Dschehuti here. Nice fix fic prompt! I especially like how you really didn't limit yourself to fixing Gou, but went to construct an entirely new story around their existing flaws. My own wishes for Gou so far were sticking closer to the story I think Gou wants to tell. Up to Satoko meeting Featherine all would be the same, but when brought back to 1983 Satoko would have to deal with the tragedy triggers of her friends the hard way, no easy shortcut to Matsuriyabashi.
(cont’d) ... So Satoko would genuinely try to aim at a happy ending for herself and Rika where they work their issues out, but every time she tries one of their friends goes crazy and murder happens. After several such loops Satoko would be so worn down that she essentially gives up on reaching the future and is happy just keeping Rika in 1983, blissfully unaware that Rika is also looping and trying to fix things. Of course I guess that wouldn't quite end with a world so broken all they can do is leave..
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aaaaaaaaaaaaa omg you liked my fix it idea! Yay!! And yes, it may have started as just a short “what if” about Satoko still having the Syndrome, but partway through it also turned into “how can I expand on Satoko and Rika’s flaws from OG Higurashi in a way that leads to Gou?”
But ooh, I really like your fix it idea too! That works much better with the existing Higurashi lore that the Matsuribayashi Fragment was so special and unique. But of course poor Satoko wouldn’t know that, and oops, now they’re both back in looping hell. *insert Eua cackle*
I also find that a much more satisfying way for Satoko to learn the patterns of Rika’s loops. Her merely watching them was rather underwhelming, but her actually living them… oof. Yeah, I could see her giving up and passively accepting 1983 as the end like Rika did for a while.
Though hm, you’re right that the real problem is where Gou is all going. In your version, Satoko isn’t the culprit any more, just the reason Rika is looping again. But when Satoko eventually learns Rika’s side of things, I imagine there might be some angry words, but I can’t see them seriously fighting each other a la Lambda and Bern. And once they team up, it’s just a retread of the original ending, maybe with a few more Miotsukushi-esque bumps for them to overcome together rather than all the miracles lining up like in Matsuribayashi.
...might be interesting to revisit this idea once Gou is over, and we can actually talk about the end goal!













