by ArchangelBBQ/ @vzyfny
Manga/Anime/Novel based
Completed. 1613 words
Falling asleep next to Mai under the cover of darkness. These nights are never easy for them, but they're always together - never alone.
Who said fluff and Naru couldn’t go well together? The author brilliantly shows us with this oneshot that whoever it was, they were wrong.
The beautiful and detailed imagery of this vignette illustrates a usual night for Naru and Mai. Don’t be fooled by the quietness of the scene: every word, every sentence, every detail are significant and form a subtle portrayal of the couple relationship.
The author manages to convey through small gestures and dazed thoughts the feelings of care and worry and love shared by the protagonist, and does the prowess of respecting their characteristics.
Despite its shortness, this vignette is packed with raw emotion and makes you feel what fluff means.
If you still haven’t run to ffnet to read this beauty, take my friendly advice and do it. Now. You won’t be disappointed.
Review by GHHQ Staff Reviewer @frenchcirce
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