being emotionally distant, witch might have lead to the gossiped cheating.

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Lionheart loved dencing, and despite his size he was suprisengly good at it as well, but it wasn't always like this. He was an incredibly skilled fighter and know all of the battle moves but on the earthen floor of the camp he was green like an apprentice, this olny changed when Frostfur tought him how to channel his streangths into something more delicate and elegant but equally powerfull. They become the best pair dancers in ThunderClan, swirling in synchronised movments and flashing with the colourfull bone and wood beads they made together, becoming the main point of focus at any MidGreenleaf Festival or other simillar dance-centered holydays. They spend long afternoons together grooming and brushing his long, dense fur and mane, braiding it to keep his coat clean and free of burrs and to prevent Lionheart from getting cought by branches while traversing the underbrush during patrols. And of course to keep him neat, tidy and presentable just like Frostfur liked it. His little bone earring is also of their joined making, Frostfur has a matching one. The only things they didn't made together is the little star he often wears on his chest, as it's a gift from Star Sunfall that he gave him at his deathbed (it's a family jewel passed from generation to generation), and the roughly ball-shaped ,unpainted wooden bead that hanges on nettle cortage from lionhearts tail, it was made by poor Featherpaw, his first apprentice, who sadly never made it to the end of his training.

Family info:

Parents: Speckletail & Star Sunfall, Smallears (bio dad)

Siblings: Goldenflower, Snowkit, Mistlekit

Wife: Frostfur

kits: Cinderpelt, Brackenfur, Brightheart, Thornclaw

Education: mentor-> Swiftbreeze.

Apprentieces-> Featherpaw, Graystripe, Fireheart (temporary)

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Queen <3

Bluemoon/star : former warrior and now Leader of ThunderClan.

Name meanings: Blue- she has a bluish coat and striking blue eyes. -moon: it's both a case of legacy naming as well as a form of apology for the stupidity of the Battle of the Herbs on Pinestars part.

-Her whole life, first as an apprentice, later warrior, deputy and now leader Bluestar never wanted to be sentimental about the loved ones she lost; -" It's just part of a warriors life, isnt it?"- her Clanmates always said. But she couldn't make herself to just forget and move on... so she picked moonflowers; the same ones her mother loved so dearly, and adored her fur with them as she did. From this moment onwards she always has flowers as an accesory...

Sometimes when she looks at all the little trinkets that she sleeps with in her nest: the flowers, her sister's earring, a fish bone Oakheart gave her, and some of her kits old toys that she never come around to bury... She bitterly wonders:-"I was never allowed to grive properly, was I?"

Design info: she has a typical Forest-dwellers build- tall strong frame, wide shoulders, big paws, pronounsed nose bridge, tufted ears and a bit rough and 'wild' fur texture. But her bluish coloration is a bit unusual...

Family info:

Parents-> Moonflower and Stormtail

Sister-> Snowstorm (fur)

Half-Siblings-> Cricketleap and Featherpaw

Partner-> Oakheart

Kits-> Mistyfoot/star, Stonefur and Mosskit

Other notable kin-> Goosefeather (uncle), Whitestorm (nephew) and Frostfur (niece)

Education:

Mentors: Stonepelt (retierd), Sunfall/star

Apprentices: Frostfur, Runningwind and Fireheart/star

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(this info is a subject of change, if I come up with some better stuff XD)

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Star Leopardfur of RiverClan (She/Her masc lesbian, she deviates a bit from traditional RiverClan beauty standards, presenting herself as more masculine then femmine which is the aestetic expectation for all River dwellers regardles of sex. She picked up this "alternative" look from Piketooth the husband of Shimmerpelt who halped Mudfur raising her after Brightsky'es death)

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Snowstorm: a promising young warrior and snow hunter of ThunderClan.

Name meanings: Snow- she has thick snow-white fur, that was even brighter when she was a kit. - Storm: strong, skillfull warriors, who overpower their enemies like a storm does. often really energetic/active.

Bluemoon was grooming her fur next to the fresh-kill pile, when suddenly her sister Snowstorm approached her. -"Would you like to go for a walk with me?"- the white molly asked.

***.

After they have walked in silence for quite some time now, surrounded by the beautiful and vast ThunderClan forest, Snowstorm finally broke the silence

-"I know that you and Thistleclaw aren't really getting along recently, but we have been mates for quite a bit now, and we have been talking and uhhh...- she paused for a bit, looking into her sisters eyes. Having gained more confidence now, she said:-We've desided to get merried. And I want to ask you something: will you give us your blessings Bluemoon?"

Bluemoon was dumpstrucked. Merried? so Early? ... with Thistleclaw??? She couldn't belive her own ears. How could her sister be such a mouse-brain? She know she was mates with him but it have been bearly six moons since they got together. Usually coupes wait longer before they deside on such an important thing. Robinwing and Fuzzypelt have been waiting for a full seasons cycle before they were absolutely certain.

-"Don't you think it's a bit early?, You don't really know him so well, how could you be so certain that he's the only cat for you? You haven't even lived through any major event of your life with him yet. How could you know he won't leave you in need?"- the fur along Bluemoon's back had involontarly risen.

-"I know you don't like him, but you could at least pretend that you care about my happines!"-. there were wet, shiny sparks of tears forming in the corners of her sisters azure-blue eyes now. She was lashing her tail from left to right: -"I'm gonna merry Thisteclaw no metter if you like it or not!".- and with this words Snowstorm turned around and trotted deeper into the forest, not even casting a last glance at her sister. Bluemoon felt as if someone poured sand into her throat, she couldn't say anything. Thistleclaw cannot be trusted, but how can she bash it into her sisters head when she's so blineded by love?

Design info: (c. 2yrs 6moons at the time of death) she has a typical Forest-dwellers build- tall strong frame, wide shoulders, big paws, pronounsed nose bridge, tufted ears and a bit rough and 'wild' fur texture. She also got the mane from her mother; a mane isn't a feature every pure-blood Forest-dweller has, but it's a nice addition and cats who have it are considered hot. (the bigger/denser the mane the more beautyfull the cat is)

Thanks to her white fur she's a snow hunter which means that more time and care was put into her hunting training sessions then the usuall stuff. Snow hunters are extreamly prised in the Clan society since in leaf-bare they provide over 25% of catches that their Clan makes. losing one is a tragedy...

She has a matching earring with Thistleclaw, they made them together from prey-bones short after Thistlclaw's naming ceremony.

Family info:

Parents-> Moonflower and Stormtail

Sister-> Bluemoon/star

Half-Siblings-> Cricketleap and Featherpaw

Husband-> Thistleclaw

Kits-> Whitestorm and Frostfur

Other notable kin-> Goosefeather (uncle), Mistyfoot/star (niece), Mosskit (niece), Stonefur (nephew)

Education:

Mentor: Sparrowpelt (Half-tail)

Apprentices: none

I don't really like when people portray her as a sweet little baby, and her relationship with Thistleclaw as a generic "I can change him", "she was so perfect, and now she died so I'm gonna start to acting like a xenofobic assaulter now"

she wasn't perfect: she was a bold, rebellious young warrior with a great future unfolding before her, and she picked up a taste for a good fight from her boyfriend. She pirced her ear even though it was seen as a faux pas at such a young age in ThunderClan. She wasn't as xenofobic and bloodthirsty like Thistleclaw and she certainly wasn't even close to being a pdf (and if she lived she would kick his ass), but she was stubborn and held great pride in defending her clan's borders.... (whitch proved fatal...)

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I think that she and Thistleclaw (in his youth) would be the type of couple who drives a Cadillac while listening to super loud music; and jump over fences to hang out on someones private terrain. (btw she's a the Clash fan)

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(this info is a subject of change, if I come up with some better stuff XD)

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Into the Wild/the Prophecy Begins- Boar's rewrite teaser:

In a forest whose decades-spanning history bursts at the seams with stories of cuntless conflicts and battles for survival, the trees sing ballads foretellling the coming of a war so great it will reshape the fundations of the Clans forever.

While ShadowClans teritory demends are growing out of control, their leader a mad, cruel tom known as Star Broken-tail, comes up with a plan to finally get what he wants.

The future of ThunderClan in unsertain. After a harsh leaf-bare that had left her Clan grieving the loss of their clanmates decimated by a visious ilness known as greencough, Star Bluemoon, leader of the Thunder, is in a dire need of finding a solution to get her Clan back on its paws before the Sunningrocks skirmish season starts again. But while she's busy with that, she has a wierd feeling that the past she had burried long ago finally catches up to her…

In RiverClan Star Crooked-jaw is torn between simple cat courtesy and taking advantage of a possibility that can assure his Clans survival for many moons to come.

The vast moorlands that house WindClan, had never seem so quiet before.

In the Town, bordering the Shadow territory, rumors are spreading that a mysterious powerful cult is kidnapping and conscribing housepets into its ranks.

And amidst all of this a young housepet known as Rusty haunted by strange dreams of the Outside and whispering starry-furred cats, steps out of the safety of his owners garden and sets out into the unknown, dark woods of the Park…

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Well, I'm not experienced in writing, especially in English, so this teaser was the most poetic thing I could come up with xd, but I'm really proud with how it turned out!

So, it's besically the plot or more accuratly the rough sceatch of what I want my ItW to look like. I will probably write some changed scenes from the books here or on ao3- but only when I'll develop my writing skills more.

I will be posting character designs according to the state they're in as the story unfolds. But while I'd be doing that I also want to make a post or two about the forest territories, and the uniqe Clan fetures (prolly with drawings), the culture/lore stuff I'll post alonge the way. But for now thanks you for reading this and stay tuned!