#epiosde 14

[maroonwithonem]

Ooo we getting Kyo backstory? He's been tense for the past couple episodes, but Yuki's been the focus so it's been a background thing. Still, nice to see it coming around to him

[criticalwrote]

BETAREADING: nemisis1509′s “Shopping and Shipping” scene

Much thanks to @ethantherenegade for these notes!

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Edited sections are bolded.

Once again a very good job. There are a few spelling errors, but nothing too serious. The second edit, the second “oh” has now been italicized, however this may not reflect the episode itself, as it has been some time since I’ve seen it. From a writing standpoint however, it separates the two “oh"s. Lastly, there is a bolded question mark next to "hale” in the third edited segment. I’m not sure what the original author had intended in that sentence, and if that word was autocorrected or misspelled.

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~Vox Machina walks the streets of Emon once more, after a session with the Council and the Sovereign of Tal'Dorei to decide the fate of the Horn of Orcus. Replenishment of the items used far beneath the Mines of Kraghammer is at the top of the party’s list, and they make their way to Avidar’s Promenade in the midafternoon under a warm sun, to a familiar, low but wide building.~

 “Oh. Oh. You’ve returned.”

“Gilmore.” Vax let his happiness to the see the other man hale(?) and well show in his voice. “You glorious bastard, how have you been?”

Vax simply arched his eyebrows and waited until Gilmore’s spluttered excuses were interrupted by Tiberius’ voice; Vax knew what he’d heard, and the Rogue was more that willing to wait until Gilmore stopped squirming and realize he was caught.

Gilmore gathered himself for a moment. “We have been doing marvelously; trade has opened up wide in Emon. We’ve had travellers from all over Tal'Dorei and beyond. It’s incredible.”

 “But yes; I’ve taken on two more Arcanists, and we’ve been in the process of designing some more interesting, wondrous items. We’ve stocked up on our available items; we’re doing quite well for ourselves.”

   “Very well,” Gilmore repeated. “Sherry!”

The party watched the half-elven woman’s shoulder drop as she reponded in a toneless voice. “Yes, Gilmore.”

[fiveshotspodcast-blog]

“I’ve always been very resentful of the fact that something I have no control over would make people uncomfortable. So with this song it was more of a ‘fuck you’ thing - I was hoping other people would be uncomfortable for once, not me.” -Mike Hadreas