WOW. I've been going through the demo, and the fling scene with Hermanus... Just wow. I made a save to be able to read both the dom and sub versions, thinking "well, if we sub, he fucks us, and we dom we fuck him" and then? Then! There is options for Hermanus fucking us, to penetrate him instead, or exchanging oral in one order or the other, with, I'd say ample, variations based on whether our MC is domming or subbing! It was insane! And so well-written too!!! The fun, the enthusiasm, the eagerness and the trust wrapped in a wonderful, heartwarming ambiance. And the dirty talk? The "use me, please/let me use you" while bottoming, the overall word choice. It was gorgeous. Such a pleasant surprise. Even if you've touched it up, I can't believe (figure of speech) that that was your first time writing smut. It was just so good! It took me years (and also a more developed frontal cortex, sure) to be able to write like that myself! And I say that with excitement and more pleasant surprise. I'm so proud of you! For all of it. The work, the skill, the options. Of course, for everything else you've written, too, the ambiance is immersive, and entrancing, definitely pulls you in, but I wanted to focus on that so. Anyway! Just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed it a lot, and that it was more than great. Best of luck!!!
You're making me blush, anon. Thank you <3 It took me days to actually write it the way I wanted and add all the variations to it, but I'm very happy with how it turned out, and I'm extremely happy people like it so much. :)