finnickohdare replied to your post: would any of you like to beta the first 50 pages...
"Mara White always did what she was told; growing up in Astoren lead to no rule breaking and no second guessing. But after she wakes up six feet under, things are not always as they seem.
Alexis Jakov is the princess she never wanted to be. Ruling a kingdom was never in her nature; all she wants to do is escape. She never trusted anyone, especially her family. But after she gets tossed out of her throne, she'll cling to anyone she can find.
What happens when these two girls cross paths? The one who never trusted and the one who trusted too much. and what do they not know about their fathers and their destinies?"
hahah that's a really crappy summary but yeah :)